i am trying to add it to pool but the pool name don't show up in the list, sorry i have no time to tag all. need to go bye

Hm, I think the last panel could have benefitted from being its own page, it feels more than a little rushed as it is. After all, it's not often one has a chance to survive the final boss of sex, it's worth savoring.

oh boy here we go some spikexluna action

Shops is open, yo!

Yea, typo I'm sure. Also, the dialogue is as awkward as a 2x4 to the head. And don't get me started on the proportions. Celestia is like 4x the size of an average pony.

But porn. Yay porn!

Am I the only one who gets a hard on everytime he sees one of these pages released?

Has anyone noticed that the door Celestia walked through is the same one that divided spike and Luna from being able to see each other. What I'm trying to saw is there is a mostly likely horny Luna 10 paces away from a recently sexed spike, and that door is not yet closed due to Celestia's conversation. Luna could see through there and look to see what her sister was up to at any time!

It seems like Luna is next

It seems like this is getting trashier and trashier with each page. Anyone else getting that feeling?

This was too quick. I expected more.

Mynamesjay said:
It seems like Luna is next

LUNA!!!

Drax99 said:
Shops is open, yo!

the majority is ;P "majority" is the subject of the clause, and it's singular. the average pony wouldn't know grammar that well; but celestia would, so i had her say it.

datsright said:
Has anyone noticed that the door Celestia walked through is the same one that divided spike and Luna from being able to see each other. What I'm trying to saw is there is a mostly likely horny Luna 10 paces away from a recently sexed spike, and that door is not yet closed due to Celestia's conversation. Luna could see through there and look to see what her sister was up to at any time!

its not the same building though, this building in the last panel is the changing of the sun/moon

Roarin said:
This was too quick. I expected more.

7 page limit, had to be done =I

assassinsrul3 said:
It seems like this is getting trashier and trashier with each page. Anyone else getting that feeling?

trashier? yeah, i get what you mean. it's really super hard to do a plot in which porn happens without making it a porn plot. what's more, it seems people don't expect there to be any middle ground between super artsy and super trashy.

anyway... people complain when we try to do a meaningful plot, and people complain when we try to do something closer to generic porn. so i dunno what you guys want out of us XD we're just expressing what we wanna express. it's not like we have a team of 50 geniuses and a budget of 20 million dollars.

TwilightStormshi said:
trashier? yeah, i get what you mean. it's really super hard to do a plot in which porn happens without making it a porn plot. what's more, it seems people don't expect there to be any middle ground between super artsy and super trashy.

anyway... people complain when we try to do a meaningful plot, and people complain when we try to do something closer to generic porn. so i dunno what you guys want out of us XD we're just expressing what we wanna express. it's not like we have a team of 50 geniuses and a budget of 20 million dollars.

well of any thing don't let people get you down truly your doing a grate job :)

TwilightStormshi said:
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it's not like we have a team of 50 geniuses and a budget of 20 million dollars.

Hey - come to think of it, that's not the recipe for success either. I mean - look at Futurama: they had some good seasons but the latest ones are just crap!

Keep doing it! It's the only way to know you're doing something right! :)

TwilightStormshi said:
trashier? yeah, i get what you mean. it's really super hard to do a plot in which porn happens without making it a porn plot. what's more, it seems people don't expect there to be any middle ground between super artsy and super trashy.

anyway... people complain when we try to do a meaningful plot, and people complain when we try to do something closer to generic porn. so i dunno what you guys want out of us XD we're just expressing what we wanna express. it's not like we have a team of 50 geniuses and a budget of 20 million dollars.

Well said.

*Looks at last panel*

What? Why is Celestia talking to Luna like she hates her? She's just rubbing all her insecurities and her banishment right in her face. Why would you do that? It also seems out of place on this page.

So much for pretending the Celestia in this ending wasn't a complete jerk.

TheOldOne said:
*Looks at last panel*

What? Why is Celestia talking to Luna like she hates her? She's just rubbing all her insecurities and her banishment right in her face. Why would you do that? It also seems out of place on this page.

So much for pretending the Celestia in this ending wasn't a complete jerk.

she's doing it because they're having an argument over policy and it turned into an overexaggerated sibling spat. she is being a complete jerk. it's probably not what she really thinks of her sister inside. people say mean things during arguments. :P anyway, she has a better reason for it this time.

maybe i could have explained better, but do i really have to have someone say "the princesses are having an argument?" i thought it was pretty evident from:

1. celestia trying to push the policy through on the first page and her advisor stopping her because luna disagrees;
2. spike saying on the first page "there's something weird going on here" and the guard saying that things have been "tense."
3. luna starting the argument on this page and her being a bitch too;
4. celestia explicitly saying that luna's starting an "argument."

i appreciate the criticism, but i entirely disagree with this one.

Mlp/love said:
well of any thing don't let people get you down truly your doing a grate job :)

ggdk said:
Hey - come to think of it, that's not the recipe for success either. I mean - look at Futurama: they had some good seasons but the latest ones are just crap!

Keep doing it! It's the only way to know you're doing something right! :)

datsright said:
Well said.

thank you for your kind words ^-^

TwilightStormshi said:
thank you for your kind words ^-^

You can't please everyone all the time, trust me. Just because someone is complaining doesn't mean you're doing anything wrong. I've been watching out for new pages to this comic for quite a long time now. While good, it doesn't really stand out as far as artwork or story, but the scope of it is impressive, and I've been thoroughly enjoying watching Spike "living the dream" here, and the positions/situations are pretty hot in my opinion. I mean it's clearly indicated that this is meant to primarily be fap material, and it serves that purpose quite well I think.

