Seems to be real... unless Reth is the fireman.

Please save Leto...

hmm.

endor-7th said:
Seems to be real... unless Reth is the fireman.

*insert brave little toaster clown fireman but its a fursuit*

Wait, just last page she was fine. I get that people can clock out pretty quickly but she didn't act the least bit like she was close to passing out -- she wasn't even coughing!

Now she's fully unconscious, on fire, and there's a bottle and cigarette that wasn't there a minute ago?

The latter could just be a continuity error but the suddenness of her being on the ground is really throwing me.

You can't tell me things went to shit in the time it took for Leto to bring out the shower-head.

octophile said:
Wait, just last page she was fine. I get that people can clock out pretty quickly but she didn't act the least bit like she was close to passing out -- she wasn't even coughing!

Now she's fully unconscious, on fire, and there's a bottle and cigarette that wasn't there a minute ago?

The latter could just be a continuity error but the suddenness of her being on the ground is really throwing me.

You can't tell me things went to shit in the time it took for Leto to bring out the shower-head.

People can just conk out like that

i-fap-to-furries said:
People can just conk out like that

Feels like we're missing a page or two, wasn't he trying to save his dad?

After everything he still tries to save her with no hesitation. Leto’s a real good kid.

octophile said:
Wait, just last page she was fine. I get that people can clock out pretty quickly but she didn't act the least bit like she was close to passing out -- she wasn't even coughing!

Now she's fully unconscious, on fire, and there's a bottle and cigarette that wasn't there a minute ago?

The latter could just be a continuity error but the suddenness of her being on the ground is really throwing me.

You can't tell me things went to shit in the time it took for Leto to bring out the shower-head.

When you inhale CO2, carbon monoxide, and cyanide (which is produced from a house burning), oxygen cannot bind to your hemoglobin, and so you pass out from lack of oxygen even if it feels like you're breathing fine. She is extremely drunk though, as shown by her not coughing to irritants in the air getting into her lungs (which is a side effect I've seen in lethally drunk fire-exposed victims).

grimart said:
When you inhale CO2, carbon monoxide, and cyanide (which is produced from a house burning), oxygen cannot bind to your hemoglobin, and so you pass out from lack of oxygen even if it feels like you're breathing fine. She is extremely drunk though, as shown by her not coughing to irritants in the air getting into her lungs (which is a side effect I've seen in lethally drunk fire-exposed victims).

Okay, that makes sense.

Oh my. Wait. Are you the real Grimart?

If you are I want you to know that your art and writing are fantastic. It means nothing coming from me but I support everything you do because you are very talented and I always trust you with how you tell your stories. Everything you post is of great quality and I am happy that you enjoy sharing it.

I hope your life is well.