amra and shena created by wolfpsalm
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Page 39 of "Coffee"! Please enjoy, if you want to support this comic, please consider joining my Patreon here!: https//https://www.patreon.com/WolfPsalm

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  • To the artist, WolfPsalm:

    Every time a new page of this comes out I have to go back to the previous page to pick up the dialogue thread. It might be worth considering, if you do another comic like this, making the dialogue and interactions a bit more modular so that each page is more comprehensible on its own. This helps both with readers picking up a page after a week or so, and also bringing in new readers (because they can tell more what's going on and get interested in seeing more).

    It might help if I gave some examples. It's hard to understand how this type of modularity is important, or what exactly it means, etc.. But I only would want to if you're interested in the sort of advice I might have to offer.

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  • Is this the first time she has someone else touch her there?
    A very different feeling than doing it herself, eh? :3
    Just like you can't tickle yourself...

    Nice! Please keep going!

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