Hum I am wondering why or how anyone could criticize such a lovely drawing of a beautiful female such as this? She is quite lovely. Love the hybridization of all the critters into one beautiful specimen.

The one thing I do notice with her shoulders and arms is the straight lines that should be more rounded. Also the hand and fingers look very flat and one dimensional like a piece of paper laying over an object.Just some helpful hints and no criticism form this drawer of stick figures.

Youchus said:
Hum I am wondering why or how anyone could criticize such a lovely drawing of a beautiful female such as this? She is quite lovely. Love the hybridization of all the critters into one beautiful specimen.

The one thing I do notice with her shoulders and arms is the straight lines that should be more rounded. Also the hand and fingers look very flat and one dimensional like a piece of paper laying over an object.Just some helpful hints and no criticism form this drawer of stick figures.

It is things like the shoulders and the hands that I ask for criticism! This is only my 9th drawing I have ever done in my life, and I am getting better with every drawing due to people giving me heads up. I know I need to work on hands, feet, and genitalia a lot more. Thank you for the heads up on the shoulders though. I will watch out for that on my next piece.

Breasts could use some work, due to the crisp black line and their position they look a bit flat. Lines around the body could need some thickenin', right now they dpn't create a good enough contrast to the background, and they allow for white pixels to come through.

Now you have my attention! :)

Peekaboo said:
Breasts could use some work, due to the crisp black line and their position they look a bit flat. Lines around the body could need some thickenin', right now they dpn't create a good enough contrast to the background, and they allow for white pixels to come through.

So Thicker Lines for darker backgrounds?

Xch3l said:
Now you have my attention! :)

Is this a good or bad thing? o.0

_Waffles_ said:
Is this a good or bad thing? o.0

A good one!

For your 9th drawing, this is astonishing. Although I do concur with Youchus and Peekaboo, I must ask: What is that purple substance behind Veneer? Is it part of the background?

Furlux said:
For your 9th drawing, this is astonishing. Although I do concur with Youchus and Peekaboo, I must ask: What is that purple substance behind Veneer? Is it part of the background?

I was. Just a random image that I had within my "sample" pictures file. Was still learning about backgrounds at the time.