braver created by vavacung
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(Original Comic) DILF -XLI-

"Discouragement"

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  • The dragon needs to stop destroying cities and the kobold needs to finish their dragon mating ritual. I'm sending you my spirit energy.

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  • asdaface said:
    So what if you believe them? They're still destroying entire cities. "Yeah go dragon, kill us all!"

    There's a lot of weird people who will side with killers.

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  • zregs said:
    There's a lot of weird people who will side with killers.

    Im not on the side of raping serial killers either. are you saying rape is a viable punishment?

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  • moroze said:
    Well rough life or not. The dragon is choosing to commit evil now.
    Braver's motives are a non-point. Plus they'll make a great couple

    Also looks like Braver logged into Twitter by mistake lmao

    Great couple? I think you mean DYSFUNCTIONAL.

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  • blockhead134 said:
    Im not on the side of raping serial killers either. are you saying rape is a viable punishment?

    Stop trying to put words in what I said. I was saying there's basically people who side with killers despite how many they've killed.

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  • Ok, we bringing morals to a porn comic, so let's go hard on it. Team Rape or team Murder? Choose your sides, we're all hypocrites anyway.

    Btw I hope he Lays the dragon.

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  • Thing is, all the slander the kobold is getting isn't wrong and in the end, the kobold winning would probably be the worst ending no matter how you look at it. First of all, they were never sent to actually do it with the dragon, they misinterpreted orders to KILL the dragon. (Caused by an unfortunate cough whilst saying 'slay', making it 'lay the dragon' instead)

    So, lets say that with all the kobolds cheating, they win. Well, they rape the dragon, and the dragon is either let go and continues to ravage the lands, or is so traumatized by it they flee into hiding for the rest of their lives. There's no real way of bending this without copping out, like making the dragon 'like it' or something because...it's very clear that the dragon really doesn't want this.

    So lets say the dragon wins, it gets to go back to destroying everything, either leading to the ruin of civilizations or the call for a new hero to slay them, starting the process over .

    So in the end, the message will either be 'rape is good' or 'revenge is good', unless the kobold slays the dragon instead, in which this whoooooole thing was a pointless run around.

    Effectively, the story has written itself into a corner it can't really escape.

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  • azaru said:
    Ok, we bringing morals to a porn comic, so let's go hard on it. Team Rape or team Murder? Choose your sides, we're all hypocrites anyway.

    Btw I hope he Lays the dragon.

    Neither. Braver beats the crap out of the dragon, lets them go with a warning-- behave, or face either death or fucking.

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  • shiitake said:
    Neither. Braver beats the crap out of the dragon, lets them go with a warning-- behave, or face either death or fucking.

    Personally, I'm hoping they agree to leave each other alone.

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  • I'm personally still hoping that he decides to start treating her like a person instead of an object of lust. Maybe if he tried a more likable approach she'd actually be into him.

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  • shatari said:
    I'm personally still hoping that he decides to start treating her like a person instead of an object of lust. Maybe if he tried a more likable approach she'd actually be into him.

    As I said, "The bard way". Because nobody complains when a teensy weensy kobold serenades his way into a dragon's private (cough) chambers.

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  • If Braver was a dragon instead, would it be more acceptable?
    Since ya know, dragon mating ritual and all. Who’s to say it’s not traumatic for dragons anyway?
    Anyways, with how much games revolve on just slaughtering monsters and giant beasts like dragons, I’d much prefer the dragon live than be dead. Hopefully a more amicable end at least.

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  • I find funny how we now live in a world were rape is considered worse than murder. Even Genocidal Murder. Sure, rape is obviously bad, but this is porn logic and Braver's mentor brought in an era of peace by fucking all the races. So surely fucking this dragon for all eternity will bring peace? Simple porn logic correlation. They are probably just now seeing that maybe its wrong with that sudden diluge of Negative "Discouragement".

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  • on one side, the kobold creep with a dragon fetish
    on the other, the dragon that is nuking the fucking kingdom...

    give praise to the little bastard at least hes easily puntable.

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  • Very early on I said that this entire comic series feels pointless. Looks like everyone else is starting to see that too.

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  • dargrin~krei said:
    I find funny how we now live in a world were rape is considered worse than murder. Even Genocidal Murder. Sure, rape is obviously bad, but this is porn logic and Braver's mentor brought in an era of peace by fucking all the races. So surely fucking this dragon for all eternity will bring peace? Simple porn logic correlation. They are probably just now seeing that maybe its wrong with that sudden diluge of Negative "Discouragement".

    Right? I'll never understand the logic behind "Rape is worse than genocide".

    But oh well, I dont support either, I just wish people stopped being stupid. It's a porn comic, if it has anything to dislike people could just blacklist it.

    But no, they are special. Everything has to be done in their tastes.

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  • The dragon is a blood knight, likely with scores of pointless deaths to it's name. At that point, anything Braver does will hurt his/her karma meter about as much as a tear through Castle Wolfenstein would hurt Blazkowicz's karma meter.

