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Nicobay may have written his own dialogue, at least for his character. The broken English is pretty consistent with how he himself types his posts. Points for on character?
There is a secret to the right of the bottom part of the path and inside the secret when you click on the character. Another secret is to the top left of the clearing. Another one is on the river and inside that secret, in the pokedex.
How is this guy even able to pay for all his commissions? I don't know how much more than 200 pictures and animations from different artists would cost, but this won't be cheap...
LatiosLove said: Love your work keep up the great stuff :) And personally I think dialogue is fine just some mispelled words which isn't a big deal really.
The dialogue would be tolerable if Skrien wasn't such a single note character.
Scheknul said: I feel as if this were written by a role player, and not a writer.
As a roleplayer, I find this blanket statement quite inaccurate. You should re-qualify it as general novices to writing. Roleplayers whom have been doing it for a long enough time with criticism are quite adept at scripting and dialog - enough so that we can take the place of multiple different characters with varying levels of diction.
Brightfaith said: As a roleplayer, I find this blanket statement quite inaccurate. You should re-qualify it as general novices to writing. Roleplayers whom have been doing it for a long enough time with criticism are quite adept at scripting and dialog - enough so that we can take the place of multiple different characters with varying levels of diction.
I don't speak out of malice, I speak out of experience. From 2004 to 2012, I couldn't find more than 3 decent RPers. So, I'm going to hold to my "blanket statement." You might be one of the few who actually put forth effort, but when the many bad RPers outweigh the few good, I'm left a skeptic.
Brightfaith said: As a roleplayer, I find this blanket statement quite inaccurate. You should re-qualify it as general novices to writing. Roleplayers whom have been doing it for a long enough time with criticism are quite adept at scripting and dialog - enough so that we can take the place of multiple different characters with varying levels of diction.
...well, one would think we would improve enough, though time and again, I've seen some tacky typists even years later. Granted I've delved into both story scripting and role-play, so I guess it helped to well-round out my experience enough?
Scheknul said: I don't speak out of malice, I speak out of experience. From 2004 to 2012, I couldn't find more than 3 decent RPers. So, I'm going to hold to my "blanket statement." You might be one of the few who actually put forth effort, but when the many bad RPers outweigh the few good, I'm left a skeptic.
...and as for you, it may just be where you were searching. Refinement is not limited for any one person or any one place. Care to tell me where exactly you experienced those 'less then admirable' role-players? I may be able to sympathize on the matter more if I did bear witness during those times. (i.e. if I was at that site anytime during then)
Ponieschhe said: Does anyone know the title of said music? I know I know, classic e621 flash comment.
If you click on the yellow C that appears at the top right of the map menu and scenes you're taken to a credits screen that reveals the song is "Pokemon National Park"
Daneasaur said: While I like Nicobay, I really couldn't, and still can't, get over Skrien. He's just too much of an arrogant fuckwit for me to look past.
Kyvinna said: The dialogue would be tolerable if Skrien wasn't such a single note character.
I will agree with this, just... skrien does seem like such a one note character since he's just got a sense of arrogance that never gets reprimanded. He's able to get anything he wants and acts like he knows that.
warriorking9001 said: I will agree with this, just... skrien does seem like such a one note character since he's just got a sense of arrogance that never gets reprimanded. He's able to get anything he wants and acts like he knows that.
Humility, please, implement it.
I'm still out of the loop of what this guy has done. Someone fill me in...?
TheKvltGoat said: I'm still out of the loop of what this guy has done. Someone fill me in...?
if by this guy you mean the main character, Skrien is an oc and assumedly the father of the 'Nicobay' character. and what has he done? basically fucked anything he could and acted like an entitled shit about it
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TokaiTori
Blocked>Nothing there yet
Does this mean more content is possible? :3?
High Botanist Telarn
BlockedThats some unique anatomy for one to be able to sit like that and have their genitals that far forward. May even say it's a work of nature
farnayway
Member"k, dad"
Daneasaur
MemberWhile I like Nicobay, I really couldn't, and still can't, get over Skrien. He's just too much of an arrogant fuckwit for me to look past.
