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Damn it, it's so note fair!, i mean Dad pimps me out to be gangbanged by lions while he go off and gets to mate with the girls...this is so un-fair!

not to mention with a girl my age who like is totally hawt! D:

Also what would mother say if she knew this!

Man Dad sure is cruel...also shut up not jelly on any of them for being with the other >.>
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OMFG STRAIGHT SHIT AHHHHH!?!?

here ya go you blue balled straight people xP

this page has not been edited and spell checked as ih ave to run but wanted to post it up.

an absolutly GORGEOUS page by :iconreallynxgirl: well worth the wait if you ask me!, just absolutely fantastic!

if ya have not figured by now i am a HUGE size queen, and i just love the perfect imigary of how he is reaaaaaaaally stretching her to be able to fit!

just absolutely gorgeous! Also angry sex is best sex!

Cameos by!

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    Rags

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    Look, great page. Lovely comic. Fantastic work as always. I love it, but...

    I can't stay quiet anymore. I have to say something. You spend hours and hours and hours and hours drawing these long long pages of art, but please...PLEASE...spell-check. Grammar check. Have somebody else do it. It would only take ten minutes. Ten. Minutes.

    Please.

    Okay. I'm done. Carry on.

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    Rags

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    The_Shadow_of_Light said:
    it helps to read the description.

    You mean...this part? "this page has not been edited and spell checked as ih ave to run but wanted to post it up."

    The part where you posted it like it was after hours and hours and hours of drawing the entire thing and instead of contacting anybody to proofread it for ten minutes you just HAD to post it instead with all those errors that you knew where there anyway?

    That part?

    Anyway, keep up the good work on the drawing bit.

    In fact, to avoid sounding like an asshole, I PERSONALLY VOLUNTEER to proofread your comic for you. Consider this a personal offer from me to help your comic be better. Give me your Email here or arrange to send me your art or your drafts and I will, free of charge or any stipulations or strings attached, proofread it, correct it, and give you my suggestions if you would like them.

    See? I'm actually offering to help you and put my money where my mouth is.

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    The Shadow of Light

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    Rags said:

    You mean...this part? "this page has not been edited and spell checked as ih ave to run but wanted to post it up."

    The part where you posted it like it was after hours and hours and hours of drawing the entire thing and instead of contacting anybody to proofread it for ten minutes you just HAD to post it instead with all those errors that you knew where there anyway?

    That part?

    Anyway, keep up the good work on the drawing bit.

    In fact, to avoid sounding like an asshole, I PERSONALLY VOLUNTEER to proofread your comic for you. Consider this a personal offer from me to help your comic be better. Give me your Email here or arrange to send me your art or your drafts and I will, free of charge or any stipulations or strings attached, proofread it, correct it, and give you my suggestions if you would like them.

    See? I'm actually offering to help you and put my money where my mouth is.

    Alright first off your taking this comic way to seriously.

    second, i appreciate the help for offer, but i really don't need it, as i already have a spell checker " who apparently missed a thing here n the world broke it seems"

    third, if you have not figured it out by now" with the risk of sounding offensive, i have to say is kind of hard to miss" I am not the artist of this comic but the director. (fuck yeah screw commissioner, i am a DIRACTOR )

    so yeah when the artist sends me the page, 5 min before i need to go, and i have 3 sites to post it on, and each have their respective " THIS COMIC TAKES TO LONG BETWEEN PAGES" ratio that far surpasses the " SPELL CHECK IT BEFORE POSTING IT" attitude, i do feel somewhat complied to post it, and then correct it later.

    I do believe you will survive the bad spelling, its not an award winning novel, its a "FREE" porn comic take it for what it is, and not what you want it to be.

    otherwise, glad you enjoy it.

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    Violet

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    Actually, I've offered on numerous occasions to help proofread this comic.

    Because, frankly, the bad spelling and grammar really pulls down the quality of the work, and the comic as a whole suffers for it.

