I guess it was a dream 😉

wwohh, i did not see that plot coming

It was all a dream, I used to read Word Up! magazine
Salt-n-Pepa and Heavy D up in the limousine
Hangin' pictures on my wall
Every Saturday Rap Attack, Mr. Magic, Marley Marl
I let my tape rock 'til my tape popped
Smokin' weed in Bambu, sippin' on Private Stock
Way back, when I had the red and black lumberjack
With the hat to match
Remember Rappin' Duke? Duh-ha, duh-ha
You never thought that hip-hop would take it this far
Now I'm in the limelight 'cause I rhyme tight
Time to get paid, blow up like the World Trade
Born sinner, the opposite of a winner
Remember when I used to eat sardines for dinner
Peace to Ron G, Brucie B, Kid Capri
Funkmaster Flex, Lovebug Starski
I'm blowin' up like you thought I would
Call the crib, same number, same hood
It's all good (It's all good)
And if you don't know, now you know, nigga

(Insert unrelated song lyrics here)

Such a shame that such skilled art isn't being backed by good story telling

zanazoth said:
Such a shame that such skilled art isn't being backed by good story telling

Another GATW, unfortunately.

*sees downvotes*

uuuh... sooo what did you think of the ending???

alexandermugetsu said:
Another GATW, unfortunately.

May I sak what's GATW?

I dont know what I expected

What a twist!

zanazoth said:
Such a shame that such skilled art isn't being backed by good story telling

To be fair, Doxy apologized for it on their patreon. The idea of the ending was to leave it open for more to return to.

kyru said:
To be fair, Doxy apologized for it on their patreon. The idea of the ending was to leave it open for more to return to.

Oh god, you mean there might be more? Given how much Doxy has crapped on Wildehopps, there doesn't really seem to be a point to continuing.

Back in chapter 1, Nick showed a legitimate concern that Judy was way over her head on her first "sting". When he expressed that concern, Judy snarked back at him (not in a mean way, but definitely irresponsibly).

However, from that moment on, Doxy turned Nick into a Grade-A dickwad. He did not take her seriously anymore, humiliates her on-stage at the club, mocks her efforts to investigate by herself and assumes she's just in it for the sex, becomes a patron of the club to enjoy their "oral services" and ultimately just abandons her as a friend and work partner in an area of town they were specifically investigating because mammals were disappearing without a trace.

As day after day goes by with Judy absent at the morning bullpen, Nick gets to reflect on how he abandoned his partner over something so petty.

I'm not looking forward to a continuation of the story. We've already seen Judy be dominated and humiliated dozens of times now so more of that kink is just "flogging a dead horse"... oh look now she has 4 cocks in her and 2 up her ass.

If Judy somehow gets out of this, there's no partnership for her to go back to and I don't think Doxy has the writer's chops to pull off a good "Nick redeems himself" story.

I'd rather he quit while he's behind and go and entertain his humiliation fan-base with some other IP for awhile.

This kind of story appeals to more of a niche market. I happened to enjoy the story, but not everyone likes those kind of scenarios. I feel like the reason people dislike this ending is because its Judy Hopps getting corrupted, and not some other character. If this were someone like, lets say Harley Quinn, the story might fit better. As for the artwork, I'm a big fan of Doxys work, and thought he did a great job on the whole series.

Can we have another page where it turns out us seeing this comic was all a dream?

k~ said:
May I sak what's GATW?

Great Artist Terrible Writer.

alexandermugetsu said:
Great Artist Terrible Writer.

Ah thank you. Thought it was refering to a specific comic known for bad writing.

I’m more surprised about the reception of this comic’s tone than the twist itself. Then again, after seeing the XJ-9 and Toriel comic, you get numb to it.

rva98014 said:
I'm not looking forward to a continuation of the story. We've already seen Judy be dominated and humiliated dozens of times now so more of that kink is just "flogging a dead horse"... oh look now she has 4 cocks in her and 2 up her ass.

