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  • While I like Nicobay, I really couldn't, and still can't, get over Skrien. He's just too much of an arrogant fuckwit for me to look past.

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  • Found a glitch, reproduced pretty easily.

    Finding a male trainer on the path and choosing oral with them will end up taking you back to the main screen.

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  • Nicobay may have written his own dialogue, at least for his character. The broken English is pretty consistent with how he himself types his posts. Points for on character?

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  • There is a secret to the right of the bottom part of the path and inside the secret when you click on the character.
    Another secret is to the top left of the clearing.
    Another one is on the river and inside that secret, in the pokedex.

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  • Nicobay1 said:
    thk for the comment guy , but plz , stay cool , the dialogue are maybe not good for your taste , but the authors is a good guy .

    after that , i have create a topic/pool , feel free to anwser it and give idea/opinion
    http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/7410140/

    Love your work keep up the great stuff :)
    And personally I think dialogue is fine just some mispelled words which isn't a big deal really.

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  • How is this guy even able to pay for all his commissions?
    I don't know how much more than 200 pictures and animations from different artists would cost, but this won't be cheap...

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  • LatiosLove said:
    Love your work keep up the great stuff :)
    And personally I think dialogue is fine just some mispelled words which isn't a big deal really.

    The dialogue would be tolerable if Skrien wasn't such a single note character.

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  • When choosing to face fuck the male trainer it occasionally crashes or goes back to the start.

    The spelling was a lil weird with the son, plus his grammar scared me a lil bit.

    And the writing reminded me of the adventures of Ashchu, but some reason that's a good thing. I love a giggle at cringy porn talk during a good fap.

    Aside from the spelling/grammar and the issue I had with the male trainer (oral), it's coming along very very well.

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  • "Your peen is poke against my womb, dad!"

    No he isnt! 2 or 3 parts forwould it shows a internal shot with no sign of a cervix or even a womb for that matter.

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  • Scheknul said:
    I feel as if this were written by a role player, and not a writer.

    As a roleplayer, I find this blanket statement quite inaccurate. You should re-qualify it as general novices to writing. Roleplayers whom have been doing it for a long enough time with criticism are quite adept at scripting and dialog - enough so that we can take the place of multiple different characters with varying levels of diction.

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  • Brightfaith said:
    As a roleplayer, I find this blanket statement quite inaccurate. You should re-qualify it as general novices to writing. Roleplayers whom have been doing it for a long enough time with criticism are quite adept at scripting and dialog - enough so that we can take the place of multiple different characters with varying levels of diction.

    I don't speak out of malice, I speak out of experience. From 2004 to 2012, I couldn't find more than 3 decent RPers. So, I'm going to hold to my "blanket statement." You might be one of the few who actually put forth effort, but when the many bad RPers outweigh the few good, I'm left a skeptic.

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  • Brightfaith said:
    As a roleplayer, I find this blanket statement quite inaccurate. You should re-qualify it as general novices to writing. Roleplayers whom have been doing it for a long enough time with criticism are quite adept at scripting and dialog - enough so that we can take the place of multiple different characters with varying levels of diction.

    ...well, one would think we would improve enough, though time and again, I've seen some tacky typists even years later. Granted I've delved into both story scripting and role-play, so I guess it helped to well-round out my experience enough?

    Scheknul said:
    I don't speak out of malice, I speak out of experience. From 2004 to 2012, I couldn't find more than 3 decent RPers. So, I'm going to hold to my "blanket statement." You might be one of the few who actually put forth effort, but when the many bad RPers outweigh the few good, I'm left a skeptic.

    ...and as for you, it may just be where you were searching. Refinement is not limited for any one person or any one place. Care to tell me where exactly you experienced those 'less then admirable' role-players? I may be able to sympathize on the matter more if I did bear witness during those times. (i.e. if I was at that site anytime during then)

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  • My favorite part about this is the fact the female Bayleaf doesn't know what the words for "penis" and "vagina" are...

    but she knows what "Cervix" means. Or at least has heard it if nothing else.

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  • Ponieschhe said:
    Does anyone know the title of said music? I know I know, classic e621 flash comment.

    If you click on the yellow C that appears at the top right of the map menu and scenes you're taken to a credits screen that reveals the song is "Pokemon National Park"

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  • Okay, all the secrets:
    The River
    Pokedex (in river scene)
    Inbetween Skial's den and path
    Inbetween Mountain and Clearing (look of the spires)

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  • The dialogue is like from a terible Doom wad, you know the kind with seizure inducing graphics and ear rape

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  • FrostLynx said:
    "My butt feelsh shoo good! I'm cumming!"
    More of the scripting masterpiece.

    funny how I was just about to make fun of the scripting myself and someone beat me to the punch. I mean the images are good but the dialogue is off

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  • Daneasaur said:
    While I like Nicobay, I really couldn't, and still can't, get over Skrien. He's just too much of an arrogant fuckwit for me to look past.

    Kyvinna said:
    The dialogue would be tolerable if Skrien wasn't such a single note character.

    I will agree with this, just... skrien does seem like such a one note character since he's just got a sense of arrogance that never gets reprimanded. He's able to get anything he wants and acts like he knows that.

    Humility, please, implement it.

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  • warriorking9001 said:
    I will agree with this, just... skrien does seem like such a one note character since he's just got a sense of arrogance that never gets reprimanded. He's able to get anything he wants and acts like he knows that.

    Humility, please, implement it.

    I'm still out of the loop of what this guy has done. Someone fill me in...?

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  • TheKvltGoat said:
    I'm still out of the loop of what this guy has done. Someone fill me in...?

    if by this guy you mean the main character, Skrien is an oc and assumedly the father of the 'Nicobay' character. and what has he done? basically fucked anything he could and acted like an entitled shit about it

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