    Also, I never seem to see updated and edited versions posted anywhere; once the bad text is added, it stays there. That's a shame.

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    Rags

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    The_Shadow_of_Light said:
    Alright first off your taking this comic way to seriously.

    second, i appreciate the help for offer, but i really don't need it, as i already have a spell checker " who apparently missed a thing here n the world broke it seems"

    third, if you have not figured it out by now" with the risk of sounding offensive, i have to say is kind of hard to miss" I am not the artist of this comic but the director. (fuck yeah screw commissioner, i am a DIRACTOR )

    so yeah when the artist sends me the page, 5 min before i need to go, and i have 3 sites to post it on, and each have their respective " THIS COMIC TAKES TO LONG BETWEEN PAGES" ratio that far surpasses the " SPELL CHECK IT BEFORE POSTING IT" attitude, i do feel somewhat complied to post it, and then correct it later.

    I do believe you will survive the bad spelling, its not an award winning novel, its a "FREE" porn comic take it for what it is, and not what you want it to be.

    otherwise, glad you enjoy it.

    I LOL'd at the part where you said you already had a proofreader.

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    The Shadow of Light

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    Rags said:
    I LOL'd at the part where you said you already had a proofreader.

    If it is such a piss in your cornflakes, your welcome to edit it yourself.

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    Reluctant

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    The_Shadow_of_Light said:
    If it is such a piss in your cornflakes, your welcome to edit it yourself.

    The_Shadow_of_Light said:
    it helps to read the description.

    Why do you always seem so hostile and rude when you comment? People are just giving their suggestions on how the comic could be better. The individual, "Rags", even wanted to provide you with his/her unconditional support, to only be shutdown by nonsense. There's nothing to be defensive about. We're all here to admire the quality of the comic, nothing less.

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    arca

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    lay off omfg you're being so horrible about this just because of a few grammatical errors?? wow. wow. this artist clearly works incredibly hard and you guys are throwing a fit because some words are spelt wrong omg

    they're being hostile because you're being pricks about it jeeez this isnt 1st year english class its a comic about lions banging wow

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    arca said:
    lay off omfg you're being so horrible about this just because of a few grammatical errors?? wow. wow. this artist clearly works incredibly hard and you guys are throwing a fit because some words are spelt wrong omg

    they're being hostile because you're being pricks about it jeeez this isnt 1st year english class its a comic about lions banging wow

    i agree completely! It takes "forever" to add another page, because drawing and making a new page takes time, besides, the grammatical errors really aren't that bad

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    Kooskia

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    (i'm commissioner of FutureOfthePride spin-off).
    The main problem it's not the proof-reading itself, but that Shadow and Reallynxgirl are not english-speaker: a mistake can be seen 10times and not recognized.
    Also the artist has not huge time to went back and make multiple corrections and edits on the published page: it take further time and effort to her.
    If people want to help, it's welcome i guess ...
    At least speaking of the spin-off, i've attempted to make by myself some corrections in the text: if you find mistakes you CAN corect by yourself the text and mail me.
    I guess the same thing can be done for FamilySecret.

    Remeber that such comics are not a "service" for fans, nor they prentend to be so... they're make for having fun together.

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    dogbitch86

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    Awesome. Love the female. Shads' sisters are hot as hell too. Any eta on if/when you're continuing it? Because I'd really like to see shads take the bros up his ass.

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    Naros

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    dogbitch86 said:
    Awesome. Love the female. Shads' sisters are hot as hell too. Any eta on if/when you're continuing it? Because I'd really like to see shads take the bros up his ass.

    Don't worry, Daddy will save him (for himself).

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    IAintLion

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    Your comic is awesome and I love it and a lot of times it's worth the wait, but c'mon. Its been, like what, over 3 months now? A new page would be greatly appreciated

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    Toumak

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    IAintLion said:
    Your comic is awesome and I love it and a lot of times it's worth the wait, but c'mon. Its been, like what, over 3 months now? A new page would be greatly appreciated

    agreed!

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