1/2 agree. There’s a lot of debauchery that can still be played on doxyJudy. But instead of smugNick with one layer personality, we’ll go back to big silhouettes that spout “mind-break hentai” dialogue.

ezgamer97 said:
I feel like the reason people dislike this ending is because its Judy Hopps getting corrupted, and not some other character. If this were someone like, lets say Harley Quinn, the story might fit better.

It’ll make more sense for the hate group sex, but it won’t interest as much because Harley isn’t as “innocent” or good-natured. Then again, a faux justice scenario could work (some of the GCPD running a train on her)...

k~ said:
Ah thank you. Thought it was refering to a specific comic known for bad writing.

Is that one a GATW?

Halfway through this chapter I opted out already and only morbid curiosity made me come back to see the ending.
Can't say which one is worse, what she imagined herself to be in or the actual situation she is in.
Cyanide or arsenic, pick your poison motherf**ker.

Yeah, imma leave this now and burn down the bridges behind me.

ezgamer97 said:
This kind of story appeals to more of a niche market. I happened to enjoy the story, but not everyone likes those kind of scenarios. I feel like the reason people dislike this ending is because its Judy Hopps getting corrupted, and not some other character. If this were someone like, lets say Harley Quinn, the story might fit better. As for the artwork, I'm a big fan of Doxys work, and thought he did a great job on the whole series.

Theres nothing wrong with catering to a niche. The issue is that these types of the scenarios drive themselves into a corner. A good writer CAN keep a story to reach a satisfying conclusion while still catering to the niche audience, but most writers aren't good writers.

Comic complete.

OBJECTIVE: Rescue Judy

soldierboyxiii said:
Comic complete.

OBJECTIVE: Rescue Judy

Result: Mission failed.

So whats with people constantly saying wait till you see whats coming? This is the end? Believe me Iv seen much worst than this.

soldierboyxiii said:
Comic complete.

OBJECTIVE: Rescue Judy

rt_pilon said:
Result: Mission failed.

SIDE MISSION AQUIRED: One of Us!

katboy333 said:
So whats with people constantly saying wait till you see whats coming? This is the end? Believe me Iv seen much worst than this.

Mostly because people don't like the way it depicts Nick and Judy as well as overall writing. Though I don't really think Doxy cares about keeping it faithful, he just wants to make a comic about Judy being super slutty. Which is fine, I like slutty Judy a lot, but its not gonna be for everyone, especially people who particularly care for the source material.

Though I do agree, content wise there's really nothing in these comics all that extreme. Worst it gets is the corruption aspect and even then its nothing compared to a lot of other stuff you can find on this site.

Are you seriously bothered by a porn comic about drugs, prostitution, moral degeneration and a broken mind? Nor was it a comic that wants to be serious (Borba) to complain that it does not follow the writing of the source / original / canon material.
Doxy has never been a cartoonist campi (mellow or cheesy stories) so knowing in advance what it is like, what were you expecting, a happy ending?
Unless Doxy really wants to do better and redeem this story, the continuation has few alternatives:
1 that everything was a nightmare (the classic cliche) and make love without any narcotic
2 that everything was real and Nick saves her by doing things that cost her employment and helping her recovery.
3 that everything from the first case is a hallucination by drugs while Nick tries to save her.
4 that Nick save her but continue to perpetuate the "sex slave" towards Judy (only for him)
Either way, there's no happy end / vanilla in this

Here's a question you should ask..."WHEN" Did she get caught because the thing with nick in the evidence room could have been all part of this mind breaking, how long has it actually been?

amarathesilent said:
Here's a question you should ask..."WHEN" Did she get caught because the thing with nick in the evidence room could have been all part of this mind breaking, how long has it actually been?

I believe it's implied that since page 1 it has been a hallucination. The "Real" part is still at the same club she was being gangbanged at in part 2. She never got as far as turning in evidence to her superiors, she never left the building, it's all been one long trip.

