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Whatever Floatzels Your Boat (Remake) - Page 02
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Page 02 of 10
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Main plot : kitsuneyoukai
Writing staff for dialog: kitsuneyoukai, Jewelwriter, CriticalPanda, 1 anonymous boi
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Page 2! :b! i almost changed the layout, just to add a slim panel of floatzel jumping into the water, BUT that came that cost of changing the original layout AND i wouldnt of done the annoyed look of floatzel in panel 3 as is.
i also changed her posture since i felt it was too repetitive, it originally was the same angle =P. im not sure about floatzel using attract.... but im going to think of it as a passive thing, like shes just flirting and it counts as an attack =P
anyway, pretty happy with this page :3 OH! and yeah i used the extra space in the 6th panel to show that she's kinda been saving herself for the trainer :V that felt like a nice idea.
CSpicyweener
MemberGuys: I wish ladies would just give us a clear sign.
Ladies:
IhateGardevoir
MemberWhat a style improvement my god
Callista Vavoom
MemberA small devil needs to appear on one of his shoulders, and a small angel needs to appear on the other shoulder, then do a tribute to Animal House. :D
Jokiu
MemberOh my God! Redoing one of your classics! I actually remember finding the original comic loooong ago.
BBJam
MemberThis is one of my top 5 of his works
(the VERY FIRST was the one with the mini dragons from the LUNAR series)
that I wanted to see remade.
I am tickled tie-dyed that the Fox went and done it!
Ragnars rock
MemberI don't get it 🥱
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