keith keiser, natani, and zen (twokinds) created by tom fischbach
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"Hungry Like a Wolf"
Natani's puppies have been contained once again, and food now calls.

Sketch of 987th page of TwoKinds.

Transcript

Natani: (Whispering) Zen?

Natani: (Whispering, In Keidran) Zen? Hey, can you hear me? Is anything getting through? Hello?

Natani: Hrm…

Keith: (In Keidran) Back to male again, I see.

Natani: (In Keidran) Huh? Oh, hey!

Natani: (In Keidran) Morning. It’s about time you were up! …Or at least the rest of you is now up… Yeah, turns out the table even spits out magic crystals if you ask it nicely. So the girls are back in the bindings again for now.

Natani: (In Keidran) Hm, why? Disappointed?

YAWN!

Keith: (In Keidran) Eh, honestly, I’d find it weirder if you didn’t.

Natani: (In Keidran) Yeah, well, I have a feeling it’s going to be pretty weird either way once we leave for breakfast, now that the secret’s out. But… I guess I can’t just hide in this room forever.

Keith: (In Keidran) Eugh… “breakfast?” How can you even still think about food after last night?

Natani: (In Keidran) I’m a wolf. Now hurry up, I smell bacon!

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  • the "Hm, why? Disappointed?" line isn't a response to anything that Keith said or did, it's just thrown in there for no reason

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  • Shingen said:
    the "Hm, why? Disappointed?" line isn't a response to anything that Keith said or did, it's just thrown in there for no reason

    K "Back to male again, I see."
    (Nat exposition)
    N "Hm, why? Disappointed?"

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  • Ridentem2 said:
    K "Back to male again, I see."
    (Nat exposition)
    N "Hm, why? Disappointed?"

    the "Hm, why?" part sort of makes sense as an immediate reaction to "Back to male again, I see.", but with these 2 messages in-between, one of which is already a response to that statement, it loses that "you surprised me with your statement" aspect.
    my guess is, it's a leftover from an older version of that conversation, where it was said immediately after Keith's statement. or, originally he had another line before that.

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  • Shingen said:
    the "Hm, why? Disappointed?" line isn't a response to anything that Keith said or did, it's just thrown in there for no reason

    yeah kinda weird, I went back for a moment thinking i missed what keith said, but it turns out nat just waited until after expositing an entire paragraph before responding to him.

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  • owo_whats_this said:
    yeah kinda weird, I went back for a moment thinking i missed what keith said, but it turns out nat just waited until after expositing an entire paragraph before responding to him.

    When you overthink it, it does seem wierd. But, we're human and we understand context.

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  • He commented about her bounding his/her breasts again. She (he?) asked why. I don't get how this is confusing.

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