ian and olli created by braeburned
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Page 9! C'mon buddy, what were you expecting?

(posted a week ago at https://patreon.com/braeburned !)

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    Moodawg

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    Quakehunter said:
    No, those are surely the hands of a brown canine.

    didnt say they werent, just saying they look different; from shaggy tan with brown pads in the phone pic, to smooth dark brown with no pads, not even on the palm... unless he has 2 left hands? still sexy though

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    MothAndPodiatrist

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    I don't know why it's occuring to me just now rather than in comic relief but Braeburned is REALLY REAllY good at making comics! Just look at how incredibly good this looks! The paneling, the dialogue, gestures and actions, it's all just executed perfectly.

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    FancyFeathers

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    The comic is inconsistent. Three pages earlier Olie said he put a doorstep at the front door, yet now there's a C R E A K coming from the outside

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    KelloJam

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    FancyFeathers said:
    The comic is inconsistent. Three pages earlier Olie said he put a doorstep at the front door, yet now there's a C R E A K coming from the outside

    Someone could have closed the front door. You forget that other people live in the complex.

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    Braeburned

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    FancyFeathers said:
    The comic is inconsistent. Three pages earlier Olie said he put a doorstep at the front door, yet now there's a C R E A K coming from the outside

    By "doorstop", I meant that they probably just something in the frame of the door to wedge it and keep it from closing completely. A doorstop meaning it's stopping the door from closing, rather than keeping it wide open. I based it on something I used to do at my old apartment complex, which was just putting a rock in the doorframe so that the front door was just baaaarely prevented from closing/locking. If doorstop was a confusing word for that kind of concept (maybe "shim" would work?), then my bad!

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