What about Mrs. Otterton?
What do you mean, that they break her?
She died by this cock, or chocked by this dildo?

🎵What can i say except "yikes"?

Booooooo! It really went the SMBUSA route? Get that crap outta here.

too bad, I liked Doxy's version of Nick, especially in some of the alt pages.

In fact, the drawing of this cartoon is very good, but his plot may not be able to agree with most people. Anyway, this cartoon is fascinating. I do love it. Let's hope there's a better story in chapter 4.

bdsmkong said:
"nooooo! You can't just take my characters and make them do things out of character!! That's not what they would do! It's not fair!!!" Lol dudes really out here getting upset. Furry community is a shitshow full of man-children who cry over pornography not sticking to character. Hot pages and good art. Came to jack off then go to sleep.

I agree with this. Honestly it's extremely hard to use someone else's characters and make work that sticks to their canon personalities. Especially when the amount of info we have available is pretty limited in a lot of cases. Zootopia being limited to a single movie. I mean the MLP art with dom Fluttershy does not fit her character, but it doesn't really matter tbh. Porn is porn. People like what they like. And a lot of people want to see wild things their favorite characters would canonically never do.

This comic wasn't my cup of tea personally, it has flaws like every work does, but complaining about Nick and Judy being OOC isn't really a big flaw. Especially since we have no way of knowing if canonically Judy really does enjoy humiliation or would use sex to solve a case, as the movie never even came close to that topic for obvious reasons. Porn in general is just weird and it's not really realistic to expect every single fan piece to be 100% accurate to their character especially when a lot of people want to see something unexpected. NSFW art is still art and it's no fun if everything is a carbon copy of reality.

Wait, this is just cheap Metamorphosis.

All of the comments are either one way or the other, frankly I just got bored reading it. There's nothing satisfying about it to me in terms of story but it's not horrible, there's far worse people could have read. This is just shock for the sake of shock, and some people are into that.

Grow some thicker skin and don't let a comic that has literally no meaning to the original source material get under your skin, but also don't stand for subpar storytelling.

I give the comic a 5.5/10 and the comments a 2/10, some of that shit was hilarious.

ezgamer97 said:
This kind of story appeals to more of a niche market. I happened to enjoy the story, but not everyone likes those kind of scenarios. I feel like the reason people dislike this ending is because its Judy Hopps getting corrupted, and not some other character. If this were someone like, lets say Harley Quinn, the story might fit better. As for the artwork, I'm a big fan of Doxys work, and thought he did a great job on the whole series.

The problem isn't that it's Judy - well, it is, but not in the sense you're thinking.

The problem is 1: established characters are being used but completely out of character, and 2: Not only are they inconsistent with their original characterization(which is generally somewhat inevitable when it comes to porn) they're inconsistent with the characterization that earlier portions of this comic give them.

Judy at least *sort of* fits, since "goes in over her head and ends up getting drugged/sluttified/etc" at least fits with her general characterization of not looking before she leaps, but Nick goes from "kinda shady but well-intentioned" in the original to "could stand to be nicer but means well" to "straight-up asshole who doesn't give a shit about Judy and just wants to get a kick out of watching her life be ruined", with no reasoning whatsoever as to how that jump happens.

The story went from pretty good at the beginning to outright trainwreck towards the end, but the art was still hot, at least, so could have been a lot worse.

My question is Part 4???

People kept warning a few (or ten) pages back that shit would get really nasty and stuff, I went into the last few pages fully expecting scat or the like (because a lot of focus on anal, toilets etc), not realizing it was just more nonsense being spewed, but to be honest, Im kinda glad in the end, scat isnt my thing at all. X3

I actually enjoy this ending, while also simultaneously hating it. From my perspective, it’s better that Judy didn’t willingly just become a whorebag onahole that anyone can use, but instead has been hallucinating since page 1. It does leave the ending to a plethora of ‘what if” scenarios now, since she’s not purposely doing all this all on her own. I still hate the ending because this incarnation of her is still trapped in the sex club, but at least it shows some hope for her inevitable rescue, because how do you just kidnap a highly regarded police officer, and not be found out? In fact, in the real world, this would be the greatest damning evidence for the club owners!

