Welp... this is a thing.

If the porn side is good I can ignore the story

Either someone is translating in very bad english or he made the page with blank speech bubbles and someone is filling it in

What's going on HERE?

Be like sticking your dick in the neck of a bottle...

I'm sorry :c english isn't my native language, I tried my best.

Feel free to correct me if you see any mistakes now or in the future. Thank you, and again, sorry.

TaillessBunny said:
I'm sorry :c english isn't my native language, I tried my best.

Feel free to correct me if you see any mistakes now or in the future. Thank you, and again, sorry.

Nah, it's all good. Except for the word "cheeating" which is "cheating"

Except this, everything is correct ;)

Oh? I'd like to see the cheating nick and otter part as well!

I don't quite get what Bogo is trying to imply about foxes not settling down. They mate for life, cheating isn't something a fox would normally do.

The biology is questionable, the movie-initiated racism is kicked up to eleven, is... Nick doing double-duty adultery-ing with Mrs. Otterton and did Go to just admit to a workplace interaction violation? He wanted since day one... even after a relationship started.

Welcome back, Mr. Borba, your tutu and pineapple are waiting.

I don't mind the fact of Judy X Bogo sex but did it have to include cheating tacked on somewhere?

Can't it just have Nick and Judy not together here? There's nothing wrong with that.

AlexanderMugetsu said:
I don't mind the fact of Judy X Bogo sex but did it have to include cheating tacked on somewhere?

Can't it just have Nick and Judy not together here? There's nothing wrong with that.

As strange as that sounds, there are people who actually find cheating attractive, as per why, I have no idea. I don't, but I know I'm not the be-all, end-all.

Henlein_TheKobold said:
Nah, it's all good. Except for the word "cheeating" which is "cheating"

Except this, everything is correct ;)

No it isn't. I know you're trying to be nice, but falsely telling someone everything is correct when it isn't is not going to help improve their English skills. "I wanted to came inside of you" is absolutely not correct.

"Settle down" should be "Settling down", "He does that" should be "He is doing this", and "in my day off" should be "on my day off".

SexyGriffon said:
No it isn't. I know you're trying to be nice, but falsely telling someone everything is correct when it isn't is not going to help improve their English skills. "I wanted to came inside of you" is absolutely not correct.

"Settle down" should be "Settling down", "He does that" should be "He is doing this", and "in my day off" should be "on my day off".

Glad I'm not the only one who wanted to disprove that "everything is correct" statement. There are several grammatical errors throughout this page, and as you said, sugarcoating it won't help them learn better English.

Sparks127 said:
I don't quite get what Bogo is trying to imply about foxes not settling down. They mate for life, cheating isn't something a fox would normally do.

Bunnies aren't dumb either, given brain-to-body size. As with all other stereotypes in the movie they're human ones, not biological truths.

This is rather good artwork despite the content.
The surprised Bogo expression is very good, as I can't think of a good reference point in the movie to work from, except the 'being busted with the Gazelle app' scene?
Not sugarcoating, there are a range of spelling and grammatical errors here, that will hopefully get better with practice.

SexyGriffon said:
No it isn't. I know you're trying to be nice, but falsely telling someone everything is correct when it isn't is not going to help improve their English skills. "I wanted to came inside of you" is absolutely not correct.

"Settle down" should be "Settling down", "He does that" should be "He is doing this", and "in my day off" should be "on my day off".

DieselWzl said:
Glad I'm not the only one who wanted to disprove that "everything is correct" statement. There are several grammatical errors throughout this page, and as you said, sugarcoating it won't help them learn better English.

I wasn't trying to be nice or sugarcoating anything. I really thought it was correct and tried to praise it. I'm not a native english speaker as well but I'm using english almost 15 years and I didn't see anything wrong at that hour. I just did a quick peek and didn't notice anything at first. No one is perfect

If you guys thought it was gramatically wrong, you could just said that. You didn't need assumpt I was sugarcoating or something

And now seeing again, I noticed some other things: "believe" is missing a letter as well and it's "since the day we 'met'", not "meet"

So I'm sorry if it was a rushed praise saying "everything is correct"

Thank you all for the corrections, I’ll fix the original and re-post it here.
Also the part about nick cheating was because I wanted to draw a scene with nick, the otter and maybe Judy, or another character.
I don’t know yet.

Which characters would you prefer to see? I accept suggestions :3

TaillessBunny said:
Thank you all for the corrections, I’ll fix the original and re-post it here.
Also the part about nick cheating was because I wanted to draw a scene with nick, the otter and maybe Judy, or another character.
I don’t know yet.

Which characters would you prefer to see? I accept suggestions :3

Honestly, the whole "Nick cheating" thing has been done to death and never really goes over very well. You'd probably get less backlash if it was just an open relationship, or if Nick and Judy weren't a couple at all.

TaillessBunny said:
Thank you all for the corrections, I’ll fix the original and re-post it here.
Also the part about nick cheating was because I wanted to draw a scene with nick, the otter and maybe Judy, or another character.
I don’t know yet.

Which characters would you prefer to see? I accept suggestions :3

One without the infidelity or any implications of such.

TaillessBunny said:
Thank you all for the corrections, I’ll fix the original and re-post it here.
Also the part about nick cheating was because I wanted to draw a scene with nick, the otter and maybe Judy, or another character.
I don’t know yet.

Which characters would you prefer to see? I accept suggestions :3

Do whatever your heart wants and ignore the whiny fanbase.

...but whatever you end up doing, please draw Nick with the Otter. That sounds awesome.

The amount of people getting riled up over fictional characters cheating in a non-cannon porn comic is astounding.

Welp....that was easy. A little too easy TBH this is the first page. But points for getting right to it.

I find it so strange when people use the fact Nick is a fox to say he would be unfaithful when foxes usually have only one partner through their life, sometimes they even die of depression after their partner dies.

Was this supposed to be a comic or just a single pic? given that it says part 1 on description.