■ Comparing it to the other story

So I wrote a story a long time ago... well more of a manga about how Levor and Dion first met
I wanted to combine the setting of that story with this one's flashbacks (When Levor and Rumi met for the first time)
After I finished drawing everything, I re-read both stories and found some odd inconsistencies...

In the DIon and Levor story
When Dion caught Levor, he told Margis
"Isn't there some orphanage you can send him to...?"
And Margis replied
"It'd be difficult"
But in this flashback, he says that he could be left to jurit, so That's where i saw the inconsisteny (I can't type that emoji)
Well, it was made a long time ago, Can't fix the past right (RUN

■ About Rumi
Rumi is a Dark haired lop eared character.
At first, she was gong to be orange and curly on one side. and she has hair that sticks out like horns(?)
(1) She only wear one piece of clothing and is completely naked underneath, But originally, she wore underwear. I gave her panties and sports bra to give her a more lively vibe. In the end, she got over excited about Levor almost like a pervert... so she really is lively in the end.

■ About Ilnick
Levor and Rumi were gonna be the main characters of this story, but I felt like I needed to add another boy, so I came up with the slightly different character, Ilnick.
He has a slightly different aura in comparison... or maybe he's just more mature than them...?
He's different from the others in that he sniffed out Dion who was hiding.
He should be older than Levor and Rumi.
He himself also likes Rumi. No wonder, they are together almost all the time after all.
But when Rumi fell for Levor, he still supports them. He likes her, but can't confess... probably too shy... with Levor around
He also reacts to Rumi's bold sex appeal... but the mask hides his embarrassment.

The mask he wore for so long has finally been removed and he won't be wearing it again.
You can see his face a lot.
When he gets embarrassed, Ilnick's face turns red, even redder than his skin tone.