baren, fenavi montaro, lekamo, and miina (tale of tails and etc) created by feretta
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First casualty confirmed. Then again, she's been dead for years before the comic even started, so.. Shouldn't be a surprise, I guess.

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  • damn it fer yo....you weren't lying
    OH GOD PLEASE TELL ME THAT THIS WAS IT PLEASE TELL ME THAT THIS WAS OUR HEARTS BEING RIPPED OUT I CANT TAKE MORE

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  • are you trying to get her smashed with that bottle to try and get revenge for when she got your face smashed with that bucket?

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  • Holy freaking hell that is some brutal transition.
    It almost the exact contrary of what bambi did...

    "I love you mom, I love you forever!"
    "sometime later: mom's fucking dead!"

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  • Oh sure. Give us a heart warming mother/daughter moment in the last strip and just kill her right off in the next one. You couldn't at least showed them enjoying a meal or tucking her in? Why not just tear my heart right out?

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  • Fenavi, I get that you're hurting but engorging yourself on alcohol isn't the answer. If that person was even a smidge decent, he'd offer you a shoulder to cry on instead. Still, I won't judge. Maybe that's his way of coping with things like that. Or maybe he's just a morally deprived swine that's just gunning for a quick lay. If it's the latter, I sencirely hope that he's the one on the receiving end of aggressive sex.

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  • SomeInternetGuy said:
    Called it!

    Also, is Baren the name of the black canine? Is he the same guy that was bullying her a few pages back?

    I'd think so, he's got that scar on his face, probably from a bucket taking his tooth out

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  • Aaawn CRAP!. I like'd Mrs. Montaro, guess little Fen has to leave the Village After spending a little bit of time with that Baren ;_;

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  • Besides killing off her mother in the next panel, Anyone else notice that grey wolf guy, is the same dude, bullying her when she was younger? I mean I know characters (people) can change, but if she really smashed a bucket in his face, would he really be offering some beer to her?

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  • Raiyuki said:
    Besides killing off her mother in the next panel, Anyone else notice that grey wolf guy, is the same dude, bullying her when she was younger? I mean I know characters (people) can change, but if she really smashed a bucket in his face, would he really be offering some beer to her?

    Maybe he respects her more, now that he knows that she's capable of smashing his face in. Plus, it seems like it's YEARS later. I don't know how many for sure, but it definitely seems like at least 5 or 6.

    I guess we will have to wait a week to find out for sure

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  • Panelledsquid said:
    I had a feeling that this would happen soon, just I hadn't hoped it'd be this soon.

    fen seems older so I guess there was a jump in time consisting of a few years or so. remember that this is a flashback.

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  • Can't help but feel Baren has some... Other motives here.

    Might be part of the start of why Fen's personality is how it is...

    Or I could be wrong and he's just trying to cheer her up.

    Conditioning to accept the worst of paths occurring, yay.

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  • Otterjunk said:
    I'd think so, he's got that scar on his face, probably from a bucket taking his tooth out

    looks like he is still missing his tooth, i thought canines could grow infinite amount of teeth?

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  • Dr.myster said:
    How old is fen at this point, so I can confirm if he is a petafile or not

    In this universe as was stated in another work she did 10 years old is considered 18 so really the real question here is, did Fen outlive everyone else because of her dragon blood?

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  • This was a very strange and, quite frankly, poor transition from the last page. I feel like it could've been done much better, since as it is it gives absolutely no indication of passing of time at all.

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  • Crowwolf123 said:
    In this universe as was stated in another work she did 10 years old is considered 18 so really the real question here is, did Fen outlive everyone else because of her dragon blood?

    Well i never got that she is over 1000 year old i was wondering if she was actually 18 years old

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  • blackflag2121 said:
    damn it fer yo....you weren't lying
    OH GOD PLEASE TELL ME THAT THIS WAS IT PLEASE TELL ME THAT THIS WAS OUR HEARTS BEING RIPPED OUT I CANT TAKE MORE

    Oh no, it gets way worse :D

    ElctrcBoogalord said:
    "Sucks that your mom's dead- wanna party?"

    Hey, if it helps..

    tiamat5 said:
    Oh sure. Give us a heart warming mother/daughter moment in the last strip and just kill her right off in the next one. You couldn't at least showed them enjoying a meal or tucking her in? Why not just tear my heart right out?

    Well I could've done an in-between, and maybe I should have, of more moments through time, but I figured the knife was sharp, might as well get things over with :p

    Nihalla said:
    Can't help but feel Baren has some... Other motives here.
    Might be part of the start of why Fen's personality is how it is...
    Or I could be wrong and he's just trying to cheer her up.
    Conditioning to accept the worst of paths occurring, yay.

