aliester, bryant, jake, and owen (lapping the competition) created by zaush
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Lapping the Competition - Page 10

The 10th and final page in this comic short. Believe me when I say that I'm very disappointed with this page on multiple levels. Not only is this the rushed result of having to truncate the end by a page or two, but I was so under the gun to get this finished that I couldn't even allot time to shade the characters. As a result, the page falls flat, and the potential for something really sexy or interesting is lost. Crappy background work doesn't make for a better experience either, the establishing panel is weak at best.

All in all, I was really glad to see this comic make it into issue 3 of HEAT. Thanks goes out to Sofawolf for publishing me, and for giving the OK to post this comic.

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    user 71813

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    This comic is sweet and hot, fun, and insightful. I love the wolf's expressions from contemplative to blissful. It's great

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    Viethra

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    I never understood the *pop* sound considering this is one of those worlds where canines tend to have humanoid penises.

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