Topic: Is japanese porn dialogue as cringy in japanese?

Let's be real, almost all porn dialogue is pretty terrible.

I'm no master at it, but it feels like most porn dialogue seems to exist just because the writer felt like the character should be saying something, but couldn't think of anything for them to say, so relied on either narrating exactly what's going on, or relied on cliches that they've seen a hundred times before.

Sometimes people are a bit more creative, and that can go really well at times, but can also give rise to the worst examples of corny dialogue.

I'm getting a bit off topic here. This is just a topic I've thought about a little bit. So I guess I'll end off with a bit of advice to anyone reading this who might want to write some dialogue at some point.

Advice

My best advice would be to understand the situation you're trying to present. If your understanding only goes as deep as "these two characters are having sex", then the dialogue you make will probably end up being the generic "Ah, I'm cumming!" variety, and any creativity you apply can only make it more corny. Instead, try to understand the scenario. Who are these characters? Why are they having sex? What relationship do they have to each other? What point in the sex is this? Asking a bunch of questions like this puts your mind in a specific scenario, and hopefully allows you to come up with something that sounds genuine.

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