Zangoose
Member"vine pussy" - that's a new one
PetitPrince
MemberBetween the Rock mountain & the Clearing, there is a secret scene =)
Pakana
Member"Mouth pussy, tail pussy, vine pussy, boy pussy"...
animista666
BlockedWow.Cool
user 158037
Member"Your peen is poke against my womb, dad!"
Nicobay has the best scripters.
user 158037
Member"My butt feelsh shoo good! I'm cumming!"
More of the scripting masterpiece.
NotWhatWeExpected
MemberI found one in the river leading from the lake, but nothing between the mountain and clearing.
SaintRangerDanger
MemberWhat I learned in boating school is that adding the word pussy after anything makes it sexy.
DarbyFoxtrot
MemberWhat's skylanders spyro doing here.
KiayWolf
MemberHe so rude :c
EllyWolf
MemberFound a glitch, reproduced pretty easily.
Finding a male trainer on the path and choosing oral with them will end up taking you back to the main screen.
FarkM
Membernah m8
IguanasAreCool
MemberI was about to push the play button, but then I saw the way the Umbreon was staring at me...
Scheknul
MemberI feel as if this were written by a role player, and not a writer.
Rederik Wood
MemberNicobay may have written his own dialogue, at least for his character. The broken English is pretty consistent with how he himself types his posts. Points for on character?
Randyx
Member"Ash never licks my pussy"
Oh shit lmao!
OrangeLightning
MemberThere's a second part when you click the pokedex on the ground of the river scene.
ZackSnack
MemberThat Umbreon has pink eye, he needs some medical attention.
Tornadomaster203
Memberthe faces.
that's it, just the faces.
also, everything's a pussy to this guy. just a spoiler.
55234a
Memberbetween Skrien's Den and Path~
NebulaFox93
MemberGood ol' Nicobay
ClassicSergal
MemberIs there a tag for perpetual shit-eating grin?
TokaiTori
BlockedIs there a tag for perpetual shit-eating grin that causes an uncontrollable urge to punch it?
Nicobay1
Memberthk for the comment guy , but plz , stay cool , the dialogue are maybe not good for your taste , but the authors is a good guy .
after that , i have create a topic/pool , feel free to anwser it and give idea/opinion
http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/7410140/
jagarexius
MemberThere is a secret to the right of the bottom part of the path and inside the secret when you click on the character.
Another secret is to the top left of the clearing.
Another one is on the river and inside that secret, in the pokedex.
Wattman817
Blocked10 out of fucking 10
FeraligatrOfDoom
MemberOoooooh that music... so nostalgic <3
Kiro-Kit
MemberVine Pussy.
NebulaFox93
MemberLove your work keep up the great stuff :)
And personally I think dialogue is fine just some mispelled words which isn't a big deal really.
qwertay
MemberHow is this guy even able to pay for all his commissions?
I don't know how much more than 200 pictures and animations from different artists would cost, but this won't be cheap...
Kyvinna
MemberThe dialogue would be tolerable if Skrien wasn't such a single note character.
Everything
Member"How that?"
chasm of sarcasm
Blockeda peen is actually the end of a hammer.
OtterJob
MemberWhy does this have so many upvotes? It's not very good... My personal opinion.
Steezt
BlockedWhen choosing to face fuck the male trainer it occasionally crashes or goes back to the start.
The spelling was a lil weird with the son, plus his grammar scared me a lil bit.
And the writing reminded me of the adventures of Ashchu, but some reason that's a good thing. I love a giggle at cringy porn talk during a good fap.
Aside from the spelling/grammar and the issue I had with the male trainer (oral), it's coming along very very well.
Kojin
Member"Your peen is poke against my womb, dad!"
No he isnt! 2 or 3 parts forwould it shows a internal shot with no sign of a cervix or even a womb for that matter.
