toriel (undertale (series) and etc) created by bawdybird
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V.3 of beach bar Toriel
Where could it go from here?

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  • bawdybird said:
    How so? Ill take any criticisms to help make my art more enjoyable :)

    Can't say for him personally but my guess is the muzzle, Dood.
    Peeps are suuuuper used to seeing a more animal-style muzzle
    when it comes to za goat style from Undertale.

    Seeing the goats with more human-like features like smoother
    facial build can throw a peep through a loop at first glance.
    It's jarring, Not that it's bad, It's super unique and interesting too, Dood!
    But still jarring.

    A quick fix for me if I was in this pickle would be to pull back on the
    animalistic features in the face in favor of even more human-like ones.
    (If that was my specialty or what I was going for, Other way around for the opposite ◠‿╹)~★
    Ya know, Doing a One Piece
    Smaller Nose, More focus on the eyes and a mouth that supports the overall look, Dood
    ╹‿╹)

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