damon and leto created by grimart
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A definitive sign.

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  • Holy hell, this actually keeps going, and the storytelling is pretty well done, I was down to read it from the start.

    Even tho it’s a very well done awareness comic, I gotta admit I’m hooked.

    Also, the use of certain speechbubbles having a different color whenever Reth said something off or grooming stuff was extremely clever to highlight things that usually goes under the radar for youngsters.

    I’ve been a fan of Grimart’s drawings since the first time I checked older posts, but now I respect this artist a lot more.

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  • louis-beaks said:
    Holy hell, this actually keeps going, and the storytelling is pretty well done, I was down to read it from the start.

    Even tho it’s a very well done awareness comic, I gotta admit I’m hooked.

    Also, the use of certain speechbubbles having a different color whenever Reth said something off or grooming stuff was extremely clever to highlight things that usually goes under the radar for youngsters.

    I’ve been a fan of Grimart’s drawings since the first time I checked older posts, but now I respect this artist a lot more.

    You know, I hadn't noticed that the color of the speech bubbes meant something, that's really neat. If you omit the black ones, she really does come across as a concerned and empathetic person, likely the sort of thing that got Leto to befriend her. The reader leans to suspect her right away because she pretty much only gets black speech bubbles near the start, but as you move into the more "recent" parts of the story, you get to see how she is "normally", which is an important part to show as well.

    Leto didn't just fall into Reth's "trap" because he was bored, he got attached to that aspect of her.

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  • fifteen said:
    You know, I hadn't noticed that the color of the speech bubbes meant something, that's really neat. If you omit the black ones, she really does come across as a concerned and empathetic person, likely the sort of thing that got Leto to befriend her. The reader leans to suspect her right away because she pretty much only gets black speech bubbles near the start, but as you move into the more "recent" parts of the story, you get to see how she is "normally", which is an important part to show as well.

    Leto didn't just fall into Reth's "trap" because he was bored, he got attached to that aspect of her.

    Fifteen year old, begone.

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