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๐Ÿฒ Enjoy your viewing! :)

๐Ÿฒ I would be glad to hear your comments for support and criticism of my work. I post more content on my Patreon page. https://www.patreon.com/manfromearth

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  • This animation is amazing and really well done. one thing you could do in the future is to add some Anus constrictions (or winking) to react along the stimuli and orgasms. Implement this when you feel like you can, it will do a lot. I could go in detail with everything i would like to see in the future but I'll spare you and just leave this one suggestion for the future. Great Job Manfromearth!

    also "charizard will never be a dragon", Fuck that mindset, charizard is a charizard, amazing, and hot, (interpret pun as you like) and that's what matters to me.

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  • This was fantastic all things considered. The only bits I had some criticism for was the beginning transition where the dragon leaned forward and grabbed the charizard's junk. It was a tad choppy and felt a bit rough. The second thing I had some issue with was the background water audio being just a tad too loud. Lastly, in the last part of the animation, the camera angle felt a little too far back and focused a tiny bit too much on the Charizard's taint. Maybe have the camera just a bit further forward to focus a little bit more of the action that's actually happening, as it was kinda hard to see the sucking going on. Especially when there wasn't really anything else happening in the rest of the frame. By no means am I bashing on your animation! I'm just offering some insight into some possible issues others might have as well down the line. All in all? A fantastic animation, and I love it all. I just wish it focused a tiny bit more on the actual action happening in the later third of the video.

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  • Fucking shit that was so damn hot, HOT, HAWT!!! The sounds were fantastic, the cum shot was amazing (and cum through nose ALWAYS gets my approval), I enjoy your artstyle, and it contains on of my all time favorite dragons (and there just isn't enough lewd animation of her)!!!

    The only flaws have been pointed out by the posters before me (and worded better than I ever could) and I'm sure more practice and experience will fix them.

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  • "i will be very grateful to you"

    so grateful, in fact, i will just fucking leave immediately, as the greatest gift I can offer for your service is my absence.

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  • ashuras-wrath said:
    This was fantastic all things considered. The only bits I had some criticism for was the beginning transition where the dragon leaned forward and grabbed the charizard's junk. It was a tad choppy and felt a bit rough. The second thing I had some issue with was the background water audio being just a tad too loud. Lastly, in the last part of the animation, the camera angle felt a little too far back and focused a tiny bit too much on the Charizard's taint. Maybe have the camera just a bit further forward to focus a little bit more of the action that's actually happening, as it was kinda hard to see the sucking going on. Especially when there wasn't really anything else happening in the rest of the frame. By no means am I bashing on your animation! I'm just offering some insight into some possible issues others might have as well down the line. All in all? A fantastic animation, and I love it all. I just wish it focused a tiny bit more on the actual action happening in the later third of the video.

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  • ashuras-wrath said:
    This was fantastic all things considered. The only bits I had some criticism for was the beginning transition where the dragon leaned forward and grabbed the charizard's junk. It was a tad choppy and felt a bit rough. The second thing I had some issue with was the background water audio being just a tad too loud. Lastly, in the last part of the animation, the camera angle felt a little too far back and focused a tiny bit too much on the Charizard's taint. Maybe have the camera just a bit further forward to focus a little bit more of the action that's actually happening, as it was kinda hard to see the sucking going on. Especially when there wasn't really anything else happening in the rest of the frame. By no means am I bashing on your animation! I'm just offering some insight into some possible issues others might have as well down the line. All in all? A fantastic animation, and I love it all. I just wish it focused a tiny bit more on the actual action happening in the later third of the video.

    Thank you for your feedback.
    I am trying to solve problems with rather rough transitions in the next animations.
    The biggest problem until recently was with the sound. I simply have nothing to record normal sound with and often use sound libraries. :)
    However, I partially solved this problem when I found a good library of sounds.

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