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  • Ummm, you guys realize that the dragon has a cloica(?), that's not a vagina. I'm pretty sure the dragons a he? I'm confused about the'she' for the dragon.

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  • jackrabbit_96_15 said:
    Ummm, you guys realize that the dragon has a cloica(?), that's not a vagina. I'm pretty sure the dragons a he? I'm confused about the'she' for the dragon.

    If i remember correctly,many birds have cloaca instead of traditional male and female bits. I think braver said cloaca to keep playing on the ambiguous gender thing. To me the dragon looks physically female and braver looks physically male just judging by their faces, but i could be wrong. Maybe by the end of this comic we may still not know if they are male or female, it just doesn't seem like a sexual art style, but of course i could be wrong on that too. At this point im more interested in the story

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  • jackrabbit_96_15 said:
    Ummm, you guys realize that the dragon has a cloica(?), that's not a vagina. I'm pretty sure the dragons a he? I'm confused about the'she' for the dragon.

    A cloaca is everything to both sexes. The dragon could still be male or female.

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  • I don't know if I want to see him die, but... Yeah, I'm kinda on the side of "How does raping the villain make you any better?"

    And I'm kinda happy that they actually managed to play that into his character.

    Edit: Though I'm more tired of the fact that he's completely OP rather than even his convictions. Defeating her fair and square through an epic battle and then fucking her would be one thing... But he really just stood there beating her with a stick day and night, essentially just relying on the fact that he can dodge literally forever and abuse an infinite supply of healing items.

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  • warriorking9001 said:
    I don't know if I want to see him die, but... Yeah, I'm kinda on the side of "How does raping the villain make you any better?"

    And I'm kinda happy that they actually managed to play that into his character.

    Edit: Though I'm more tired of the fact that he's completely OP rather than even his convictions. Defeating her fair and square through an epic battle and then fucking her would be one thing... But he really just stood there beating her with a stick day and night, essentially just relying on the fact that he can dodge literally forever and abuse an infinite supply of healing items.

    I completely agree. He just cheesed the entire fight in such a way that I just can't vibe with. Playing ANY type of PVP game and going against a person that is unbeatable only because they hack, cheat, or spam is not fun. I'm sure a lot of us had become the dragon at some point; top of the leaderboard with the most kills and then all of a sudden you have to face off against a person who just lag switches you in order to beat you (smh). From this perspective, I hope the dragon can do something.

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  • foxreborn said:
    I completely agree. He just cheesed the entire fight in such a way that I just can't vibe with. Playing ANY type of PVP game and going against a person that is unbeatable only because they hack, cheat, or spam is not fun. I'm sure a lot of us had become the dragon at some point; top of the leaderboard with the most kills and then all of a sudden you have to face off against a person who just lag switches you in order to beat you (smh). From this perspective, I hope the dragon can do something.

    i mean, that's not a lag switch, the kobold did everything within the rules of the world. It's just a cheese build for like Sephiroth being slapped against Pinwheel

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  • somerandomvoir said:
    Thing is, all the slander the kobold is getting isn't wrong and in the end, the kobold winning would probably be the worst ending no matter how you look at it. First of all, they were never sent to actually do it with the dragon, they misinterpreted orders to KILL the dragon. (Caused by an unfortunate cough whilst saying 'slay', making it 'lay the dragon' instead)

    So, lets say that with all the kobolds cheating, they win. Well, they rape the dragon, and the dragon is either let go and continues to ravage the lands, or is so traumatized by it they flee into hiding for the rest of their lives. There's no real way of bending this without copping out, like making the dragon 'like it' or something because...it's very clear that the dragon really doesn't want this.

    So lets say the dragon wins, it gets to go back to destroying everything, either leading to the ruin of civilizations or the call for a new hero to slay them, starting the process over .

    So in the end, the message will either be 'rape is good' or 'revenge is good', unless the kobold slays the dragon instead, in which this whoooooole thing was a pointless run around.

    Effectively, the story has written itself into a corner it can't really escape.

    I agree with all you wrote. Pretty spot-on and meta-aware analysis.

    My ideas of possible alternatives, from what I would think would be strongest to weakest:
    - Giving the dragon some more complexity by having them open up more, perhaps revealing more nuanced or interesting intentions that are more true than the ones so far shown. This would enable a different path to develop. Wanting to be the best being a simplistic motivation of a one-dimensional villain worked as a joke on page 39 but constricted the character.
    - A platonic ending. Could have mixed with some of the others here.
    - The princess or anyone official appearing to clear up his orders.
    - If it did turn out that Disaster dragon was female and Braver male, then Disaster dragon deciding to fight Braver with quick but extremely intense sex and topping, winning yet changing for the better, would've been a nice surprise.
    - Both fight till age grants death.
    - Both die.
    - Someone else comes along, and that someone Disaster dragon actually wants to lay with from the get go.

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