Plastic pokemans toy fucking a shittily-made pokemans beaniebaby

Deathcrest_The_Shark said:
Plastic pokemans toy fucking a shittily-made pokemans beaniebaby

People don't post their art just to be laughed at, asshole. They seek constructive critisism to help improve their craft.

@Someonesomewhere did you create these models or are they barrowed assets?

CoupDeGrace said:
@Someonesomewhere did you create these models or are they barrowed assets?

Made everything from scratch.

This picture is something else

someonesomewhere said:
Made everything from scratch.

Well to me, other than a few rough edges in the kadabras joints, the base model work is pretty good. I'd say that's one of the better aspects of this post. The posing doesn't seem half bad either. I think detailing is one of your main problems here. The glossiness of the yellow areas of Kadabra's skin seems to clash with its texturing in such a way that it makes it look more like the exoskeleton of an insect. Perhaps try lowering the glossiness of the model? As for the ratatat, I think you have a good idea of what a rat looks like in real life but not what a ratatat looks like. Try refining the appearance of your ratatat model so that it looks either more like a ratatat or fits an overall "pokemon" appearance like your kadabra. This way, your art style will be more consistent.

@CoupDeGrace I used rattata as the base for the model, but I intentionally made the anatomy a bit more like a real rat to make the style less cartoonish.