1ncogn3a2
MemberLike this guy? http://i40.tinypic.com/2ynh1le.png
Lunacy
MemberSeems more like a comic in Flash format
Ponieschhe
MemberDoes anyone know the title of said music? I know I know, classic e621 flash comment.
Brightfaith
MemberAs a roleplayer, I find this blanket statement quite inaccurate. You should re-qualify it as general novices to writing. Roleplayers whom have been doing it for a long enough time with criticism are quite adept at scripting and dialog - enough so that we can take the place of multiple different characters with varying levels of diction.
Scheknul
MemberI don't speak out of malice, I speak out of experience. From 2004 to 2012, I couldn't find more than 3 decent RPers. So, I'm going to hold to my "blanket statement." You might be one of the few who actually put forth effort, but when the many bad RPers outweigh the few good, I'm left a skeptic.
SaintRangerDanger
MemberDam it skrien. Your such a dick.... But why do you have to be such a sexy dick?
user 180691
Member"Dadcum"
Zoroark the Furvert
Member...well, one would think we would improve enough, though time and again, I've seen some tacky typists even years later. Granted I've delved into both story scripting and role-play, so I guess it helped to well-round out my experience enough?
...and as for you, it may just be where you were searching. Refinement is not limited for any one person or any one place. Care to tell me where exactly you experienced those 'less then admirable' role-players? I may be able to sympathize on the matter more if I did bear witness during those times. (i.e. if I was at that site anytime during then)
EightyNine
MemberMy favorite part about this is the fact the female Bayleaf doesn't know what the words for "penis" and "vagina" are...
but she knows what "Cervix" means. Or at least has heard it if nothing else.
Tible
Blocked"buttslut"
What? It's a nickname
Tible
BlockedOh the Porno commentary XD
Claw MacKain
MemberIf you click on the yellow C that appears at the top right of the map menu and scenes you're taken to a credits screen that reveals the song is "Pokemon National Park"
Umbreon999
MemberOkay, all the secrets:
The River
Pokedex (in river scene)
Inbetween Skial's den and path
Inbetween Mountain and Clearing (look of the spires)
FatMan1945
MemberThe dialogue is like from a terible Doom wad, you know the kind with seizure inducing graphics and ear rape
bankai
Memberlove to see unbreon try to fuck some pokemon much bigger then he is and gets fucked himself
user 157520
MemberDoes this make me a normie for never hearing of the
"G Spot" till now?
user 157520
MemberFound the one near the lake, and in between the mountain and clearing... where is the one at the "top right corner"
AnythingButFoxes
MemberScumbreon
MaxxytheFox
MemberLmao I hate porn dialogue. I love porn but I always cringe at the stuff characters say.
Damn.
Aelvir
MemberI see an arcanine tag and have yet to see an arcanine.. o.o
Yoshinator
MemberI really like the music wish I had a link or something. -.- Pretty good game!
gradult
MemberWish the game would update
SalaciousLupine49
Membercheck the river running off from the lake
BooceBungalow
MemberBesides the hyper-feral, skrien is actually very cute :3
KyunaWolf
Memberno lapras in the game no idea why it had a lapras tag
shadowreaper7
MemberMailbox/Sign outside Nicobay's house is a Lapras head.
Be very careful when editing tags.
Maracuja
MemberOne of the best games ever <3~
katruda
MemberThe music is actually quite catchy
ImProbablyFappingNow
MemberI cum so many times seeing this
AquamarineRose
Memberfunny how I was just about to make fun of the scripting myself and someone beat me to the punch. I mean the images are good but the dialogue is off
AquamarineRose
MemberI will agree with this, just... skrien does seem like such a one note character since he's just got a sense of arrogance that never gets reprimanded. He's able to get anything he wants and acts like he knows that.
Humility, please, implement it.
Bloodrocuter
MemberI'm still out of the loop of what this guy has done. Someone fill me in...?
AquamarineRose
Memberif by this guy you mean the main character, Skrien is an oc and assumedly the father of the 'Nicobay' character. and what has he done? basically fucked anything he could and acted like an entitled shit about it
soman3
Membercant wait for this to be updated
just saying
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