Now those are some nice femboys!

The absol is my favourite

SomeInternetGuy said:
Now those are some nice femboys!

Thanks! I definitely had a lot of fun drawing this set. :)

Furrynomous said:
The absol is my favourite

Thanks, I loved doing his pose haha

These are some great femboys Jak! If you'd like, I can offer you some criticism on them, but it's cool if you don't want it. My favorite is the voir, but uh, if you couldn't tell, I'm a little biased~.

JadePrime said:
These are some great femboys Jak! If you'd like, I can offer you some criticism on them, but it's cool if you don't want it. My favorite is the voir, but uh, if you couldn't tell, I'm a little biased~.

Haha yeah, I can see why Gardevoir is your favorite and sure, I'm open to hearing some constructive criticism.

Ratchetjak said:
Haha yeah, I can see why Gardevoir is your favorite and sure, I'm open to hearing some constructive criticism.

Great! Lets start with the two I think need the most work, then go onto a more general sense. The lucario and the hypno. Of the five, their junk looks the most...tacked on, persay. Like the whole thing was drawn and then the dick was just kinda pasted on top. For the lucario, the blue to red coloring between his body and his dick just looks very unsmooth. Making it blue as well, maybe a darker shade would of been a better idea imo, would of looked more natural. The hypno however, has better coloring but...man, that dick is WAY too high up on his body. It looks like it's coming out of his stomach rather than his crotch. Moving on, there's a strange lack of...balls on any of them. I mean, it's very noticeable on the lucario and voir, since they're more frontfacing. Also, the tips of their lengths are not...smoothly connected. They have a somewhat disjointed 'tiny tip' look, or, a strange crowning look like on the voirs. Personally I think a more 'equal' look would of been better, the shaft and tip being the same thickness, as the separation of the length and the tip is usually subtle. For cock shape, I think the best thing to use is a pipe. Most dicks don't really have varying size along the shaft. Lastly, this is more just of a nickpick, you put nips on the absol who has fur but none on the Gengar whos chest is bare? That's about all I can think of, hope it helps! Also, hope none it offends, it can be a tricky wire to balance to stay non-offensive. ^^;

JadePrime said:
Great! Lets start with the two I think need the most work, then go onto a more general sense. The lucario and the hypno. Of the five, their junk looks the most...tacked on, persay. Like the whole thing was drawn and then the dick was just kinda pasted on top. For the lucario, the blue to red coloring between his body and his dick just looks very unsmooth. Making it blue as well, maybe a darker shade would of been a better idea imo, would of looked more natural. The hypno however, has better coloring but...man, that dick is WAY too high up on his body. It looks like it's coming out of his stomach rather than his crotch. Moving on, there's a strange lack of...balls on any of them. I mean, it's very noticeable on the lucario and voir, since they're more frontfacing. Also, the tips of their lengths are not...smoothly connected. They have a somewhat disjointed 'tiny tip' look, or, a strange crowning look like on the voirs. Personally I think a more 'equal' look would of been better, the shaft and tip being the same thickness, as the separation of the length and the tip is usually subtle. For cock shape, I think the best thing to use is a pipe. Most dicks don't really have varying size along the shaft. Lastly, this is more just of a nickpick, you put nips on the absol who has fur but none on the Gengar whos chest is bare? That's about all I can think of, hope it helps! Also, hope none it offends, it can be a tricky wire to balance to stay non-offensive. ^^;

Ah okay. Well the penises on Lucario & Hypno weren't pasted on, I did include them in the drawing during my sketching process lol. I don't really see it with Lucario to be honest but with Hypno, yeah looking back, I see what you mean, I placed it too high so a simple edit should be able to fix that no problem.

As for Lucario's dick... Yeah I had a feeling I should've went with a darker blue instead of a darker pinkish red, I was trying to keep it simple as I don't see many oddly colored dicks but perhaps for Lucario, it would've been a good exception so again, simple edit lol.

For the lack of balls, it's mainly because I was going for a more frontal look but yeah, I'll look into that for next time. I'll take into consideration that cock shape, I'm still experimenting with drawing them since I'm not a primary NSFW artist lol.

And for the nipple thing, yeah I can see how it dooesn't make sense for a bare-skinned Gengar to not have a nipples. Again, will definitely take consideration with that. :)

Ratchetjak said:
Ah okay. Well the penises on Lucario & Hypno weren't pasted on, I did include them in the drawing during my sketching process lol. I don't really see it with Lucario to be honest but with Hypno, yeah looking back, I see what you mean, I placed it too high so a simple edit should be able to fix that no problem.

As for Lucario's dick... Yeah I had a feeling I should've went with a darker blue instead of a darker pinkish red, I was trying to keep it simple as I don't see many oddly colored dicks but perhaps for Lucario, it would've been a good exception so again, simple edit lol.

For the lack of balls, it's mainly because I was going for a more frontal look but yeah, I'll look into that for next time. I'll take into consideration that cock shape, I'm still experimenting with drawing them since I'm not a primary NSFW artist lol.

And for the nipple thing, yeah I can see how it dooesn't make sense for a bare-skinned Gengar to not have a nipples. Again, will definitely take consideration with that. :)

Great! Here's looking forward to your next pieces! Cheers~.