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Public sunbathing
For sxypher wolfie
Continuation of https://www.furaffinity.net/view/55676606/
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From Source :
Public sunbathing
For sxypher wolfie
Continuation of https://www.furaffinity.net/view/55676606/
Jarlium
MemberHey lads. Jarlium here.
So this is the: MONTH OF BRUTAL CRITICISM!
For every art I make this month I would like you guys to critique my stuff so I can get better!
Be direct, be MEAN. Give me your worst. I have a cast iron stomach for critique!
Notes:
- It will be several weeks between your comments and any improvements as I wait 3 weeks between posting and completion because patreon.
- If possible keep your critique contained to this specific piece. I have already been thoroughly informed of general mistakes I do ^^
JAB the Tab
Memberthe lads beneath look a bit close to the roof
DirtyRatMatt
MemberThe nipples look a bit small and not too well drawn, while the vagina looks overblown and almost like a camel toe.
Hope this helps.
Jarlium
MemberHmmmmmmm. That is a fair point.
Now I am going to be fully honest. I do not have the faintest idea on how to fix that.
If anyone has I would love to hear it.
Jarlium
MemberReally does. As I do not really draw ladies there are areas I have to improve a ton on!
JAB the Tab
Membergayass smh my head
Kitch punkbunny
MemberI say this as someone who isn't a artist (so take that grain of salt with this) but the only part that looks like it's touching the glass are the breasts, and I doubt she's balancing on her breasts.
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