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my first attempt at a 'longer' animation with a bit of buildup. a shame the beginning is so boring. and the camera is like first-person view mixed with a cinematic camera angle and ugh. im not very good at this yet!

this was available to the three persons on my patreon a week-ish early. Thanks to those few people <3

Cynder model is by Grimm.

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  • Not sure what you were worried about mate, this is really solid work! Cynder's animation is pretty smooth and there wasn't any obvious janky bits that I noticed.

    And you may think that intro was boring, but I think that little hungry look and licking lips was *just right*

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  • nironira said:
    Is this... heaven?

    🎡Or is it just a WHIIIIIITE WOMAN... A white woman's Instagram?🎡

    Sorry, been listening to Bo Burnham recently.

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  • k4rn4ge911 said:
    🎡Or is it just a WHIIIIIITE WOMAN... A white woman's Instagram?🎡

    Sorry, been listening to Bo Burnham recently.

    well then i think this is the first thing you think of while listing welcome to the internet

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  • You're being too hard on yourself. The intro is good. Sure, the animation can use improvement but it's still good enough at this stage. The only problem is what ODSTcommando has said, that being it ends too quickly.

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  • The only problem I find is:
    Easy to perfect to be real <3
    Awesome work with everything, hope we see you around with Cynder again

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  • "im not very good at this yet!"

    Yeah, you shut up. You can claim it's boring but the beginning was my favorite part. Like what you do with eyes, the quick changes. And that eyebrow / smirk combo was also very nice. And you're tongue mod is certainly more flexible than the original. The end turned out pretty nice as well. My only nitpick is how bright/white the light is on Cynder. Not sure if she's too reflective or what. But a gentler light would have helped the romantic mood.

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