massak and tala created by fluff-kevlar
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"Predators of Denali - Page 34" by fluffKevlar on Inkbunny

Page 34 - Making her admit it, Tala's still struggling to accept a situation where she can actually have what she wants.

Predators of Denali is set on and around Denali, Alaska, the largest mountain in North America. It is still in-progress, with further progress available on my Patreon and SubscribeStar.

Thank-you to my supporters for making this comic possible! Supporting me on these sites lets you see the comic early, as-it's-made, and in HD, but will be posted uncensored in entirety for free publicly at a lower res, and in physical print later.

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  • Oh shit! Just reading through the comics and got to this one posted 5 minutes ago

    Great work! Can't wait to so more

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  • Annndddd… he now knows what a she-Wolf looks like in need.

    This is gonna be interesting.., considering how long Alaska nights can be.

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  • I've been following this comic since it started and notice something curious. Bear with me on this. It started on U-18 Channel and is currently about twenty pages further along but if you compare them you will notice that on several pages the dialogue is different on this site. This page for instance. The dialogue is almost completely rewritten and Tala's expression in panel 3 is different and her thoughts are voiced unlike on U-18. I'm not criticizing, just curious. This is one of my top favorite comics and am looking forward to more. Fantastic job,Fluff.

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  • Somehow, I doubt she means the sustenance variety of "meat".

    Though if he doesn't get a clue real quick, it looks like she might just take it that direction.

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  • nightporter said:
    ...The dialogue is almost completely rewritten and Tala's expression in panel 3 is different and her thoughts are voiced...

    This doesn't really have anything to do with that site in any way. Don't know why you keep bringing it up. I'm further ahead on the comic in Patreon/SS, and so when I look back at the public pages that need to be posted, I spot things I don't like, or need tweaking or re-writing. Some dialogue to be more real/less cheesy, some cleaning up of word-bubble clutter, some artwork updates, etc.

    It's really just about...me wanting to make as good a comic as I can to last, that I and others can look back on and not have any lingering "wish i fixed this" thoughts. All updated pages and stuff will end up in the eventual print copy. Thanks though!

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  • caradog said:
    Somehow, I doubt she means the sustenance variety of "meat".

    Though if he doesn't get a clue real quick, it looks like she might just take it that direction.

    Last panel:I'd say Massak got a clue the second Tala started pulling his pants down.

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  • fluff-kevlar said:
    This doesn't really have anything to do with that site in any way. Don't know why you keep bringing it up. I'm further ahead on the comic in Patreon/SS, and so when I look back at the public pages that need to be posted, I spot things I don't like, or need tweaking or re-writing. Some dialogue to be more real/less cheesy, some cleaning up of word-bubble clutter, some artwork updates, etc.

    It's really just about...me wanting to make as good a comic as I can to last, that I and others can look back on and not have any lingering "wish i fixed this" thoughts. All updated pages and stuff will end up in the eventual print copy. Thanks though!

    I understand now. I also write and I know what you mean about rewriting and tweaking a story. I finished doing just that a few minutes ago. Thanks for the info and don't worry, buddy. This comic is as good as set in stone. Kudos.

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