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  • Really nice to see a rainy day scene with a little bit of lewdness in it. The anatomy looks good, her facial expression is great, the eye alone is amazing! I feel like I'm drowning in there, and that "scar" on her leaf is really cute.

    I've also looked a little on your history and you have developed quite a bit for such a short amount of time, so all I can say is; Congratulation! You are doing a darn good job.

    HOWEVER! There is space for improvement so I'm going to give you some feedback that you can have in mind for your future work.
    As you can see in this picture her body is pointing front/right for us viewers in about 45 degree angle. She is facing us on her left side and that makes her neck have a devastating angle of about 130 degree or something, more than 90 that's for sure. Had she been facing us from her right side and still showed us no more than one of her eyes and just barely both of her nostrils she would have her neck angle in about 50-60 degrees or so I think. Some pokemon (and non-pokemon characters) can twist their heads to extreme but don't think that would work too well with a bayleef. Worth keeping in mind for you future work.
    The second thing I'd like to comment on is the shadow. Nothing wrong with the placement and how it looks because it looks good, but it looks black with lowered opacity. I'd suggest you'd instead have a really dark color of some sort instead, like blue or green in this case. Play around a little bit with that, it usually generate good results.

    I hope you take my word as advises and not as something offensive because I really like your art crafts and you're working on a steady pace. I'm really looking forward to see your future works since you have so much potential. Keep drawing and have fun with them, listen to every positive comment anyone sends your way because you deserve every single one of them.

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  • joe123123123 said:
    I hope you take my word as advises and not as something offensive

    Nah dude no worries, i get what you're saying, and i appreciate the feedback.
    Even if you tried to confuse me with all that fancy math talk.

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  • joe123123123 said:
    Really nice to see a rainy day scene with a little bit of lewdness in it. The anatomy looks good, her facial expression is great, the eye alone is amazing! I feel like I'm drowning in there, and that "scar" on her leaf is really cute.

    I've also looked a little on your history and you have developed quite a bit for such a short amount of time, so all I can say is; Congratulation! You are doing a darn good job.

    HOWEVER! There is space for improvement so I'm going to give you some feedback that you can have in mind for your future work.
    As you can see in this picture her body is pointing front/right for us viewers in about 45 degree angle. She is facing us on her left side and that makes her neck have a devastating angle of about 130 degree or something, more than 90 that's for sure. Had she been facing us from her right side and still showed us no more than one of her eyes and just barely both of her nostrils she would have her neck angle in about 50-60 degrees or so I think. Some pokemon (and non-pokemon characters) can twist their heads to extreme but don't think that would work too well with a bayleef. Worth keeping in mind for you future work.
    The second thing I'd like to comment on is the shadow. Nothing wrong with the placement and how it looks because it looks good, but it looks black with lowered opacity. I'd suggest you'd instead have a really dark color of some sort instead, like blue or green in this case. Play around a little bit with that, it usually generate good results.

    I hope you take my word as advises and not as something offensive because I really like your art crafts and you're working on a steady pace. I'm really looking forward to see your future works since you have so much potential. Keep drawing and have fun with them, listen to every positive comment anyone sends your way because you deserve every single one of them.

    This is the best advice i've ever seen on this website.

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