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Blessed Are the Meek - Story Contest Winner!
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My name is not important. Not to me, or to anyone I serve. My mother called me Ellar, but that was long ago. To those who need me, I am whatever they wish to call me. I am never told how they came to me, only that they are needful, and that I am useful.
At times, I have served as a shoulder on which was laid a great burden of the soul, or of the heart. At others, I have undertaken in physical labour for the good of he who I serve. Most often, I sate the needs of others to injure, to abuse, or to lust.
I am a male mouse of common stock, with grey fur and a wispy tail. My Keepers tend to my fur and treat any injuries or maladies I suffer for my cause, and provide me with nourishment and shelter when it is not otherwise available, and for that I am grateful. It frees me to serve to the best of my power.
And within my cell, I serve well. My charges most often come to me, seeking satisfaction of their baser desires, and I am a capable outlet of their urges. Into my arms, I take their shoulders, and into my body I take their carnal flesh, and all that issues thereforth.
Or if they seek an outlet for rage, I take unto me their insults and their abuses. I suffer their injuries gladly, so that they can be whole and fulfilled. My body and my mind are theirs, and my heart truly gladdens with every thrust of arm or hip, for it means that my charge will leave me sated.
If simple labour is needed, my Keepers see to it that I am trained and equipped for the task, and I work and toil at the job until it is complete, or until my exhaustion or employer's will forbids my continuance.
This is my lot in life, and for it I am happy. I was the smallest of my siblings, though not the youngest. The runt of a litter is given no easy life, but for me, my place was always one of joy and fulfillment, rather than the anger and resentment most of my kind grow into.
I was happy to please others in any way I could, and I was happiest when serving. Once our mother passed away, I was taken to an orphanage away from my brothers and sister. The older furs felt that my eagerness to please was unbecoming in one so young, and that being isolated would give me a new perspective.
However, in the end I chose this life of servitude willingly, and went into it with open arms and a clear heart. No matter what happened to my body, I knew that I would only ever be happy if I could see to it that others were happy.
And so here I am, lying on my back while the wolf who is my charge breeds me with all the rough fury his kind are known for. I can feel his knot seeking entrance to my body, and I wonder briefly whether he'll succomb to his rutting, or whether his culture's taboo against using it is strongly enough felt in him that he'll refrain.
"Please," I beg aloud, "please don't hold back. Let yourself go, I will keep your faith."
I am not sure if he can hear me or not, his eyes are scrunched closed in a snarl, as they have been since he began. I was told by my Keepers, before he entered, that he had much he needed help with, and though I know this means he will come back to me, it saddens my heart to see so much pain in his life.
As his last few thrusts drive home, he reaches down and simulates a tie with his hand. It seems that though willing to mark my insides, he is still not willing to mate with me yet. This too, saddens me briefly, before he moans quietly into the room. I can only make out the words 'good mouse' from his mumbling, but this makes me smile anyway and run my claws gently through the fur on the back of his neck.
He mutters appreciatively and nuzzles into my neck, his hand returning to it's position mirroring the first, just by my shoulder, and his knot stays firmly pressed just outside of me. I kiss his cheek and close my eyes in my own private sort of rapture, knowing that though he may not have tied, I have still satisfied him.
And really, that's all that I need.
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If you enjoyed this story, you should check out aerotan , as he's the one that wrote it! Go tell him how much you liked it and that you want more.
I've got a lot to say here so let's get started. This story... I felt kind of bad picking it to be honest, because I believe it was the very first story sent in. But the whole time I was going over other stories and thinking about what I like about them, this story kept bubbling back into my brain.
For starters, it's absolutely perfect for going with a picture. When I want a story to go with a picture, this is what I want. It's short, it's zippy, it knows what it's setting out to do and accomplishes it nicely, it doesn't try to say too much or get bogged down in details. It says just enough to give a picture of what's going on but leaves enough out that I have room to play around and come up with some stuff myself.
But not only is it good to go with a picture mechanically, there's also something about the content that really grabbed me. The character accepts beating and loving with equal enthusiasm, willing to do anything to make everyone around him happy. While I suspect the writer didn't envision him being quite this roughed up, there's nothing in the story that expressly forbids it- even if he's generally taken good care of, a mouse that's worked hard and beaten for entertainment is going to have some scars on his body.
There's something about the juxtaposition between the battered mouse and the erotic situation he's in that really spoke to me. It's not that it's appealing... it's really more sad than anything. The story put a clear image in my mind and that image had some emotion behind it, so in my book that makes it a worthy winner.
I do hope you all approve, both of the story and the accompanying picture. Again, it was written by aerotan , so go prod him to get him to write some more if you liked it!
Runner ups!
foxiefoxums wrote what I consider to just be a good story. It had me quite interested the whole way through and I was seriously considering picking this as the winner for quite some time. Go give it a look! https://www.furaffinity.net/view/10420742/
rechan also sent me a rather nice story... twisted- it turned me on and made me feel bad for being turned on. The story was actually noted to me and not posted so I can't link to it, but if the rest of his stuff is anything like what I read, it's worth a look, if you like your scenes a little messed up. Check it out here. http://www.furaffinity.net/view/10632991/
And as always... let us know your thoughts, folks!
Colte
MemberSeems the Mouse got a little roughed-up before the sexy-times happened? Wonder if the Wolf saved him from other inmates, or is the one who did it to make him submit?
DonutJoe
MemberThe Mouse is holding onto him a bit sensually so I'd bet this Wolf saved him from a potential rape or beat-down.
Maybe this is the Mouse's way of repaying him...Even though he is a bit hurt.
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