evals and mike (twokinds) created by seff (artist)
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  • Nogohoho said:
    Yeah bitch, hide those arms, so I don't have to draw them. Yeah, you like being poorly colored, don't you whore? With your misplaced and undersized plastered on nipples. Yeah.

    Well, I had hoped someone would comment on the pic.

    Guess I should be more careful about what I wish for.

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  • SlowFag said:
    Well, I had hoped someone would comment on the pic.

    Guess I should be more careful about what I wish for.

    The jizz looks OK... Pretty much everything else is a mess, but the jizz looks OK.

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  • AraElkins said:
    The jizz looks OK... Pretty much everything else is a mess, but the jizz looks OK.

    It looks like he used Fluff Kevlar's fluids tutorial, but then again, it might just be me.

    I don't think you did a bad job with the coloring on the girl. The shading on the guy looks a bit funky though, as does the anatomy on him in general. It looks like you tried some foreshortening on the thighs, but it ends up making them look really short.

    She does look a bit mannish, so I would work on making the face look a little more feminine. Other than that, good work. Having the shirt still on and bunched up was a nice touch, as was the little saliva strands in her mouth. The shading is subtle, so maybe it would look a little better if you make it a little more obvious. I'm not an artist by any means, just pointing out what you might want to work on. It got a fave and a vote up from me either way. :3

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  • JamesTheHusky said:
    It looks like he used Fluff Kevlar's fluids tutorial, but then again, it might just be me.

    I don't think you did a bad job with the coloring on the girl. The shading on the guy looks a bit funky though, as does the anatomy on him in general. It looks like you tried some foreshortening on the thighs, but it ends up making them look really short.

    She does look a bit mannish, so I would work on making the face look a little more feminine. Other than that, good work. Having the shirt still on and bunched up was a nice touch, as was the little saliva strands in her mouth. The shading is subtle, so maybe it would look a little better if you make it a little more obvious. I'm not an artist by any means, just pointing out what you might want to work on. It got a fave and a vote up from me either way. :3

    I sorta used Fluff Kevlar's tutorial, but about halfway through I just went and did my own thing since the tutorial stopped making any sort of sense to me.

    Otherwise, yeah, my coloring sucks. Anatomy sucks (particularly male anatomy, since I draw males all of never. Seriously, this is the first penis I've ever drawn). Foreshorting sucks. Perspective sucks.

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  • ChaZcaTriX said:
    I think that was intended... am I right?

    Absolutely, though you'd have to know about the source of the character to understand.

    Remorhaz said:
    SHUT THE HELL UP AND FAP.
    Jesus.

    No. Never. Ok, about 98% of the time, but this is not that 98% so we'll act like we never fap and just comment it to hell and back. Which it's already back anyways, so stop yelling.

    I think I stopped making sense now... maybe I should sleep D=

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  • SlowFag said:
    I sorta used Fluff Kevlar's tutorial, but about halfway through I just went and did my own thing since the tutorial stopped making any sort of sense to me.

    Otherwise, yeah, my coloring sucks. Anatomy sucks (particularly male anatomy, since I draw males all of never. Seriously, this is the first penis I've ever drawn). Foreshorting sucks. Perspective sucks.

    Really, you just need to use references (of real people) for the poses. I think it would improve your art significantly.

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  • AraElkins said:
    Really, you just need to use references (of real people) for the poses. I think it would improve your art significantly.

    That's what everyone tells me (particularly my friend Beowulf), but I can never find references of the poses I want to draw when I want to draw them. I usually find them like two months later and then I'm like HRRRRRRRRRRFFF.

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  • SlowFag said:
    That's what everyone tells me (particularly my friend Beowulf), but I can never find references of the poses I want to draw when I want to draw them. I usually find them like two months later and then I'm like HRRRRRRRRRRFFF.

    When you find them, you should try redrawing it using the reference, or maybe basing some of your art off poses you've seen. Also, don't be so hard on yourself over coloring and such, you'll get better. Looking at your other pictures, I would really like to see more from you. I love how the muscle tone is on your females, especially post #20774

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  • Nogohoho said:
    Yeah bitch, hide those arms, so I don't have to draw them. Yeah, you like being poorly colored, don't you whore? With your misplaced and undersized plastered on nipples. Yeah.

    *Eagerly awaits your epic drawing skills*

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  • Why do people got to complain? If their not happy with the art then don't comment on it, This picture to me (In my opinion) Looks pretty good. =D

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  • Looks like Mike is gonna wake up the next morning a man, with a baby born in his urethra.

    I bet it's gonna be much more painful than a kidney stone.

    Am I right?

    I forgot.

    Spoiler: Mike got drunk, and doesn't know he's doing it with his friend, looks like his friend, just got laid, by "her"

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