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Had a blast trying out animation for the first time. It's always tough to look at your own projects objectively, so let me know what you think so I can grow and make better smut for you!

~Wigfritter
https://twitter.com/Wigfritter

Judy model: https://twitter.com/BDAnimare (send them some love, they're having a tough time)
Background: https://twitter.com/Rigid3d

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  • This looks very nice ~!

    I like the detail with the slow blinking, it makes the animation and movement seem more natural overall!

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  • if you want constructive criticism, the actual sex is great, but the way the eyes move halfway through makes no sense based on what appears on screen.

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  • steamengenius said:
    if you want constructive criticism, the actual sex is great, but the way the eyes move halfway through makes no sense based on what appears on screen.

    Thank you, SE! I had the eyes parented to her head to keep them still during the main cycle. I unpaired when she comes off to get a bit of eye contact in, but it looks a bit wonky when she rotates to the side. Definitely something I can fix in the future!

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  • The camera movements could use some more easing; the first one in particular starts and stops very abruptly. The character movement is quite good though.

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  • p-a-t-a-r said:
    The camera movements could use some more easing; the first one in particular starts and stops very abruptly. The character movement is quite good though.

    Thank you, Patar! That was my first lesson in lengthening a video for less abrupt movements and transitions. Then you just cross your fingers the extra night of rendering is worth it~

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  • I really like it, when the Rule34-Content seems to implement the size-difference.
    Zootopia showed these differences on several occasions.
    With Judy being smaller than the average Cop, like Rhinos and Bears and her being a giant in the smaller animals town.
    Toppling buildings.

    This here is seemingly quite a small human, since she should usually be up to his knee, standing on the same level.

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