alphonse (patreon) created by james howard
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  • I’m so invested in this story rn omg.

    But I will say where the story currently sits, the story could become really good or REALLY bad depending on the direction JH goes down. Cus Jill is sus af in my opinion, I don’t know if she told alpha the whole truth or not, cus her behavior is SUPER condescending and bitchy. (Like she could’ve been even a little understanding, like the kid is heartbroken ffs)

    Like she pretty much says “fuck off of richard, he’s mine.

    But on the other hand, if she is telling the whole truth then Richard has A LOT of explaining to do. Cus if she is telling the truth then this has probably happened before.

    Again this is a real gripping story and I love it so much and want it to succeed.

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  • If Al wants to break up and not see him anymore that is acceptable. Richard really messed up here.

    On the other hand Richard also does not seem malicious or uncaring, just like a big dummy... So if Al decides to forgive this...

    Well, it depends on how hurt he feels here.

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