    Mmm, time will tell, won't it ;)

    SmegHead said:
    looks like he is still missing his tooth, i thought canines could grow infinite amount of teeth?

    Not sure where you got that idea. Canines grow two sets, just like humans.

    SHADOWWOLF20 said:
    How did she die? We want to know.

    Age.

    Dr.myster said:
    How old is fen at this point, so I can confirm if he is a petafile or not

    Legal-old :p I mean she's an animal, so I guess you could say he's a PETAfile, but I'unno if that makes any sense at all.

    CheckUp said:
    This was a very strange and, quite frankly, poor transition from the last page. I feel like it could've been done much better, since as it is it gives absolutely no indication of passing of time at all.

    I don't disagree, and I could've put a page in between, but I also wanted it to be jarring and dislodged, to illustrate that we're walking through fragmented memories. But I'll take it into account for when I do a publishing pass in a few years time :)

    Rylyn said:
    Feretta, we need some pinups of FenFen's mom. That would make the feels a little less harsh.

    Don't worry, I'll draw her s'more. :p

    Dr.myster said:
    Well i never got that she is over 1000 year old i was wondering if she was actually 18 years old

    That is more of a question of who you trust to know her age.. Herself, or some toy drum in a lake with an AI core crammed into it. :p

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  • Feretta said:
    Oh no, it gets way worse :D

    Hey, if it helps..

    Well I could've done an in-between, and maybe I should have, of more moments through time, but I figured the knife was sharp, might as well get things over with :p

    Mmm, time will tell, won't it ;)

    Not sure where you got that idea. Canines grow two sets, just like humans.

    Age.

    Legal-old :p I mean she's an animal, so I guess you could say he's a PETAfile, but I'unno if that makes any sense at all.

    I don't disagree, and I could've put a page in between, but I also wanted it to be jarring and dislodged, to illustrate that we're walking through fragmented memories. But I'll take it into account for when I do a publishing pass in a few years time :)

    Don't worry, I'll draw her s'more. :p

    That is more of a question of who you trust to know her age.. Herself, or some toy drum in a lake with an AI core crammed into it. :p

    Your are one of the few people who respone to the commints of there work that has many followers

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  • Feretta said:
    I don't disagree, and I could've put a page in between, but I also wanted it to be jarring and dislodged, to illustrate that we're walking through fragmented memories. But I'll take it into account for when I do a publishing pass in a few years time :)

    Maybe at the very least the edges of the pages could look a little different, to indicate that time doesn't happen like it does normally.

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  • i had not realized it was fens mom dead until i read the comments. hell i had not realized it was a coffin...

    Anyway.

    To the doubts about people changing: in a upbringing where you have few freinds you take what you can get. People who bullied you earlier might have some regrets or just a good day and when they behave more neutral (not freindly, mind you) you stick to them more than to those that bully you at the given day.

    If that makes any sense.

    I think Something bad will happen at the party and fen is forced to leave or leaves on her own thus coming along with the priest/cleric there eventually learning about the path and finding her way to the monastery.

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  • So, at what age did Fen's black markings start to come in? she looks to be in her early to mid teens (Or equivalent to for the life span of those born into that world) on this page

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  • i just noticed that fen's fingertips, toes, and tail tip aren't black during her childhood.. but they are later on? is it a fur thing, or is there a story to it?

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  • Maxxx_T_Yiffer said:
    So, at what age did Fen's black markings start to come in? she looks to be in her early to mid teens (Or equivalent to for the life span of those born into that world) on this page

    laoblox said:
    i just noticed that fen's fingertips, toes, and tail tip aren't black during her childhood.. but they are later on? is it a fur thing, or is there a story to it?

    Patience, my dears ;)

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  • Feretta said:
    Patience, my dears ;)

    Okay... as an author I get that you want to keep us in suspense for the next plot devise...
    Okay...
    Oka-
    *starts beating on computer screen*
    TEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLLLL MMMMMMMMEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  • SmegHead said:

    looks like he is still missing his tooth, i thought canines could grow infinite amount of teeth?

    Feretta said:

    Not sure where you got that idea. Canines grow two sets, just like humans.

    See this is why I shouldn't make comments on this site at 3 in the morning. Smart brain doesn't think smart

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  • Moroze said:
    Aww, Fen. We'll be your family. An army of anonymous perverts.

    say what you will, I'm here for the story. The sex is just a fun bonus.

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  • fuckboyy~hd said:
    say what you will, I'm here for the story. The sex is just a fun bonus.

    Your name and avvytar really don't inspire confidence in that statement ;)

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  • Feretta said:
    Your name and avvytar really don't inspire confidence in that statement ;)

    Lol true. But hey, I'm allowed to look. As for the name... Well. Mistakes have been made.

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