All 3 chapters of a good hot mess of a comic unceremoniously butchered to death by a crummy 3rd chapter ending. *smh*

rva98014 said:
Oh god, you mean there might be more? Given how much Doxy has crapped on Wildehopps, there doesn't really seem to be a point to continuing.

Back in chapter 1, Nick showed a legitimate concern that Judy was way over her head on her first "sting". When he expressed that concern, Judy snarked back at him (not in a mean way, but definitely irresponsibly).

However, from that moment on, Doxy turned Nick into a Grade-A dickwad. He did not take her seriously anymore, humiliates her on-stage at the club, mocks her efforts to investigate by herself and assumes she's just in it for the sex, becomes a patron of the club to enjoy their "oral services" and ultimately just abandons her as a friend and work partner in an area of town they were specifically investigating because mammals were disappearing without a trace.

As day after day goes by with Judy absent at the morning bullpen, Nick gets to reflect on how he abandoned his partner over something so petty.

I'm not looking forward to a continuation of the story. We've already seen Judy be dominated and humiliated dozens of times now so more of that kink is just "flogging a dead horse"... oh look now she has 4 cocks in her and 2 up her ass.

If Judy somehow gets out of this, there's no partnership for her to go back to and I don't think Doxy has the writer's chops to pull off a good "Nick redeems himself" story.

I'd rather he quit while he's behind and go and entertain his humiliation fan-base with some other IP for awhile.

Nick pulled a whole ass Shane Walsh

I enjoy Doxy's art, but good God is the writing trash. I know I shouldn't expect great writing from a porn comic, but at least have some standards

I don't like the ending as well but what you can do is forget about the last page and that way it ends with Judy quiting the cops becoming nicks nightshade sex toy forever this is a better ending and suits the story better then this ending that dosint really make sense I know this is years later lol but it's good to see I wasn't the only one disliking the ending!!! (But yeah just something to think about I like the comic tbh it's just the ending that ruins it but you definitely can remove the ending)

wait! is it a good or bad ending?

girlysofi said:
wait! is it a good or bad ending?

There is a sequel comic

plot twist!

So if the writer does humiliation porn. The detox and rescue story could be nice and humiliating, maybe a bit of dual perspective literally one thing said another thing heard, Judy in recovery falling all over nick who is like man this is not the admirable bunny I fell in love with (also "why on earth did I brush her off" unless that also was a contact high hallucination) and things like The Cure Is Dick or something. No real complaints overall, it was all very pretty, I admit this is not the first time I seen this. Sounds like they need to hire a writer but sure. Honestly better than last page coz that give up on your dreams for new dreams of being freeuse was depressing stuff.

Really hope that the comment 2 above is true, because for porn I have esix. For depressing crap I have Edgar Alan Poe literally, a dream within a dream.OG/man-knew-how-to-hallucinate

I would actually prefer a conclusion where Judy manages to solve the case but of course, this whole experience would turn her into a horny bunny who would be forced to prostitute herself occasionally to cool down her horniness.
I would rule out that Nick is the "brilliant mind that corrupts Judy" although I have no idea what role she could have instead.

I just don't like that the girl in question ends up so broken just because she likes sex

But of course, I understand that there are those who like this type of genre

And it was never updated again.

The comic is so good but the ending doesnt make me horny, it makes me sad, i wanted her to end with only Nick and not... Y'know, losing her work and all her relationships outside of drugs and sex

it’s years later but I just wanna know why there was a gator in town in the first chapter. the reptiles never came back I need closure