I'm sure Umbreon's in for a treat!

Page 1 and it's already awesome! Nice work!

I think the umbreon might not be as hungry after this comic ends

Characters can't just proclaim their feelings willy nilly, that makes me very angry!

GtheOtter said:
Characters can't just proclaim their feelings willy nilly, that makes me very angry!

Ah lovely reference my good sir~

Looks interesting so far!

Panel order seems a bit strange though. 2 and 3 look like they were meant to be swapped, in comparison to how panel 1 reads.

xxgato said:
My apologies;I am not too good with comics;this is my first time attempting one.@_@Panel order for this comic is meant to read right to left.It's just what I'm used to.You're right though, the top one should probably be switched around!

great job so far for your first comic :D

Nice. Loving it please continue

Do you need a moment to paw off? Kidding he's totally gonna make Umbreon suck him

James Watt. The power of science

Is there a word for two problems that can fix eachother?

>says its in manga form.
>first top panels make no sense right to left