Keep up the good work, I'm definitely interested in continuing to see more. :)

Char said:
You can't please everyone all the time, trust me. Just because someone is complaining doesn't mean you're doing anything wrong. I've been watching out for new pages to this comic for quite a long time now. While good, it doesn't really stand out as far as artwork or story, but the scope of it is impressive, and I've been thoroughly enjoying watching Spike "living the dream" here, and the positions/situations are pretty hot in my opinion. I mean it's clearly indicated that this is meant to primarily be fap material, and it serves that purpose quite well I think.

Keep up the good work, I'm definitely interested in continuing to see more. :)

= ) being complimented by someone intelligent is always rewarding. thank you very much. <3

i used to get very down on myself over people complaining... until about page 55, i'd say :P but i just wasn't used to so many people looking at our stuff and getting SO many different points of view in comments. i was super well liked by my viewers back when i was posting a story series on yiffstar, but the number of viewers i had there was small compared to those i was to get here. i didn't even know what to expect and was blindsided. i still love comments when they actually make sense... but now i'm also way more determined to just get good at comics with kit no matter what anyone says. i strongly believe that we're gonna keep doing this for a long, long time and that the only way to go is up. : )

TwilightStormshi said:
= ) being complimented by someone intelligent is always rewarding. thank you very much. <3

i used to get very down on myself over people complaining... until about page 55, i'd say :P but i just wasn't used to so many people looking at our stuff and getting SO many different points of view in comments. i was super well liked by my viewers back when i was posting a story series on yiffstar, but the number of viewers i had there was small compared to those i was to get here. i didn't even know what to expect and was blindsided. i still love comments when they actually make sense... but now i'm also way more determined to just get good at comics with kit no matter what anyone says. i strongly believe that we're gonna keep doing this for a long, long time and that the only way to go is up. : )

and so you should! I have been reading this comic since the start.. sure there have been some rather "facehoof" moments but thats what makes a good comic, I always get really excited to see a new page come out, whether it is prons or not.

I havta say tho, on my personal oppinion you both have done some amazing work on this comic! I congradualte you both, favorate must be the CMC ending (at the moment ofcorse) I am loving the Princesses one though, could be a new favorate!

I am looking forward to reading more!

~ Kiba

I am disappoint; no facial or cumshot xP (well, I guess there technically was one with how she's jizzing down Spike's abdomen) But especially after the initial random oral, I did sorta expect something more than her just trying to get Spike off and pamper+praise him for it :P Again there's this backward thinking where they thank Spike for letting them pleasure him. (At least Celestia was hung enough to not have him inexplicably reach another cervix though xD)

Ah well, can hope Luna at least will ask for a little actual service from him. And in regard of keeping it "IC" and story wise, you could always just "solve" it with giving a hint at the final panel that all might just been a dream for him... but guessing you don't want to do that as if I recall, you want to actually highlight and promote Spike as one of the biggest sluts in Equestria x3 But otherwise a "did it happen, or didn't it happen?" pondering ending could likely keep both sides happy. Those that think it's bullshit the princesses wants to service Spike without any seeming reason would get their "chill, it was just the horny bugger having dreams" and the ones that want to see Spike breeze through everything and get laid as "ha! it totally did happen." and the middle group as a "eh, maybe it happened or not. If it did, they likely want Spike to think it was a dream to keep it their secret." ... and welp, seems like it's only Luna left of all the ponies to have a mottling or different endowment... so will just guess from the current pattern that all mares are identical in that regard.

Trailing off again, whee! But yeah, using the really simple "chill, it was a dream" leave you entirely open to just focus on the plot, while managing to shove in OOC illogical porn :P Oddly enough a almost never used plot twist though... As for the generic porn vs plot. It is kinda obvious as said. People that don't give a fuck about the story, don't want it cluttered with pages not containing sex, and people that want the plot, hate when it gets "ruined" by sex that had nothing there to do. Like I've said: You are currently in the uncanny valley :P Trying to cater to both sides, on the far end of each side, ending up with this wibbly wobbly, timey wimey stuff. You'd need to find a center, instead of bouncing back and forth between genre's and content. Atm, you are kinda trying to cater to both ex: the hardcore bondage fans and the sensual petting fans... or the m/m and f/f fans. You can't do both at the same time simultaneously, and it's something that is noticed :P

datsright said:
Has anyone noticed that the door Celestia walked through is the same one that divided spike and Luna from being able to see each other. What I'm trying to saw is there is a mostly likely horny Luna 10 paces away from a recently sexed spike, and that door is not yet closed due to Celestia's conversation. Luna could see through there and look to see what her sister was up to at any time!

That's molestia for ya. Always looking to see more action

TwilightStormshi said:
she's doing it because they're having an argument over policy and it turned into an overexaggerated sibling spat. she is being a complete jerk. it's probably not what she really thinks of her sister inside. people say mean things during arguments. :P anyway, she has a better reason for it this time.

maybe i could have explained better, but do i really have to have someone say "the princesses are having an argument?" i thought it was pretty evident from:

1. celestia trying to push the policy through on the first page and her advisor stopping her because luna disagrees;
2. spike saying on the first page "there's something weird going on here" and the guard saying that things have been "tense."
3. luna starting the argument on this page and her being a bitch too;
4. celestia explicitly saying that luna's starting an "argument."

i appreciate the criticism, but i entirely disagree with this one.

I don't buy the idea that a single argument would drive Celestia to be that cruel to her sister. Who she cares about. As she has shown several times. In the actual show.

Here? I've yet to see a single indication to show that they were ever actually close. Not with what Celestia does to Luna the next few pages.