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  • Neat concept, does kinda bother me that every instance of the word "bioluminescence" has the word "glow" in parenthesis right next to it... might as well just say "glow" instead of "bioluminescence".

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  • Allegro said:
    Neat concept, does kinda bother me that every instance of the word "bioluminescence" has the word "glow" in parenthesis right next to it... might as well just say "glow" instead of "bioluminescence".

    The artist is trying to make this sound scientific so she used the word bioluminescence, and some poeple might not know what that means so the artist put the word glow after it.

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  • Dragonlover77 said:
    The artist is trying to make this sound scientific so she used the word bioluminescence, and some poeple might not know what that means so the artist put the word glow after it.

    Yeah... I got that. I don't really think bioluminescence is that difficult of a word to wrap your head around. I was just pointing out how it was redundant and speaking in simpler terms makes more sense if you're talking to a more general audience. Even then, if she wanted to sound scientific she could've wrote the word "glow" next to the first occurrence of the word "bioluminescence", that way it's clarified once and she can still use the word she prefers.

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