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A Helping Hand - Page 8

I'd like to give another friendly reminder that for me, drawing this comic is about getting used to the actual mechanics of making comics, about pacing and panel layout and motion and stuff like that- the story is basically written page to page and, as such, is pretty awful. So far everyone has been frightfully kind about it for some reason, but the writing is not so great, and for now that's okay. If I do another in the future I'll try and clean up that aspect of my comic making, but for now I hope it's at least not too distracting. :P

With that out of the way, here's page 8! Poor fella didn't last very long, but nobody was surprised by that. Gale knew what he was getting into.

Some of the drawing panels are a little wonky here, I'm still getting used to drawing 'natural' poses. Most of my work is smut, which tends to be fairly "posed" looking by it's very nature, so just drawing people being natural isn't something I'm super used to. Also drawing things in perspective without spending a ton of time on every panel is going to take some learnin'. I'll get there, hopefully!

If you happen to enjoy this comic and want to help me finish it, and potentially make more in the future (I've got a hypnosis/mind control themed idea I'm real keen on trying...), consider checking out my Patreon!

Patreon https://www.patreon.com/ruaidri Patreon

Any support at all is hugely appreciated and helps me work on projects like this. You also get some little bonuses, like getting to see the pages as I finish them! I'm taking a little break to work on some commissions right now, but Patreon supporters will be the first to see when I'm back to making pages. (Should be sometime the week after next!)

If that's not your style though, no worries! I'd still love to hear your thoughts. :D

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  • soman3 said:
    please dont let it be a chastity cage... i hate those things

    It's definitely a chastity cage. The fox character's name was
    "green chastity fox" for a long time.

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  • SomeInternetGuy said:
    It’s a chastity cage.

    fancyhat said:
    It's definitely a chastity cage. The fox character's name was
    "green chastity fox" for a long time.

    Why am I getting downvotes and the other guy getting upvoted? Is the fact that Gale was known as “green chastity fox” that important?

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  • SomeInternetGuy said:
    Why am I getting downvotes and the other guy getting upvoted? Is the fact that Gale was known as “green chastity fox” that important?

    Probably think you are spoiling the story. But yea that fox has been wearing a cage for years now.

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  • soman3 said:
    please dont let it be a chastity cage... i hate those things

    i wanted to point out the key on his neck ages ago.. but thought I'd leave it alone.. i'm afraid it is likely going that way all along

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  • soman3 said:
    please dont let it be a chastity cage... i hate those things

    Yeah, I was feeling the same way as you. I was gutted after the next page. Nevertheless, it is still not a bad comic.

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  • Alexander_James said:
    Out of random curiosity, why does it seem a lot of people are against the chasity cage idea?

    I think lots of people consider orgasm denial to be abusive. You'd have to really trust eachother for such a relationship to work out. And it can, but it can also be abusive as fuck. And I'm betting no third party could ever really tell the difference. In some cases, I don't even think the participants can. A dom/sub chastity relationship can be loving and beutiful, but think thrice before you put that cage on.

    Personally I'm split; I've read a lot of dom/sub erotica and it scarouses me like hell.

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  • MyNameIsOver20charac said:
    I think lots of people consider orgasm denial to be abusive. You'd have to really trust eachother for such a relationship to work out. And it can, but it can also be abusive as fuck. And I'm betting no third party could ever really tell the difference. In some cases, I don't even think the participants can. A dom/sub chastity relationship can be loving and beutiful, but think thrice before you put that cage on.

    Personally I'm split; I've read a lot of dom/sub erotica and it scarouses me like hell.

    Okay. Yeah, makes sense now. Thank for cleaning that up for me!
    Personally myself, I’m quite intrigued by the idea.

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  • Alexander_James said:
    Okay. Yeah, makes sense now. Thank for cleaning that up for me!

    Glad I could help ^.^

    Personally myself, I’m quite intrigued by the idea.

    So am I, but as a kink. This would be a lifestyle, and I'm not sure I'd want that.

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