Topic: Looking for some raw feedback on my art

Posted under Art Talk

How it do everyone?
Perhaps you've seen my art pop up recently and while I have drastically improved in my own opinion in comparison to my first posts (and many off-site posts I dare not post here for the low quality!) I'm looking to get some feedback, the no holding back kind in the good and most importantly the bad!
Please don't comment based on taste but rather on genuine critique, what I could do differently with colors or lines for example, and in art of my own characters what features I should improve.

Latest one would be Spyro which has taken a big improvement in shading in my opinion but I'm sure lots more could improve, any ideas? https://e621.net/posts/3597757?q=user%3AMuffinlicious

This anthro one I'm sure could use some more color and while I'm happy with it the score says otherwise, what could I improve? https://e621.net/posts/3529218?q=user%3AMuffinlicious

Semi-anthro Deerie, I think the expression could be a tad better and perhaps some anatomical work? https://e621.net/posts/3543781?q=muffinlicious

and finally some off-site SFW sketches
dragon: https://twitter.com/Muffinlic1ous/status/1574877542447718418 really happy with the outcome here but perhaps some shading work?
fursona: https://twitter.com/Muffinlic1ous/status/1571834175019253761 id imagine the eye could be in a better position and i could add some shading for it to be more alluring.

Big thanks to anyone taking their time of day to help out! Want to provide quality art to you all some day

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