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Jarlium
MemberHey lads. Jarlium here.
So I would like to try something here in the e6 comment section.
Would you like to critique my art and help me get better?
Be direct, be MEAN. Give me your worst. I have a cast iron stomach for critique!
Beepmaster
MemberI can't visually understand at a glance from this image that Susie's shoes are heels. It genuinely looked for a moment that she had hooves, which was weird because I remember her being plantigrade.
GoteGote
MemberHey Jarlium! Your Ralsei and Susie art are absolutely legendary. That being said I'm personally getting tired of seeing these specific angles, where the actual thing going on is hidden. I get the appeal but I also think it's been done more than enough times to outlive its novelty. Wouldn't be surprised if I was in the minority here but just my own two cents.
Jarlium
MemberI honestly have no idea what sort of legs Susie has. The fact that there is cannon ones somehow surprises me.
But next time I will try to prevent that.
Jarlium
MemberFair enough. It is a respectable oppinion.
I have gained a few comments against these and a lot more in favour.
In the end I like drawing them so I see no reason to stop.
HenloFurret
MemberThe composition of Susie's feet feel unstable. Like she's either about to start falling back or that this is taking place on a slight incline. I think this may be caused by the flats of her soles leading slightly up and to the left, and the line of stability for the heels coming at an angle that points up and to the right.
Jarlium
MemberSpot on, it would quickly be fixed if i were to rotate the image 2 degrees.
GoteGote
MemberCompletely fair. I'll honestly just be hoping for more of it with Ralsei and Susie at least
parathedragon
MemberI think your art is generally good, but it’s seriously annoying to constantly see the same repeated tropes in all your art. The same cheesy text message conversations, the same foot-level pictures where everything is out of frame, the same magic fleshlight stuff. It’s a very low effort way of making popular NSFW art that hits the algorithm here, and i’m sick of it. I’d like to see you branch out more often. Because, when you do, it’s actually very good.
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Jarlium
MemberThis one warrants a bigger response.
There is a few factors at play here. If you look at the text messages in particular a big reason is because honestly. They sell VERY well. If you pay attention all but 1 of the latest 20 has been commissions or YCH.
And that one is a YCH that did not sell <.<
The second is that i have been working on a comic. This meant that for several months I did not accept big commissions. So that meant I did more small stuff.
With this comic being 99% done you can expect to see more big stuff in the future :D
The third is that small pieces allows me to experiment more, be it with shadows, colours or just tweaking one very small detail in my process. I like to consider that one of the reason why I improve fast.
And this is the most important one. I am a fundamentally lazy productive person. Oxymoron much huh. What I mean by that is that I LOVE working on art, I LOVE giving it as much details possible and I LOVE giving my entire soul and effort into any given piece.
I Just don't like to work too long on a piece. Which leads to these leg pictures, butts or portals.
Now that I have listed the reasoning. I want to state the truth that you are right. It is relatively low effort.
Kriap
MemberRalsei's text is significantly worse to read compared to Susie's due to lower contrast (blackish text with black outline on dark grey background. It would probably be fixed with light outline.
pixers
MemberYour art is great, but I really think you should show off the actual deed going on, stuff like this gets hard to imagine after a while
DarkSlifer
MemberWell that's something I did NOT expect stumbling upon at 3am XD
The people above me are definitely right, the Chat messages, Portals and Epic-poggers-amongus poses do get quite repetitive.
Of course you're doing it, because it sells and I gotta say, I too always get a little Dopamine Boost when I see a new one of your Just-Texting posts. In fact I actually enjoy the "cheesy" texts and get a good chuckle out of most of them.
I've not really seen anyone else do these kind of pictures so I don't mind that you are producing them in such mass amounts. I think it's a really neat way to add a little story to an otherwise more generic image.
Ok the Epic-Poggers-Amongus ones i will call them, because I think that's the image that got this "cropped everything out but the legs" popular.
YES the pose is overused
YES the Meme is overused
YES I still think it's hot ;3
At least so far that I am a fan of leaving some things to the imagination, not explicitly showing the dicking can (at least in my humble opinion) make situations way hotter!
BUTT it does not always have to be the exact same pose for this. For variety, you could crop other parts as well and get a similar effect.
The Portals, oh boy...
In the past I've found myself to be a big fan of portal panties and all the shenanigans that come with it.
And that is pretty much what I think is lacking from the portal stuff you draw, All the crazy, embarrassing and otherwise unique situations that arise, when someone is unexpectedly shoving 30inches in you through a portal.
I love to see the reactions to this on both sides and how they might be trying to hide it etc.
To kinda stay on that topic, I would absolutely love to see more faces from you, all the cute expressions and emotions in them.
A well drawn expression in some characters face can tell a whole story and be way more sexy than any Genital.
Anyways, you're drawing great thighs, butts, hips, dicks, and so on, man keep it up^^ sorry for the long text
FreakyFox372
Member1. The characters color look too pastel-like to me (unless that's an art choice). 2. Ralsei's text is almost impossible to see because the text is too dark (Should've made it white or at least grey ish.) 3. I feel like the shot is too low, like maybe up to the thighs so you can really tease the viewers and keep the "implied sex" vibe, plus you then get more space to draw. Which can be a double edged sword (Good - More space is more things to add and make it look better/Bad - More work, being an artist is hard.) 4. Too little dialogue, adding a little bit more text would add a lot. 5. (Concept idea, Don't have to add) You could add small boxes in the corners or wherever and add the character's orgasm/pleasured face. Would add just that much more feeling into the art.
Oh! And to add to your posts in general, after doing an evaluation and reading the comments. You should definitely add a few more posts of actual fully uncut sex. Or (even better) add an extension post to a previously cutoff one. If you do, do this, please can you make one for this post. I loved this one, Link: https://e621.net/posts/5275823?q=jarlium
One last thing, I lot of people do like these, so just keep in mind that you can make these types of drawing once in a while. Just don't make it constantly the same thing or else it'll get repetitive and less exciting. Add some flavour, some spice. Make it different, so what if it fails, that's the point of any career, mess up and learn so you can make it better.
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FreakyFox372
MemberHowever Please don't feel pressured into working extremely hard. Artists get burned out very quickly, and I've seen some gold artists getting buried because they got burned out and couldn't make art to the demands. I really don't want that for you.
NuTTy Mikey
MemberI came to this multiple times in one sitting
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