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Something I've been working on for quite a while now! Unfortunately I ran into a lot of problems along the way, and some of them I only noticed in the final render, so it's not quite as nice a result as I would have liked. The worst offender- as usual- is the fluids. They ended up having a weird speckled effect that I didn't notice in individual render tests, and it's far too late to do much about it now. I'll just try to improve that down the road. There are lots of other little issues too, some are my fault, some aren't (I had an issue where I couldn't create a wetmap for the lizard girl any higher than around a 160 pixel resolution, which isn't much at all, or blender would crash. So the wetting looks a bit weird too and there was nothing I could do about it), but I really just need to be done with this so I can move on to other things. It's been a pain in the butt and the result isn't quite worth all the suffering yet, but I still think every animation gets a bit better. I'll keep at it.

Overall, it's not perfect, but I do think it's my best so far, and I definitely learned a lot making it. Hopefully the next will be even better!

I'd love to know your thoughts! :D

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  • Its pretty damn good, ive no real critique to offer, the characters look good, 'specially the lass, the animations pretty good, the look of fur is damn good. Fluids are hard i hear indeed but the distance makes it so it doesnt need to be so spot on. Climax is a bit jerky but that could be preference or uniqueness of a character!.
    also shoutout to the lighting :P
    and put yourself as artist!

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  • Holy cow.

    They're both so cute! And all the secondary animations are fantastic. This is so alive and the amount of work you put into it shows.

    Well fucking done.

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  • Oh god, the spastic climax was amazing, thats something I haven't seen from anyone else. Also amazing that he *gets overstimulated* and pushes her off of him. Those are great details. All of the motions are perfect in my opinion.

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  • cornstarch42 said:
    Its pretty damn good...

    Thanks man! Yeah, the big event could be toned down a bit, didn't notice it 'till a bit late. Something to work on, but I'm glad I'm doing alright so far!

    And thanks to everyone else, super happy you're all enjoying it! :3

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  • I love how she goes right back on it at the end! The small details are what really make this animation stand out. Great work! <3

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  • Hot damn! This is great.

    The only pointer I have is that the motion seems to be just slightly jerky/unnatural, but I only saw that after rewatching it... a few times. The four things I'd say to keep in mind are:

    1- Equal and opposite reactions: One thing that most people never think about is that when you grab something and move it, your arm is pulling on you just as hard as on the thing you're moving. Your body has much more mass normally so it moves proportionally less (F=M*A so if something is twice as massive, it'll pick up half the acceleration) especially when he yanks her head forward, he should overall (think total center of mass) move towards her slightly.

    2- Everything's a spring. There's no such thing as a perfectly rigid object, and the more rigid it is, the more brittle. Therefore things will always flex slightly to accommodate the forces applied to it and no one should ever be able to move rigidly no matter how much they tense up. Watching slow mo footage of real martial arts or even MMA might help you get a feel for it here as the interactions are real and easier to see.

    3- Everything has inertia. Sometimes people forget to take into account that motions take time to ramp up to peak velocity, then time to ramp back down as the energy is dissipated one way or another. If you already are taking this into account it might be worthwhile to play with how much ramping you apply.

    4- Put together this means that if there is any motion in the body, there should be at least some minimal motion through the entire body as forces ripple through and limbs push and pull on eachother through their joints. This is one of the most common reasons I've seen as to why certain CGI videos look fake/unnatural compared to others. For example take a close look at the head/ears. To me (sorry if I'm wrong) they appear to be one rigid unit, but ears are comparatively flimsy. When he jerks around their momentum should be trying to keep them in place. While they are fairly low mass, they should still flex somewhat, and more so in directions where they would be structurally weaker. In this case for example, I'd've expected the ears to flex forward notably when he jerked his head back. I understand this is unfeasible to universally apply, but the more you can take this into account the more realistic your renders will look.

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  • This is, if not THE best, within the top '3 Best' BJ animations I've ever seen!
    The way the Wolf flinches (with pleasure), begins bucking and then uncontrollably thrusts, grabbing her head/horn and slamming forward?
    Holy, moley!!

