martha lorraine (martha speaks) created by bootyjam and papriko
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Welp, here's the colored version of this animation, even when it does look like it, this is not the completed version, but this isn't either a WIP, u like the shiny skin? There is something there I don't see perfectly right...

Anyways, this is not the final version because I may be editing this later to add the... cream... the sweat, saliva, and make her blink again, since someone told me something I thought before, which is that she looks like dead, even when I animated her tail waving. If there is something u see I could do to make it look better, please tell me, and remember the most important thing here, check on PowerJam's work, the artist who made the drawing that made this animation possible.

Apart from that, remember that u can always contact me on discord by "Papriko#3152", I'm taking commisions, so, if u wanna "contract" me, u are completely free t- PLEASE DO, I'M STARVING, I MAY BE A BLUE SHAPESHIFTER SLIME AND A FORCE OF NATURE, BUT I NEED TO EAT!!!!

I mean... heh

Anyways, while sharing this on a discord server, I was told about something, which explained the comments I saw on PowerJam's work, someone recognized the drawing, and told me about a situation Power went through, which I don't know if I can mention in a detailed way for respect.

Power appearently stopped drawing in general (obviously not entirely, but is not as active as he/she used to), due to the acceptance of his/her stuff on internet, I don't know or think if he/she may be reading this, but if u are, please keep it up, we indeed are here for the people who see our stuff, but at the same time, u gotta know to, not to stop hearing, but to know where to stop caring, even the people who dislike what "we" do, are always gonna be honest and will always give u the most transparent critique.

So, once again, this is not about not hearing, this is about caring or not, as a person who had it bad at school, I know this is not about simply ignoring, it is almost impossible, and even more on internet, but please be aware that those are comments of people with a lot of free time, and are always, curiously, behind a screen. Take a break, stop for some weeks or even months if u want, but don't stop doing what u like only because u have been told to, always, as u don't hurt anyone or anything, keep doing what u enjoy... at least get back to draw more "exposable" stuff.

Anyways, with that being said, once again, gonna keep working on previous works and my first commision, hope u all have a good day and night... ah, and I forgot to add and animate his ear piercing x'd

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  • Blinking and breathing are probably what you're looking for. Just moving the tongue and having some panting clouds (like the second half of post #3702901) should probably be enough. Although personally, I already think it's great.

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  • mmmm..dooooonuts
    the balls making contact is so hot, love the couple of wrinkles there are too to emphasize how much we wants it. good work!

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  • Holy smokes this is fire.
    Well, I'm looking forward to the next itteration with the detailing, but this piece is going in the right direction nonetheless.
    I understand if the original creator would withdraw though - this is some really heavy material, not everyone can appreciate it like the folks on this site.
    Anyway, great job, keep up the positive vibes, and wait as I look for a job to get $$ for a comission for you one day.

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  • haoss said:
    Blinking and breathing are probably what you're looking for. Just moving the tongue and having some panting clouds (like the second half of post #3702901) should probably be enough. Although personally, I already think it's great.

    Yep, actually, on the original lineart animation I animated her blinking, but on the process of this piece, I lost those 4 frames, but I'll add it again. And welp, about the panting clouds, I try to not add stuff that isn't present on the original piece, but I'll try... which leads me to anothr question, would u guys like me to add the text?

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  • couchslavemaster said:
    Holy smokes this is fire.
    Well, I'm looking forward to the next itteration with the detailing, but this piece is going in the right direction nonetheless.
    I understand if the original creator would withdraw though - this is some really heavy material, not everyone can appreciate it like the folks on this site.
    Anyway, great job, keep up the positive vibes, and wait as I look for a job to get $$ for a comission for you one day.

    Thanks for that, I'll see if I add the lacking details, it is the idea, but I need to see what can I do...

    Yeh, it is a shame, I mean, u guys know this stuff (feral x human) is not my stuff, but even I know that bully someone on internet, is pretty stupid and not worth the attention, I understand Power's reaction about drawing this stuff, but stopping in general?

