I know, it was a very long time since I updated this. Things are lining up again, and I plan on finishing up this project again. This update was mostly remaking the entire Flash so that I can update it more easily in the future. Enjoy!

It's enjoyable though.
I like it, a lot.

Not these again.

Next time you upload this stuff, please put textgame in the tags. Thanks.

KiwiPotato said:
Not these again.

Next time you upload this stuff, please put textgame in the tags. Thanks.

"These", "stuff"? Some people enjoy reading, and as it turns out, you can add tags to the post yourself. While I spend hours upon hours of writing and getting this to work, I may overlook things like that.

why is ther no other option?

"The option you selected is currently unavailable in this development build. If you would like to go back to the last screen, select 'Go Back', otherwise you can return to the title with the appropriately named button" every time I want to make a decision...

HeavyMetall said:
"The option you selected is currently unavailable in this development build. If you would like to go back to the last screen, select 'Go Back', otherwise you can return to the title with the appropriately named button" every time I want to make a decision...

Heh, try the child post of this if you think it is bad here. It used to make you go all the way back to the title screen, where you had to start over again. Don't worry, I'm working on more options :)

"...a large black dog, his tongue hanging from his tongue..."
what? And shortly afterwords
"...keeping you from being able to see who him, only being able to make a dim outline of wings"
'who he is', I think you meant. And I think you mean 'make OUT a dim outline'
"more then likely" Than.
"make a faint outline" Same as before.
"Or become my a new pet of mine." Remove 'my'.
"Hm, figures your a dog kind of guy." You're.
"Since your not dead" You're.

Also at least 1 double space in there. That's something Word normally picks up, which I assume you used to spellcheck.
You need to get proof readers... Or is that what you're doing right now? Using us as proof readers?

I'll proof read it before the next release. This release was more of a update on completely remaking the Flash. And no, spell check is largely unused (Which isn't Word either). When dealing with the sheer amount of material that has been written with each page being saved in a separate document, it is very easy to close one page and go to the next. Thanks for taking the time to go through and locate mistakes.

You said "maw" waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too many times.

There was a similar "text-adventure" where you can save your state, can't find it, anyone can help?

Rape Fantasies 2 : Electric Boogaloo

Ok, i find it, its called "Corruption of Champions" but thank you anyway :)