    The post-climax? Leaning back into the counter, her head pointed down, gasping as she regains her breath?

    That 'Eye-Popping' expression as she again takes him into her mouth, right after he climaxes?

    Beautiful attention to detail, all around!

    I only wish there was a way to 'Favorite' ten times!

    Thanks for sharing!

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  • Looks great, especially the orgasm ^^

    My critic would be that he seems too dark, a soft light from behind the camera should help. Or don't "film against the sun"

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  • Now that... was a splendid animation. Loved how he twitched like he'd touched a live wire. The hand slipping off the counter was a good touch. And her eyes when he jerked her head, his eyes at the end (which could've looped seamlessly to the beginning). Been hitting e621 for years and this is the first animation I've ever bothered to save.

    Animators are getting better all the time, keep it up.

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  • Fucking Incredible, don't put yourself down for small problems here and there. overall, it's a pretty premium animation!.

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  • Having been with a partner who overstimulates me from time to time, a genuine "back off a moment" is rare and appreciated. Don't know about the flailing, but the concept and base animation are much appreciated.

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  • I've lost count of how many times I've watched this. The animation really is quite phenomenal, as are the ones you did of Syandene.

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  • Very well animated; very nice graphically; the characters and environment are very detailed.

    If there is any one thing that bothers me, and this is a personal thing mind you, is why so rough? Poor girl is trying to give him pleasure, and he nearly breaks her jaw trying to force it further. Actually felt bad for after seeing it.

    Overall very well done though.

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  • woah its almost like the man actually feels something when cumming..
    I find it too sad that almost no porn artist considers this.
    Great job x)

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  • This is so fucking good I had to make sure there wasn’t some sort of “too good for e621” clause in the site rules.

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  • I just looked through Ruaidri's stuff, and I realized they've been posting art for at least twelve years.

    That's determination - and this level of quality shows it.

    #respect

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  • Damn! What I really need is a pov version of this from him looking down on her, except I guess then I'd end up like one of those guys who jacked off 45 times in a row and died.

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  • Damn Ruaidri! I'm so impressed! ...and very turned on :D. I love the expressions you gave the wolf, I can't think of many other naughty furry animations I've seen that are so expressive. The characters are so cute too! Big fan of your style :)

    I saw your comment about the big moment being a little much, and while I agree it could be toned down a bit, the wild, out of control actions were really hot. If you can keep that same wild animalistic spirit with a little more realism, that would be amazing.

    Thanks for sharing this awesome work!

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  • DracosBlackwing said:
    Very well animated; very nice graphically; the characters and environment are very detailed.

    If there is any one thing that bothers me, and this is a personal thing mind you, is why so rough? Poor girl is trying to give him pleasure, and he nearly breaks her jaw trying to force it further. Actually felt bad for after seeing it.

    Overall very well done though.

    It kinda looks like he just looses control, the afterglow moments makes me think he wasn't expecting it to be so intense.

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  • DracosBlackwing said:
    Very well animated; very nice graphically; the characters and environment are very detailed.

    If there is any one thing that bothers me, and this is a personal thing mind you, is why so rough? Poor girl is trying to give him pleasure, and he nearly breaks her jaw trying to force it further. Actually felt bad for after seeing it.

    Overall very well done though.

    This lizard girl is a slave. Her comfort is not exactly his concern, I'd bet.

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  • That was awesome, the climax was awesome, hope to see your female canine model doing the same, your artwork has always been fantastic and your animations are next level.

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  • If the artist reads these comments..

    I am SHOCKED that this isn't rated as one of the top 30 anims on the entire site.

    This is incredible, it's not completely perfect but nothing is ever completely perfect down to the nitty gritty.

    Still easily deserving of the top 30 on this site.

    Exquisite animation Ruai

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  • I thought the red fur on his chest was blood, and my first thought was, 'this dude got his throat cut and he was like, "babe give me a blowjob, quick!"'

    I need help

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