Another page already? Best snow day ever!

Gotta love how they make sex into such a fun subject. No expectations, no forced dialog, no random crazy fantasies. Just a couple seeking to spice their relationship a bit and finding pure enjoyment out of the situation without going overboard. Wish more comics were like this one. Best read I've had in months.

Bias said:
no forced dialog

are you serious

Rags said:
Where the fuck is his body? His nose is clearly behind her, she's kneeling on the bed, so his body is phasing through the mass of the bed in order to be in that position behind her.

Art!

It's hardly a stretch to imagine she's on the edge of the bed. It's quite nice that every little movement isn't explicitly drawn for once.

SirAntagonist said:
are you serious

Hey, compared to some of the other pictures with dialog on this site, this comic is pure gold by such standards

Bias said:
Hey, compared to some of the other pictures with dialog on this site, this comic is pure gold by such standards

That doesn't make it not bad :I

SirAntagonist said:
That doesn't make it not bad :I

Doesn't make it bad either. But a difference of opinion I suppose which I shall respect. But even still, do you really consider this comic "bad" in comparison by what passes for "standard", today?

Rags said:
Where the fuck is his body?

In the space between spaces. Or lying on his back next to her, one of the two.

I want to be Avery. He looks like so much fun, and I could be in the "middle" like that; it would be great!

Bias said:
what passes for "standard", today?

Standard talking.

Every piece of dialogue sounds painfully scripted. As does the dialogue in 99% of porn.

SirAntagonist said:
Standard talking.

Every piece of dialogue sounds painfully scripted. As does the dialogue in 99% of porn.

Technically, it is ALL scripted. Admittedly, it is more fluid and "real" than most porn conversations made during the act. Also, if you need to see any good in it, just compare it to palcomix

SirAntagonist said:
Standard talking.

Every piece of dialogue sounds painfully scripted. As does the dialogue in 99% of porn.

Well.... you still didn't answer the question you know.

Bias said:
Well.... you still didn't answer the question you know.

It was strongly implied that I do.

Kasmira3 said:
Technically, it is ALL scripted. Admittedly, it is more fluid and "real" than most porn conversations made during the act. Also, if you need to see any good in it, just compare it to palcomix

Placomix is the Tommy Wiseau of furry porn. Everything is good compared to it.

SirAntagonist said:
It was strongly implied that I do.

Sorry about that. I don't like to make judgments or implications. I'd rather have someone come out and just say what they feel than make an attempt to put words in their mouths. And no, while the text may seem sarcastic, its not. I genuine prefer a direct statement than implications

SirAntagonist said:
[dialogue on porn dialog]

I agree that a misplaced word has the potential to kill boners, and also do the opposite. Hell, the premise of visual novels is that a description of a sex scene can turn a slideshow into wanking material. But in the case of this comic, the writing isn't going to win any awards, but it's not meant to be the focus. It links lovingly rendered cocks to painstakingly crafted holes and doesn't invoke the image of anyone's grandmother on the way.

"...I don't recall a triple finish.''
Yes please!

WHOA! Someone hit the AC it's gettin hot in here!

Amazing comic

GarethGobulcoque said:
I agree that a misplaced word has the potential to kill boners, and also do the opposite.

I may not be a porn artist (or any kind of artist other than amateur) But you DID give me an idea. This comic DOES have good story, it's not just meet and have sex, but I think...I think that what if a story-based porn fic had moments like those, a fumbled line while trying to get one's partner in the mood? Not all have overdrive charisma, and I think that it should be reflected in a story, with a character trying to hint to an admired one that they like/love them, as said character continues to develop. Thank you, and thanks to the artist for this comic, which is certainly well made compared to a lot out there :)

itsapainfulworld said:
What if a story-based porn fic had moments like those, a fumbled line while trying to get one's partner in the mood? Not all have overdrive charisma, and I think that it should be reflected in a story, with a character trying to hint to an admired one that they like/love them, as said character continues to develop.

You make an interesting proposition, although again, it would have to be done just right. Maybe a scenario where an inexperienced lover or someone just trying to be more exciting goes a bit overboard or cliche with the dirty talk? It'd be interesting to see someone have a realistic reaction to being called a 'bitch in heat' when they aren't expecting it. Maybe she gets offended or suddenly feels really cheap, or just busts out laughing. It wouldn't kill the mood completely of course, but it'd take a page or two of actual interaction before it's back to sexing.
Can anyone recommend a comic that does this? If not, there's an opportunity for writers/artists waiting.

SirAntagonist said:
It was strongly implied that I do.

Its did not do, pastence.

And I love Avery's face in the second panale. Avery's or Averies?

TheTailsDollSummoner said:
Its did not do, pastence.

...

What?

SirAntagonist said:
...

What?

Sorry to disappoint but I have dyslexia and I always will.