Oh yes PMD is pretty nice to see around here. Hope to see more

Yes, PMD porn is great, and we'd love to see more!

Here, the art looks fine. There are just two oddities with the dialog:

1. Anon isn't a usual thing in PMD fan stuff, since OCs are more the rule than the exception. If you don't want to put in a name, I'd suggest using "partner," or just no addressing at all.

2. "We had a toughy against Moltres, so why not have a toughy with me" ? I don't think I'm familiar with "toughy" having the meaning implied by the second usage...

butdoesitrunlinux said:
Yes, PMD porn is great, and we'd love to see more!

Here, the art looks fine. There are just two oddities with the dialog:

1. Anon isn't a usual thing in PMD fan stuff, since OCs are more the rule than the exception. If you don't want to put in a name, I'd suggest using "partner," or just no addressing at all.

2. "We had a toughy against Moltres, so why not have a toughy with me" ? I don't think I'm familiar with "toughy" having the meaning implied by the second usage...

Ah! Thanks for the info, Linux! I will take the criticism into consideration in the next piece! I appreciate your time addressing the “oddities” and I’ll continue providing art with better vocabulary. Again! Thanks! ^^

That Moltres was a bitch though, especially after the hell that is the dungeon before it. Godspeed to anyone who wanted a grass type as their player/partner.