I'm in the middle of writing a MLP: FIM fic, and wanted someone to read over it before I uploaded it (Google Docs, possibly Equestria Daily). I just need someone to tell me how i could improve it and what you think it's missing.

Any Help you can offer would be much appreciated!

I dunno, http://pastebin.com, google docs, or post it here.

Riversyde said:
I dunno, http://pastebin.com, google docs, or post it here.

hm. I mean i need someone to tell me if they like it or not. If they think it's worth being uploaded. I think its ok, but If anyone has any ideas after reading it, I'll certainly consider them.

Besides, It is a long story with Multiple chapters. So I can't really upload it here.

By the way. It is NOT a pornographic "clopfic".

mr_cheez_it said:
By the way. It is NOT a pornographic "clopfic".

Well in that case, out of the question.

If it was about anything but ponies I´d offer to help, but I´m not a big pony fan.

honestly, our opinions don't really matter as to whether or not you upload it, it's whether or not YOU think it's good enough to upload. if yo do, upload it, if you don't, don't. it's really that simple.

cookiekangaroo said:
honestly, our opinions don't really matter as to whether or not you upload it, it's whether or not YOU think it's good enough to upload. if yo do, upload it, if you don't, don't. it's really that simple.

The writer him/herself is usually not the best judge of quality though. That's why most good writers have impartial proofreaders and editors looking over their work before release.

Wahai said:
The writer him/herself is usually not the best judge of quality though. That's why most good writers have impartial proofreaders and editors looking over their work before release.

Correct. If anyone on the site wants to check over it, I'll be more than happy to send them details from the story in a Private Message. I just ask that one person give me his/her opinion on it.

mr_cheez_it said:
Correct. If anyone on the site wants to check over it, I'll be more than happy to send them details from the story in a Private Message. I just ask that one person give me his/her opinion on it.

And i will be sure to mention them in the "credits".