fenavi montaro and vixavil hayden (tale of tails) created by feretta
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I know I forgot Vix's facial markings in the second to last panel, it's late and I'm tired :p

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  • Omnicidal said:
    Got yourself out of the hole you dug last page, noice

    I'd already written the script for this page before I started the previous one, y'all are just impatient ;)

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  • Like...seriously...how few stories actually look at this kind of thing.

    I'm really appreciative of looking at relationships with MORE than just what happens before having kids. I like that you are focusing on more than just that.

    This is really a nice change. Not only does this story have better plot than porn (which is not saying the porn is bad but how hard is it to tell a competent story in porn, really?) but it's actually going into directions and areas that are not commonly address and doing INTERESTING things with them.

    Credit to you Feretta.

    Also, Fen, keep in mind the 'naughty parts' for either gender tend to have like a million and one names. EACH. Could you really expect her to know that anyway? Although to be fair that lack of information might be more because of potential information.

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  • Now I think Fen here should make EXTRA sure Vix is preggers >=3

    Followed by overly adorable affectionate cuddles of two parents-to-be ^~^

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  • *sniff* Damn it. Why you gotta bring out such powerful feels all the time.You are melting my heart.

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  • dracotay said:
    Pregnant girls AND daddies!?! >_>

    Wadxxx said:
    "It said only boys have them"

    Welcome to Furry.

    some girls have penises and some boys have vaginas.
    Really not that unusual a thing.
    Just doesnt really come up in casual conversation, cause if you arent going pantsward, theres really no reason to know.

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  • Vix has such depth that has yet to be plumbed.

    And when she does open her eyes, there might be an ignition that no one wants to be around. No one has any idea what her powers are like. She might be on par with Fen, she just does not know it yet.

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  • Just got caught up on this series, and holy fuck PLEASE make this into a comic book when it's finished! I would pay so much for a physical copy, this is gold!

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  • FirepawTiger said:
    I think the facial markings just compliment her and make her look way cuter in my books.

    I think it's a reference to Vix being mark-less in the second to last panel.

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  • Not to be a Dick with everyone cooing over the Fen/Vix ship, but Fen might not be daddy. They also ducked a dragon. Who disappeared. Ominous things may be on the horizon.

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  • FallenSaint said:
    Not to be a Dick with everyone cooing over the Fen/Vix ship, but Fen might not be daddy. They also ducked a dragon. Who disappeared. Ominous things may be on the horizon.

    I was about to say yeah what a twist it would be if they had an egg and yes I said they. need to get that one chick to check fen.

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