I’m sure he is~

I'm so excited im going to explode

He’s seen the goods, now he gets to experience them.

Pretty sure I'm gonna get some flak for this but there's no real way to sugar coat this so I'm just gonna go ahead and get this off my chest real quick.

Given the expectations the two chapters prior to this one have set for me, chapter 3 feels rushed.

Which is a real bummer given how well these two characters have been established. I'm probably setting the bar a little bit too high given that yes, this is a smut comic and I should honestly just take it for what it is.

But I really would have appreciated if a better job was done at defusing Kyra's inner conflict, with Amon laying everything out for Kyra in a way where he fully considers where he's headed with his life and his future, steering away from the cloud minded, airheaded horny teenager trope, as in:

"Look, girls don't really do anything for me. They're honestly not my thing and I doubt they will ever move the needle for me. The thing is, you're probably the only person in my life I've ever come to trust entirely."

"But we're related. You're a smart little cookie and I'm sure you understand that."

"So what does that have to do with anything? I mean, yeah, we happen to be related. That's all there is to it. To me that doesn't outweigh the trust I have on you. Believe me, I'm still kinda confused about all of this myself. But I really can't imagine just giving myself up entirely to anyone other than you. At least for as long as we're living together."

TL;DR: There's so much unexploited potential here.

Zipper goes down penis goes up
Boobs pop out penis goes in

st_spycrab said:
Pretty sure I'm gonna get some flak for this but there's no real way to sugar coat this so I'm just gonna go ahead and get this off my chest real quick.

Given the expectations the two chapters prior to this one have set for me, chapter 3 feels rushed.

Which is a real bummer given how well these two characters have been established. I'm probably setting the bar a little bit too high given that yes, this is a smut comic and I should honestly just take it for what it is.

But I really would have appreciated if a better job was done at defusing Kyra's inner conflict, with Amon laying everything out for Kyra in a way where he fully considers where he's headed with his life and his future, steering away from the cloud minded, airheaded horny teenager trope, as in:

"Look, girls don't really do anything for me. They're honestly not my thing and I doubt they will ever move the needle for me. The thing is, you're probably the only person in my life I've ever come to trust entirely."

"But we're related. You're a smart little cookie and I'm sure you understand that."

"So what does that have to do with anything? I mean, yeah, we happen to be related. That's all there is to it. To me that doesn't outweigh the trust I have on you. Believe me, I'm still kinda confused about all of this myself. But I really can't imagine just giving myself up entirely to anyone other than you. At least for as long as we're living together."

TL;DR: There's so much unexploited potential here.

I definitely agree with you, but your profile pic is somewhat ironic here

wikkler said:
I definitely agree with you, but your profile pic is somewhat ironic here

While I partly agree, I have a problem with this.

I know from experience that thinking "I'm not aroused by women, therefore I'm gay" isn't always the case. Especially as a teen with no experience. Sexuality is a multidimentional spectrum with no limitations. It all depends on who, what, when, where and how.

she booped his snoot. :3

oh god YES

I mean, judging by the story so far, by default he's going to be different 'cause, you know...
"Family Bonding" and all that sexy stuff.

zonedraws said:
While I partly agree, I have a problem with this.

I know from experience that thinking "I'm not aroused by women, therefore I'm gay" isn't always the case. Especially as a teen with no experience. Sexuality is a multidimentional spectrum with no limitations. It all depends on who, what, when, where and how.

All of these points being brought up are fine additions to my list of gripes with this comic (pacing wise) while further displaying the amount of territory this comic leaves unexplored.

wikkler said:
I definitely agree with you, but your profile pic is somewhat ironic here

You can replace this comment with , "Water is wet", “Never put yourself in a position to be made an example of” or "Do not suicide you will die!" and it's substance would remain completely unchanged.

Also while we're on captain obvious territory, feel free to suggest another avatar in case I haven't picked the proper Esix shitpost to make it anymore obvious that that is the joke sitting right in front of your face.

st_spycrab said:
Pretty sure I'm gonna get some flak for this but there's no real way to sugar coat this so I'm just gonna go ahead and get this off my chest real quick.

Given the expectations the two chapters prior to this one have set for me, chapter 3 feels rushed.

Which is a real bummer given how well these two characters have been established. I'm probably setting the bar a little bit too high given that yes, this is a smut comic and I should honestly just take it for what it is.

But I really would have appreciated if a better job was done at defusing Kyra's inner conflict, with Amon laying everything out for Kyra in a way where he fully considers where he's headed with his life and his future, steering away from the cloud minded, airheaded horny teenager trope, as in:

"Look, girls don't really do anything for me. They're honestly not my thing and I doubt they will ever move the needle for me. The thing is, you're probably the only person in my life I've ever come to trust entirely."

"But we're related. You're a smart little cookie and I'm sure you understand that."

