See, this is the kind of OC that everyone finds obnoxious: The one that tries to push itself into a serious plot or relationship with the main cast, or just acts like a spoiled brat. There's potential for a good story there, but more often than not it just devolves into a poorly written self-insert messing with established relationships in a manner that brings shame to the original writing; the exact opposite of what it's trying to do.

I like the art, it's actually quite good. But as a guy who's been writing fanfics for over a decade I can't help but be reminded of everyone who makes people like me look bad... I'm not saying I'm a master writer, far from it. But I can at least tell a good idea from a bad one.

And it doesn't help that NTR is getting such a deservedly bad rep lately. >_>

DarkBlue666 said:
See, this is the kind of OC that everyone finds obnoxious: The one that tries to push itself into a serious plot or relationship with the main cast, or just acts like a spoiled brat. There's potential for a good story there, but more often than not it just devolves into a poorly written self-insert messing with established relationships in a manner that brings shame to the original writing; the exact opposite of what it's trying to do.

I like the art, it's actually quite good. But as a guy who's been writing fanfics for over a decade I can't help but be reminded of everyone who makes people like me look bad... I'm not saying I'm a master writer, far from it. But I can at least tell a good idea from a bad one.

And it doesn't help that NTR is getting such a deservedly bad rep lately. >_>

this^

DarkBlue666 said:
See, this is the kind of OC that everyone finds obnoxious:

At least both of her eyes are the same color. lol

DarkBlue666 said:
See, this is the kind of OC that everyone finds obnoxious: The one that tries to push itself into a serious plot or relationship with the main cast, or just acts like a spoiled brat. There's potential for a good story there, but more often than not it just devolves into a poorly written self-insert messing with established relationships in a manner that brings shame to the original writing; the exact opposite of what it's trying to do.

I like the art, it's actually quite good. But as a guy who's been writing fanfics for over a decade I can't help but be reminded of everyone who makes people like me look bad... I'm not saying I'm a master writer, far from it. But I can at least tell a good idea from a bad one.

And it doesn't help that NTR is getting such a deservedly bad rep lately. >_>

Guess the artist didn't consider the fact that what s/he was about to draw might upset people or bring shame to the source material, how inconsiderate.

DarkBlue666 said:
See, this is the kind of OC that everyone finds obnoxious: The one that tries to push itself into a serious plot or relationship with the main cast, or just acts like a spoiled brat. There's potential for a good story there, but more often than not it just devolves into a poorly written self-insert messing with established relationships in a manner that brings shame to the original writing; the exact opposite of what it's trying to do.

I like the art, it's actually quite good. But as a guy who's been writing fanfics for over a decade I can't help but be reminded of everyone who makes people like me look bad... I'm not saying I'm a master writer, far from it. But I can at least tell a good idea from a bad one.

And it doesn't help that NTR is getting such a deservedly bad rep lately. >_>

I can see some potential for a fanfic involving a OC breaking into a established platonic relationship like that of Nick and Judy. Character growth, some drama and jealousy to spice things up, maybe a criminal case as sidequest, meaningful lessons on feelings and adult relationships as conclusion for the story. The good art is there, all is left is a good writing.

lynx... who?

DarkBlue666 said:
See, this is the kind of OC that everyone finds obnoxious: The one that tries to push itself into a serious plot or relationship with the main cast, or just acts like a spoiled brat. There's potential for a good story there, but more often than not it just devolves into a poorly written self-insert messing with established relationships in a manner that brings shame to the original writing; the exact opposite of what it's trying to do.

I like the art, it's actually quite good. But as a guy who's been writing fanfics for over a decade I can't help but be reminded of everyone who makes people like me look bad... I'm not saying I'm a master writer, far from it. But I can at least tell a good idea from a bad one.

And it doesn't help that NTR is getting such a deservedly bad rep lately. >_>

As a fellow fanfiction writer I agree.

A few great artist I've seen on this have made comics that, while looking good, are very poor in terms of storytelling. Being an artist and being a comic writer are never the same thing. Different parables are present.

Voss said:
lynx... who?

The author is a Lynx furry.

Lynxgirl keeps THAT up, she's gonna find out just how savage a prey species can get!

ohhhh, LYNXgirl. I thought the tag was ReallyNXGirl

robdollar said:
At least both of her eyes are the same color. lol

Yeah no shit.