Don't rage quit on us because of typos. That's not a big problem.

If you do plotholes and inconsistant story lines...then that's when we'll have to say stop.

jewelwriter said:
Don't rage quit on us because of typos. That's not a big problem.

If you do plotholes and inconsistant story lines...then that's when we'll have to say stop.

I'm joking, mostly. Just was a little miffed when doing the reupload.
Besides, been planning on doing this story for half a year now, can't quit just because of some slight mistakes.

jaylus said:
I'm joking, mostly. Just was a little miffed when doing the reupload.
Besides, been planning on doing this story for half a year now, can't quit just because of some slight mistakes.

This story is so cool can’t wait too see what happens next keep up the awesome work

Even though we have the same bodies and desires as the Pokemon we fight their overindulgence brings more harm than good, and we mustn't allow this 'Decadence' to continue forever...

It's nice to see some acknowledgment that those desires aren't bad in themselves, only their overindulgence (in line with the idea of "everything in moderation"). But that's kind of at odds with page 3's declaration of "a world that runs entirely off the sin of Lust." This work can't seem to make up its mind on sexuality.

...something to look up to beyond the dirt, and to prove that we are more than what our base desires chain us to.

There's a big idea here, but I find it a bit hard to believe that the Pokemon didn't bother building cities and training heroes until the sex zombies showed up. (And then that building cities took priority as a response over, y'know, defeating said sex zombies...)

God damn is this embarrassing...

Let Microsoft Word be the target of your ire. Make sure that you add non-dictionary words like "Pokemon" to your user dictionary, so that they don't get spuriously flagged as misspellings. There should not be any red squigglies in your script before it goes into the pic. Make that your habit, and your work will be the better for it.

I'll repost this since the previous one is about to be erased.

Now for the big fun part:

Can you find the Pokemon?

I found so far the following Pokemon in the line up so far
Aegislash
Alcreamie
Butterfree
Charcadet (not Marked I think)
Chesnaught
Clefable
Frigagirf (Not marked I think.)
Lurantus
Lycanroc
Maractus (Not Marked)
Meowstic <female>
Nidoran <female>
Nidorina
Obstagoon
Orbeetle
Salandit (Not Marked I think.)
Sinistea
Tinkatuff
Wooloo

Can you find more?

Just noticed the Charcadet from the last part is on the front left getting corrupted