Well, mistake number one: The ending is way to sad D,: Poor kitty.

But all joking aside, it really isn't too shabby. I really like the close-ups on the faces, and the way you drew whiteruns silhoutte in the background in that one panel.
The perspective feels a bit weird sometimes, and a bit too, I dunno, strict... but I enjoyed looking at it, and would enjoy to see more of your art. :D

That was a dick move.
It's one thing to ninja the stuff while the other is talking (fine by me)
But don't rob him too.

D:

well someone has a max level in the thievery class

Hawkpelt said:
well someone has a max level in the thievery class

Nah, I'd say that at least sixty points into Speech to intimadate like that.

awwww :(

ThatOneUnicorn said:
awwww :(

Your profile pic is pretty eye catching :O

Vikozlav said:
Your profile pic is pretty eye catching :O

Thanks I pride myself on finding they most eye catching images for avatars

Savage

Kind of a bad idea to make your protagonist immediately unlikeable, isn't it?

"He was allready dead when I got here."

Must have been the dragons or the dangerous kneearrows, allways hunting for unprotected knees! ;)

DRAW MORE

Filthy Khajiit thieves...

Moroze said:
Kind of a bad idea to make your protagonist immediately unlikeable, isn't it?

I think the point is to establish that no, this is not Prequel, the main difference being that Katia is a good person who just wants to forget her past and start again, while this Khajiit is now established as perfectly fine with how things are, and nowhere close to a good person. A bad person can still be a good character, if you make sure any lines crossed are crossed twice.

Hawkpelt said:
well someone has a max level in the thievery class

There is no thievery "class" in Skyrim.

Because the Elder Scrolls stopped giving a shit after Oblivion... D:<

NegaMajora said:
There is no thievery "class" in Skyrim.

Because the Elder Scrolls stopped giving a shit after Oblivion... D:<

And Oblivion is simplified from Morrowind :<