Looks like he's going to land right on top of her... Ouch... Hope they don't lose those glasses in the process.

He's cute and clumsy, I just want to take him to bed and cuddle through the night

matirion said:
Looks like he's going to land right on top of her... Ouch... Hope they don't lose those glasses in the process.

if her glasses stayed on during the water fight and the full body throw she got earlier, I think they can survive having a guy land on her xD

TIMBER!

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pervertamura said:
TO BE CONTINUED - ------>

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=kU-waeO1yEs

Also, my prediction: His crotch is gonna fall right on her snout.

pervertamura said:
TO BE CONTINUED - ------>

*Starts playing Roundabout by Yes*

My prediction is that he's gonna break her neck and then the comic takes a dark turn

slothy said:
My prediction is that he's gonna break her neck and then the comic takes a dark turn

that is a bleak turn XD

matirion said:
Looks like he's going to land right on top of her... Ouch... Hope they don't lose those glasses in the process.

Given the perspective and how tiny he is, I think he's landing slightly to her left.

oh that hand is very conveniently placed, isnt it? i think i can see how this is going to escalate.

strongbrush1 said:
This is strangely wholesome for an underage exhibitionism comic.

Well, it's also a comic about body acceptance

strongbrush1 said:
This is strangely wholesome for an underage exhibitionism comic.

They're in university.
post #2194322

therealtazzy said:
she's literally about to land in lindsay's whole face
L

*he

therealtazzy said:
she's literally about to land in lindsay's whole face
L

Dude. Every. single. time. What does it take to get this through these people's thick skulls?

general_joe said:
Dude. Every. single. time. What does it take to get this through these people's thick skulls?

its ok, just let the comic do the talking XD people often don't read the comic, and problems start when people really don't like to be corrected. I dont think thats a valid reason but im just really hoping we don't trigger them the next few pages just so I don't have that headache

the aftermath of the fall
https://youtu.be/MTW4sIL9Dpw

Now, hang on. Did Joss put his foot BACK in his shorts? Previous page showed he had stepped out of one leg completely.

I call shenanigans. Who did this to Joss

Graceful

general_joe said:
Dude. Every. single. time. What does it take to get this through these people's thick skulls?

Simply correct them nothing more. Or what happened in the last page comment section will happen.

I know I'm not supposed to get into labels, but...Joss is a female that identifies as male? or a flat tom boy? or a herm with a tiny penis? or... help me out here...maybe I didn't read all the text?

the_meistro said:
I know I'm not supposed to get into labels, but...Joss is a female that identifies as male? or a flat tom boy? or a herm with a tiny penis? or... help me out here...maybe I didn't read all the text?

joss is male born as female, so transgender working on his body to become a man, already on hormones and has had breast reductive surgery. thats all the info ive hinted at in the comic X)

therealtazzy said:
the science not checking out with this one chief

im doing my best! X) trying to stylize characters while also making them look like young adults. you can see my progress since the start of my work, every step I see something to improve to make age clearer.

therealtazzy said:
she's literally about to land in lindsay's whole face
L

it’s spelled ‘he’

thatfunbun said:
im doing my best! X) trying to stylize characters while also making them look like young adults. you can see my progress since the start of my work, every step I see something to improve to make age clearer.

I don't get why people keep calling them underage. You have a cute style but they're pretty obviously young adults. The youngest here I'd assume is either Keith or Joss and they look to me like they're both around 19.

"I'm sorry, you sprained your neck when WHAT happened now?"

slothy said:
My prediction is that he's gonna break her neck and then the comic takes a dark turn

Wow, just wow haha.

pocketsquid said:
if her glasses stayed on during the water fight and the full body throw she got earlier, I think they can survive having a guy land on her xD

They gotta be like Alphys' glasses by this point, literally bound to her face.

general_joe said:
Dude. Every. single. time. What does it take to get this through these people's thick skulls?

Brochacho, Chill, some people don't look through the whole pool, thay coulda stumbled upon it and found it funny

ne0draac said:
Brochacho, Chill, some people don't look through the whole pool, thay coulda stumbled upon it and found it funny

Except the person in question (TheRealTazzy) has commented on several parts of the comic at this point.

henhen129 said:

therealtazzy said:
she's literally about to land in lindsay's whole face
L

it’s spelled ‘he’

Youre not going to win here, its not a matter of not knowing. Some people just want to make trans folk uncomfortable instead of just avoiding comics about them.

kunari said:
Simply correct them nothing more. Or what happened in the last page comment section will happen.

Damn, and I thought my comments caused an uproar. I had to go back and read the comment section of that page after I read this. *rubs eyes*

emilysylveon said:
They're in university.
post #2194322

Whoops. My bad.

matirion said:
Looks like he's going to land right on top of her... Ouch... Hope they don't lose those glasses in the process.

And look at her hand placement..

"Accidental cunnilingus" tag in the next panel I guess?

thatfunbun said:
im doing my best! X) trying to stylize characters while also making them look like young adults. you can see my progress since the start of my work, every step I see something to improve to make age clearer.

I think it's that your art style is super cute and cartoonish, so it makes everything seem younger. That's not a complaint, as I love your work, but it does probably mess with people's perceptions a bit.

Edit: I'm not trying to be rude about that, I'm not the best with describing things without simplifying it.

voldino said:
"Accidental cunnilingus" tag in the next panel I guess?

That would be only the second time it's ever been used on e621!

general_joe said:
Also, my prediction: His crotch is gonna fall right on her snout.

mine is the fingers slipping into those folds
X3

Wait, didn’t he have at least one foot out of those clothes in the previous page?

Belly flop. That's going to sting.

You might wanna think about taking the shorts all the way off before going in the pool joss. just a pro tip.

me reading the comments got me like post #1730117

he is fucking dead

You guys ever see that one scene from The Empire Strikes Back?