chiropterana, roberta kain, and soupy created by eric schwartz
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"Chiropterana Begins", Page 8

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  • well I wouldn't say you know nothing.

    You know she has red eyes, possibly highschool student based on outfit, maybe college, is actually a bat, brown fur, red hair, about the same height as you, though much slimmer.

    Access to the local high school/college records, time to sort applicants based on known factors, and search their files for addresses, family, siblings, after school activity, everything you tell everyone without saying anything and more. And once it's narrowed down to the minimal number of people possible, then all it takes is a little process of...

    elimination.

    Now read this again with The Majors voice.

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  • We need a continuation of this story.

    Zigzag, moonlighting at Lust Lass, sees everything that just transpired, and she decides to stop playing supervillain for the time being. A young woman was just violated, and she will NOT let that stand! She considers dealing some justice on Soupy, but she stays her hand; she has another idea... She keeps a watchful eye on Bobbie Kain and learns that her ordeal was more traumatic than she initially thought. She has nightmares about being molested by garbage and filth... Zigzag takes pity on her, and takes her under her wing to train her how to better fight the criminal element. Through their many trials and tribulations, they become the Dynamic Duo that Gem City needs, and they quickly become lovers as well.

    One night, 'Rana is out on patrol on her own because LL had some business to attend to elsewhere. She radios 'Rana to meet her at a secluded location, and she finds that LL has Soupy bound and gagged! LL explains that she has given 'Rana this chance to give justice to this vile creature who raped her. 'Rana is suddenly hit with visions of that horrible night when she was humiliated... treated like someone's plaything... when she felt more disgusting than the hobo cock she titfucked. Something snaps in her, and she bears her fangs and prepares to sink them deeply into Soupy's jugular!...

    ...But she can't do it. She sees LL standing there, and she remembers everything they've been through. Everything they've taught each other about being a hero. She turns away in disgust from what she almost did, denouncing it as vengeance, not justice. Justice is about balance. LL commends her partner for not doing something she'd soon regret. But Soupy must still be dealt with, and as such, LL attaches her handy utility strap-on! 'Rana smiles. "THAT'S seem like it'll balance things out a bit." >;)

    *GULP!* O_O

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  • RobDollar said:
    We need a continuation of this story.

    Zigzag, moonlighting at Lust Lass, sees everything that just transpired, and she decides to stop playing supervillain for the time being. A young woman was just violated, and she will NOT let that stand! She considers dealing some justice on Soupy, but she stays her hand; she has another idea... She keeps a watchful eye on Bobbie Kain and learns that her ordeal was more traumatic than she initially thought. She has nightmares about being molested by garbage and filth... Zigzag takes pity on her, and takes her under her wing to train her how to better fight the criminal element. Through their many trials and tribulations, they become the Dynamic Duo that Gem City needs, and they quickly become lovers as well.

    One night, 'Rana is out on patrol on her own because LL had some business to attend to elsewhere. She radios 'Rana to meet her at a secluded location, and she finds that LL has Soupy bound and gagged! LL explains that she has given 'Rana this chance to give justice to this vile creature who raped her. 'Rana is suddenly hit with visions of that horrible night when she was humiliated... treated like someone's plaything... when she felt more disgusting than the hobo cock she titfucked. Something snaps in her, and she bears her fangs and prepares to sink them deeply into Soupy's jugular!...

    ...But she can't do it. She sees LL standing there, and she remembers everything they've been through. Everything they've taught each other about being a hero. She turns away in disgust from what she almost did, denouncing it as vengeance, not justice. Justice is about balance. LL commends her partner for not doing something she'd soon regret. But Soupy must still be dealt with, and as such, LL attaches her handy utility strap-on! 'Rana smiles. "THAT'S seem like it'll balance things out a bit." >;)

    *GULP!* O_O

    Eric Schwarz, get on this pronto!

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  • mad_dok said:
    well I wouldn't say you know nothing.

    You know she has red eyes, possibly highschool student based on outfit, maybe college, is actually a bat, brown fur, red hair, about the same height as you, though much slimmer.

    Access to the local high school/college records, time to sort applicants based on known factors, and search their files for addresses, family, siblings, after school activity, everything you tell everyone without saying anything and more. And once it's narrowed down to the minimal number of people possible, then all it takes is a little process of...

    elimination.

    Now read this again with The Majors voice.

    lol, I hadn't realized that, thanks, it can be great for my fanfic X3

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