"So what does that have to do with anything? I mean, yeah, we happen to be related. That's all there is to it. To me that doesn't outweigh the trust I have on you. Believe me, I'm still kinda confused about all of this myself. But I really can't imagine just giving myself up entirely to anyone other than you. At least for as long as we're living together."

TL;DR: There's so much unexploited potential here.

I believe i had a similar complaint on one of the last page's of chapter 2, and I agree with you totally. I'm not saying i hate the people behind the story, im just saying something like this seems like it belongs in chapter four at the very least. chapter three should have been spent exploring Kyra's conflicting thought's and Amon could have gone around searching for the truth as to why Kyra is like this by asking close friends and doing some research into her past. I mean she could have easily been emotionally and/or sexually abused considering,

1)she was the only one left from her family and had absolutely no contact with her real parent's (if there even alive),

2)not having any role model's in her life could have had her easily seen what is very wrong as "right" or "ok"

3)whoever found her, raised her in a similar fashion. and she realized what was about to happen in the end of chapter two so she stopped it before it could start in order to try and protect whatever is left of his innocence.

again, not saying this is a hate speech against the creator's and what there doing, just stating why this seems rushed and also quickly explain a example of how chapter three could be reconstructed and actually provide us with answers.

st_spycrab said:
Pretty sure I'm gonna get some flak for this but there's no real way to sugar coat this so I'm just gonna go ahead and get this off my chest real quick.

Given the expectations the two chapters prior to this one have set for me, chapter 3 feels rushed.

Which is a real bummer given how well these two characters have been established. I'm probably setting the bar a little bit too high given that yes, this is a smut comic and I should honestly just take it for what it is.

But I really would have appreciated if a better job was done at defusing Kyra's inner conflict, with Amon laying everything out for Kyra in a way where he fully considers where he's headed with his life and his future, steering away from the cloud minded, airheaded horny teenager trope, as in:

"Look, girls don't really do anything for me. They're honestly not my thing and I doubt they will ever move the needle for me. The thing is, you're probably the only person in my life I've ever come to trust entirely."

"But we're related. You're a smart little cookie and I'm sure you understand that."

"So what does that have to do with anything? I mean, yeah, we happen to be related. That's all there is to it. To me that doesn't outweigh the trust I have on you. Believe me, I'm still kinda confused about all of this myself. But I really can't imagine just giving myself up entirely to anyone other than you. At least for as long as we're living together."

TL;DR: There's so much unexploited potential here.

I and plenty others can agree it was slightly rushed, however it was established early on and a few times over that he's been ogling her since they met, the burst of encouragement is what was the real rush came from. With how Kyra is I wouldn't doubt she'd be fine with whatever, she did try to get Amon laid at a concert too so she's not only carefree in a sense but she loves her son regardless of how much she knew and now knows about him.

Sips Tea.
Wowzers

To me, it feels like things went from 0 to 60 because it was just that previous night (about a couple hours before this) when Kyra was willing to lie to avoid this exact situation. She was thinking to herself that satisfying her twink kink wasn't worth the risk of chasing off the only family she has.

That she 180'd on it so whole heartedly after all that, makes it seem a little out of character. That, and like the others have said, there wasn't any build-up to the lovey parts this time which makes it feel very sudden... Though I'd be lying if I said it wasn't still really really cute, and that this is the reaction from Kyra that I was expecting all along! And snekboop is bestboop.

sandeago said:
chapter three [c]ould have been spent exploring Kyra's conflicting thoughts and Amon could have gone around searching for the truth as to why Kyra is like this by asking close friends and doing some research into her past. I mean she could have easily been emotionally and/or sexually abused considering,

1)she was the only one left from her family and had absolutely no contact with her real parents (if they're even alive),

2)not having any role models in her life could have had her easily seeing what is very wrong as "right" or "ok"

3)whoever found her, raised her in a similar fashion. and she realized what was about to happen in the end of chapter two so she stopped it before it could start in order to try and protect whatever is left of his innocence.

...I'm not crying you're crying.

Well, she's yet to fuck her son.

@randomblackkitten

now you can start unzipping

mommyslittlesheppie said:
...I'm not crying you're crying.

These are all good points, and I’m not saying they’re bad ideas, but I get the feeling we’re over thinking this a bit? Maybe reaching into our darkest corners of our minds and overlaying our troubles on this well written story, just a bit, don’t you think?

killah_zillah said:
To me, it feels like things went from 0 to 60 because it was just that previous night (about a couple hours before this) when Kyra was willing to lie to avoid this exact situation. She was thinking to herself that satisfying her twink kink wasn't worth the risk of chasing off the only family she has.

That she 180'd on it so whole heartedly after all that, makes it seem a little out of character. That, and like the others have said, there wasn't any build-up to the lovey parts this time which makes it feel very sudden... Though I'd be lying if I said it wasn't still really really cute, and that this is the reaction from Kyra that I was expecting all along! And snekboop is bestboop.

