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Umbreon with Quilava animated.
Feedback is welcome as always!!

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  • The artwork is amazing and the animation is well done, the only minor thing I’d say could be improved. Adding something to quilava’s face that makes it look like it’s feeling pleasure, as to me at least, at the moment it looks likes it’s angry at the umbreon due to the facial expression. A slight blush and maybe some exhaling indicators showing arousal and slightly heavier breathing may be a way to help this. Other than that it is an amazing piece of work. Just to add, this isn’t meant to berate either just a bit of feedback to take if you want and discard if you don’t.

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  • ignisbell said:
    The artwork is amazing and the animation is well done, the only minor thing I’d say could be improved. Adding something to quilava’s face that makes it look like it’s feeling pleasure, as to me at least, at the moment it looks likes it’s angry at the umbreon due to the facial expression. A slight blush and maybe some exhaling indicators showing arousal and slightly heavier breathing may be a way to help this. Other than that it is an amazing piece of work. Just to add, this isn’t meant to berate either just a bit of feedback to take if you want and discard if you don’t.

    Thanks for the feedback!!

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