    Anyways, thanks for your comment and appreciation, u know where to contact me, but don't worry, don't look for a job just to commision me xd, I still trying to find a way to be paid but keep my information anonymous, so don't worry.

    Have a nice day pal

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  • papriko said:
    Yep, actually, on the original lineart animation I animated her blinking, but on the process of this piece, I lost those 4 frames, but I'll add it again. And welp, about the panting clouds, I try to not add stuff that isn't present on the original piece, but I'll try... which leads me to anothr question, would u guys like me to add the text?

    Well... Personally I don't think it's necessary, but it's ultimately up to you if you think it fits the animation.

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  • You've made some amazing progress so far dude. Thanks again for deciding to animate this composition from Power even tho feral x human isn't really your thing. Yeah the situation with the artist is very unfortunate, the stigma against feral is annoying and I'm sure it's difficult sharing the interest when your art is directly tied to your public image but I'm sure he'd really appreciate this if he hasn't already seen it that is. Only thing I think you can add besides what you have listed is maybe a trail of saliva from Martha's maw to the human to imply a kiss occured

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  • orko said:
    You've made some amazing progress so far dude. Thanks again for deciding to animate this composition from Power even tho feral x human isn't really your thing. Yeah the situation with the artist is very unfortunate, the stigma against feral is annoying and I'm sure it's difficult sharing the interest when your art is directly tied to your public image but I'm sure he'd really appreciate this if he hasn't already seen it that is. Only thing I think you can add besides what you have listed is maybe a trail of saliva from Martha's maw to the human to imply a kiss occured

    I'm starting to see that as long as the proportions are exagerated enough, I could play fool and think it is furry, and work with it not questioning my existence, and yep, I hope he likes this one.

    And yes, I had like... 5 ideas on this animation, first, I wanted to make a quick switch to anal, but didn't get to animate it, but since this wasn't paid, I could try it later, and wanted to add an actual kiss, since I saw the saliva string between their mouths, but didn't get to animate it either, but I could try, also add the blink she had on the original lineart gif I posted.

    Thanks for the suggestions and comments pal, have a good day.

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  • Not the biggest fan of Beasty stuff but damn, those cheek ripples are absolutely amazing! You get a sense of the weight and power going on. Combined with the bed moving around it feels grounded in a 3D space with actual physics instead of two characters just sliding into each other. This is probs one of the best animations I've seen here in terms of quality l.

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  • furpimp said:
    Not the biggest fan of Beasty stuff but damn, those cheek ripples are absolutely amazing! You get a sense of the weight and power going on. Combined with the bed moving around it feels grounded in a 3D space with actual physics instead of two characters just sliding into each other. This is probs one of the best animations I've seen here in terms of quality l.

    Man, I admit these are the kind of comments that make my night, I don't have much to say besides thank you, I've been drawing for like... 5 years and started animating like 1 year ago, but since I did, I really wanted to apply physics and weight, once again, I can't take the whole credit since all this was based on an original drawing, but I certainly wanted it to look good, and yep, I'm not a big fan of it either, but I also didn't want to bring a bad product.

    Maaann, u are giving me more credit than u should, there are WAAAAAYYYY better 2D animators out there, and here on the site, like joaoppereiraus, fuzzamorous or anythinggoes, which I consider some of the best animators here, to not say the BEST ONES here, I have a lot more of artists to mention, but man, if u consider this, one of the bests animations in quality terms, u really need to check their work, but anyways, THANKS BUD, love and peace.

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  • jojo29 said:
    Oh, okay. I just thought you mentioned that there were a few touch ups you needed to get done. Like Martha looking less dead, and his missing earring. That switch to anal would've been nice too. But I guess it might've been a little difficult to do. My bad.

    Nah nah, it's not your bad at all, it's my fault, I'm the one who said so, I could try it, but yep, that'd be a little difficult, but not impossible, remember u can always add me on discord with the tag I left on other posts, and see some other WIPs, thanks for ur support man, have a good one.

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