It was not out of character, the flashback made it very clear that she was more than okay with wincest, all she needed to finally do it was approval of her son but she wasn't going to ask him because she valued their relationship more, once she finally got it she stopped hiding her true desires.

Plot twist: HE'S BEEN LYING ABOUT BEING HER SON!!!

iirmpii said:
It was not out of character, the flashback made it very clear that she was more than okay with wincest, all she needed to finally do it was approval of her son but she wasn't going to ask him because she valued their relationship more, once she finally got it she stopped hiding her true desires.

this guy gets it

iirmpii said:
It was not out of character, the flashback made it very clear that she was more than okay with wincest, all she needed to finally do it was approval of her son but she wasn't going to ask him because she valued their relationship more, once she finally got it she stopped hiding her true desires.

atrolux said:
this guy gets it

That's actually why I said "a little" out of character! Like I said, this is exactly how I imagined she'd react to his feelings, it just seems like an odd choice to have the big confession scene happen the instant they wake up. I didn't mean to imply that it's something she'd never do, the scene itself makes perfect sense! They've had TONS of sexual tension built up and Kyra's obviously an anarchic, "fuck the rules" kind of person. It's still an adorable and special moment, I'm still smiling and they're still my favorite fictional couple, it just feels oddly timed is all! If it happened like... later in the day after they've had time to process what happened last night, I don't think it would've made anyone say, "this feels too sudden."

atrolux said:
this guy gets it

I was gonna come back to say the same after it finally clicked but

_theamana_ said:
@randomblackkitten

now you can start unzipping

ooof

killah_zillah said:
That's actually why I said "a little" out of character! Like I said, this is exactly how I imagined she'd react to his feelings, it just seems like an odd choice to have the big confession scene happen the instant they wake up. I didn't mean to imply that it's something she'd never do, the scene itself makes perfect sense! They've had TONS of sexual tension built up and Kyra's obviously an anarchic, "fuck the rules" kind of person. It's still an adorable and special moment, I'm still smiling and they're still my favorite fictional couple, it just feels oddly timed is all! If it happened like... later in the day after they've had time to process what happened last night, I don't think it would've made anyone say, "this feels too sudden."

That's actually exactly what I was thinking, "why is all of this happening so early in the morning". I mean yea Amon is trying to keep it positive like nothing happened but Kyra was still very uncomfortable from last night's event's in the first few pages. I mean if the confession did happen later in the day / more detailed about why she's like that. nobody would have complained, AND it would have'd help to build some of Kyra's Mysterious background. creating possible basis for other comic's focusing more heavily on just Kyra.

P.S. Yes i know i'm really overthinking this, but the amount of room for further character development because of lack of said background is completely insane.

Time to find out if the kid's got what it takes to be a man.

zonedraws said:
While I partly agree, I have a problem with this.

I know from experience that thinking "I'm not aroused by women, therefore I'm gay" isn't always the case. Especially as a teen with no experience. Sexuality is a multidimentional spectrum with no limitations. It all depends on who, what, when, where and how.

Shit I never actually saw this reply, sorry. No you're absolutely fucking right, there's the aspec, for example. I just agreed with their criticism of the comic

st_spycrab said:
Pretty sure I'm gonna get some flak for this but there's no real way to sugar coat this so I'm just gonna go ahead and get this off my chest real quick.

Given the expectations the two chapters prior to this one have set for me, chapter 3 feels rushed.

Which is a real bummer given how well these two characters have been established. I'm probably setting the bar a little bit too high given that yes, this is a smut comic and I should honestly just take it for what it is.

But I really would have appreciated if a better job was done at defusing Kyra's inner conflict, with Amon laying everything out for Kyra in a way where he fully considers where he's headed with his life and his future, steering away from the cloud minded, airheaded horny teenager trope, as in:

"Look, girls don't really do anything for me. They're honestly not my thing and I doubt they will ever move the needle for me. The thing is, you're probably the only person in my life I've ever come to trust entirely."

"But we're related. You're a smart little cookie and I'm sure you understand that."

"So what does that have to do with anything? I mean, yeah, we happen to be related. That's all there is to it. To me that doesn't outweigh the trust I have on you. Believe me, I'm still kinda confused about all of this myself. But I really can't imagine just giving myself up entirely to anyone other than you. At least for as long as we're living together."

TL;DR: There's so much unexploited potential here.

I like the rushness,instead of a comic of a will they, won't they they just do it

notafox1 said:
I'm so excited im going to explode

Did you end up exploding

Maybe a bit rushed for their relationship, but maybe they just clicked? Like finding your soulmate. All of it may be love and connection on a deeper level than any of us understands... If such a thing might exist.

"BA-DUM BA-DUM BA-DUM BA-DUM!"

there so perfect together, also yes