Yeah nice one
We need more cub gifs

Yes we do

Oh gosh yes! So cute happy and satisfying speed :D

cute!

What an adorable lil cutie! Cubs enjoying themselves is always a perfect sight to see

jesus this is good, please make more!

One of the best

I will be perfectly honest right now, in my opinion there's still quite a lot of work to be done here and with the others in this pool as well.

Don't get me wrong, this is still a really well done animation and it's easily the best in the pool in my view (the one just before it is a close contender), but I wouldn't necessarily call it great either. The main problem I have with this and the others is the lack of any facial movement or change. Only her head/their heads move around a tiny bit and I will be honest, that's very distracting and it doesn't look natural at all. In the ones just before and after this one, it looks like their heads are stuck together and in the one after this one, her hair basically moves separately from her head so it looks like it's floating off, haha. The hair is more well done in this one though, but still not perfect.

Apart from that, well some other parts don't move much either, such as the arms and hands, but granted the legs and feet do generally move around, except for in the next one where Jin's feet and lower legs don't move at all, though I do like Keiko's twitching legs and paws in that one, it's a nice touch. As a whole, the animations are of decent quality but still not very high quality. Everyone's/Everything's a bit jittery, some scenes could do with more frames (like this one and the previous one, possibly the next one too), the speed of the characters and the animation in general is just a little bit too fast I'd say (especially in the last panel) and as a whole, like I said there's a lot of work to be done. Trust me I totally understand, animation isn't easy, but it's as they say, quality over quantity and all that. Spend more time on each individual animation and don't feel any need to pump them out at certain times or whatever. I think you'll feel a lot better about them too if you do this, unless you already feel perfectly content, in that case good for you, haha, but either way this is why I'm giving you my feedback today. I don't mean to be unnecessarily critical or rude or anything, but everything I've mentioned here is sadly very distracting and does stop me from more thoroughly enjoying these animations.

For what it's worth though, the second picture in this pool (the licking/oral one) is pretty good and I can't find much wrong with it, haha. Really the only fault in that one I'd say is I feel like her head's a bit too big, perhaps even way too big, but apart from that, yeah really good stuff. I like the detail around the carpet she's kneeling in for example. I can't say I ever personally understood the whole spider web saliva thing which most artists seem to like to do, but that's nothing against you personally, it's a pretty common thing at this point anyway, plus that's not a "bad" thing per say, just not my personal preference when it comes to saliva, haha. But yeah, your static pictures are just fine, in fact some of them are great! It's just your animations which I feel need some work.

Anyway, I shall stop rambling now. I hope you manage to read this comment and maybe take what I say on board as I think it could really help improve your animations which, don't get me wrong here, are a very good start indeed. Please don't be discouraged thanks to my words as that's not my intention whatsoever. My intention is to help you out with improving your animations and hopefully feeling better about them as a whole, which I'm sure you will one day, with my advice or not, but the least I can do is try and help you out. Nonetheless thank you for your time, I genuinely hope I was helpful today and I look forward to whatever else you have in store for us. Have a good one for now my friend! :)

thefamilyfanatic said:
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Holy hell dude, talk about constructive criticism. Not that I disagree with you in the slightest, but goddamn you went out of your way to really give honest feedback. I have a feeling the -7 score is due to people who automatically assume a wall of text is just spam.

carnaxus said:
Holy hell dude, talk about constructive criticism. Not that I disagree with you in the slightest, but goddamn you went out of your way to really give honest feedback. I have a feeling the -7 score is due to people who automatically assume a wall of text is just spam.

Yeah, I'm not entirely sure why I went so out of my way to do this, I'm guessing because this animation (and the other posts in this pool) have such high scores and I suppose I felt that, not necessarily they were undeserving of said scores but, the scores may not tell what possibly needs to be told for improvement to happen so, yeah. Do you get me here?

As I said, I still think this animation and the other posts are great, but at the same time there's a lot which can be done which could improve them significantly. I agree with you, I'm guessing the low score is from the "TL;DR" peeps and whatnot because otherwise I honestly don't see what I did wrong with that comment so, I appreciate the support here. :)

Edit: Well, talk about a comeback. At the time of me editing this comment, my first comment now has a positive score veering between 19 and 20. That's honestly really nice to see so thank you to everybody who pushed it out of the negative like this. ^_^

What I enjoy the most here is the pixelated lines. It looks like the frames were done in MSPaint and then copy-pasted to another software, and I love the end result.
I'll have to agree with TheFamilyFanatic, the lack of change in facial expression does make it look weird, just a head bobbing, but this is still some good stuff

wltr said:
Yeah nice one
We need more cub gifs

We do need more!

thershag said:
pedophiles

I know, right? People who jerk off to pictures of real children are disgusting. After all, there are fictional drawings of fictional charaters that serve the same purpose without being completely depraved, like the animation here.

the_rhythm_dragon said:
I know, right? People who jerk off to pictures of real children are disgusting. After all, there are fictional drawings of fictional charaters that serve the same purpose without being completely depraved, like the animation here.

Had us in the first half

:/

stabbyyyy said:
No. If you nut to that stuff, then you're a fucking creep.

Okay, I 100% agree that masturabating to real life children is immoral and unforgivable. On the other hand, I'm curious why you believe that drawings or animations of fictional children are just as immoral in your eyes.

stabbyyyy said:
Mate, please reread what you just typed. I don't give a fuck if it's fiction. This is just pedophilia with extra steps.

If that's how you feel, buddy. Just know that not everyone associates liking these kinds of posts with liking actual child porn like you do.

Hi

stabbyyyy said:
mate, do you wanna bloody re read what you just typed? i dont give a fuck if its fiction its just as bad. literally pedophilia with extra steps

just
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user_670151 said:
What an adorable lil cutie! Cubs enjoying themselves is always a perfect sight to see

some mfs dont know how to use blacklist