News - May 23, 2013 (2 days ago)

Hey guys, regardless of what you may have seen proposed in the News recently, our Tag What You See rule is still unchanged from this here. Remember, the only recent change was to allow using external information for tagging character NAMES only, NOT gender or virtually anything else. PLEASE READ AND UNDERSTAND THE RULE! Thanks! :)

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The coloring in panel 6 is fucked up.

bluebackground said:
The coloring in panel 6 is fucked up.

The vagina is more detailed though.

bluebackground said:
The coloring in panel 6 is fucked up.

Aside from Devon's disembodied penis allowing you a full artistic view of Keri's goods, I see nothing out of the ordinary.

Cow said:
"I'm on the pill"
wat.
This was a story that should have been left unfinished, it was much sexier to imagine how it ended instead of being treated to this rushed art, bad coloring, cheesy dialogue and the unoriginal "lets do every position from a porno shoot" story.

Because a girl who masturbates often enough to do it open leaving her bro's room wouldn't be sexually active and on said pill.

Quit your bitching or don't read it :)

Cow said:
"I'm on the pill"
wat.
This was a story that should have been left unfinished, it was much sexier to imagine how it ended instead of being treated to this rushed art, bad coloring, cheesy dialogue and the unoriginal "lets do every position from a porno shoot" story.

The pill is only 99% effective. Imagine all you want around that 1%.

Wen the fuck is the new one i love this comic

Cow said:
I think it's well within my rights to offer critique

If you want to offer critique, then why don't you do so? You've commented on a porn image board, when my contact information is right on the page. You're more than welcome to go to FA and send me a note, instead of tossing your opinion into the wind over here on e621.

Also, critique is fine by me, but what you've offered doesn't seem to be anything useful. Saying I have "rushed art, bad coloring" and "cheesy dialogue" doesn't tell me what's wrong with what I'm doing, it just tells me you are unhappy. I spend 6 to 10 hours on these pages, so to me, "rushed art" doesn't make sense. Break it up into something more tangible, like giving me examples of things I'm doing that you feel could be improved. Throwing insults is not the same as critique.

I don't make a habit of checking this site, as I don't see it as a place for conversation much, so if you'd like to respond to me in a constructive manner, please feel free to contact me on FA, IB, SF or just plain email me.

Also, I agree with what was stated above. If reading that she's on the pill makes you unhappy, then you are welcome to imagine that she didn't say it at all, or to just plain not read it in general, since you seem to dislike almost everything about this comic's execution. I won't be offended if someone doesn't like my first attempt at a comic; I hold no illusions of grandeur on my prowess as a writer, that's for sure :p

CamKitty said:
Because a girl who masturbates often enough to do it open leaving her bro's room wouldn't be sexually active and on said pill.

Quit your bitching or don't read it :)

+1'd, truer words have never been spoken.